英语基础作文2 给要去出国的同学一封信

基础作文练习（2）Doremember

thewritingprocedures:

Step1:Listthekeypoints.Step2:Makeupsentences.Step3:Formapassageandpolishit.1.写信要注意：1)格式(format)&

2)如何提建议？2.掌握“列举”时常用的结构。3.审清题目要求，以免遗漏要点。(本次作文中有同学漏了“你的祝

愿”“remainmodestand

outgoing”要点)4.把握语境，准确措辞。Howtobeginanadviseletter?Dear…I’mreallygladtohearformyouand

knowhowyouaregettingon.Hereare

sometipsforyou.

1.开门见山，点明意图注：本文是给出开头结尾的，要审题，

并注意衔接。1.Leavethereadersagoodimpression

withagoodlayout:Howtowriteanadviseletter?2.Howtolistyouradvice： 表列举：

Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally…,First,…Second,…FinallyOntheonehand,ontheotherhandTobeginwith/Tostartwith/Firstofall,…Then…Finally/Eventually,…

表递进：

furthermore;moreover;

notonly...butalso...;

inotherwords;

besides;meanwhile;

atthesametime；

(注意连贯（coherence）和逻辑(logic)，合理使用连接词或短语）

3.Aperfectending!（简明）Inaword,Ihopeyouwilladaptquicklyto/adjustyourselftoyourlifethere.Anyway,Ihopeyoucangetused

toyournewlifeandgetalong/onwellwithyourclassmates.4.Mindyourwordingandusevery

politeterms!1)写的是建议和忠告（不是命令,must??）。2)写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点(人称：youandme/I)；写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告(人称：youandwe/us)。3)注意：写信的原因明确，建议简明扼要，建议的理由入情入理，语气要礼貌。Practicewordingbycorrectingthemistakesinthefollowingsentences:1.Iwishyoucangetonwellwith

everything.Ihopeyoucangetonwellwith

everything.Iwishyoucouldgetonwellwith

everything.如何使用hope和wish？

hopeorwish?Ihopeforacar.我希望买部车。Iwishforanairplane.我很想有架飞机。Ihopeyou'llbebettersoon.IwishIweretenyearsyounger.WewishyouahappyNewYear.（wish可跟双宾语和复合宾语）Iwishyoutohaveagoodstaythere.2.Isuggestyoumakingmore

friendsamongyourclassmates.Isuggestyou/yourmakingmorefriendswith

yourclassmates.

Isuggestyoumakemorefriendswithyourclassmates.

makefriendswithsb.

3.Ihopethesesuggestionsareabletohelpyouenjoyyourlife!Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyouenjoyyourlife!

情态动词的使用：1.表可能性用can；beabletodo指某人能够做4.First,youcangetfamiliarwiththe

lifestyle.Youcanmakemorefriendsassoon

aspossible.First,youshouldgetfamiliarwiththe

lifestyle.Youshouldmakemorefriendsassoon

aspossible.

情态动词的使用：

2.提建议用shoulddo;oughttodo;

hadbetterdo;besupposedtodo5.Doasthelocalpeopledoandrespectthecustomstheresothatyoushouldgetused

tothenewlifethere.Doasthelocalpeopledoandrespectthecustomstheresothatyoucangetus