2024届高考英语写作提升指导课件(共17张PPT)

第第页2024届高考英语写作提升指导课件(共17张PPT)(共17张PPT)

写作教学反思

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写作提升指导

1班一月份月考作文分析

得分2524232221

人数025115

平均分：19.5

写作难点调查所占比例（%）(多选)

审题不准确、偏题12%

不会使用高级句型42%

话题相关词汇不会拼写30%

其他

高考作文评分标准

第五档(很好)；(21-25分)

1.完全完成试题规定的任务。

2.覆盖所有内容要点。

3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

※写作提升

一、词汇升级

词组优先

①SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.

→SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.

②Youreffortswillbeveryimportant.

→Youreffortswillbeofgreatimportance.

→Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.

2.避免重复

①Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.

→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.

②Ithinkdoingsportsisbeneficialtoourhealth…Ialsothinkthatwhatweeatmatters.

Ithink→Ibelieve/Iamconvincedthat

3.免落俗套

Itisdifficulttodosth→

Itiscoldoutside→

Sheisabeautifulgirl→

Thereisabigsculptureinthepark→

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challenging/tough

freezing

charming/attractive

huge/giant

二、句子结构升级

1.从句（定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句）

2.倒装句（only/否定词在句首）

3.强调句

4.非谓语结构

5.双重否定

写作常用句子结构

IheardthathewouldcomeandIwasexcited.

→Thenewsthathewouldcomemademeexcited.

→Whatmademeexcitedwastohearthathewouldcome.

Wecanmakegreatprogressinthisway.

→Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegreatprogress.

Wecanmakegreatprogressinthisway.

→Itisinthiswaythatwecanmakegreatprogress.

IheardthathewouldcomeandIwasexcited.

→Hearingthathewouldcome,Iwasexcited.

Wemadegreatprogresswithhishelp.

→Wecouldn’thavemadegreatprogresswithouthishelp.

Ex1.Polishthesentences

Iwillrememberhiswordsforever.

→Iwillneverforgetwhathesaid.

→NeverwillIforgetwhathesaid.

→ItiswhathesaidthatIwillneverforget.

2.Wecanprotecttheenvironmentinthisway.

→Onlyinthiswaycanweprotecttheenvironment.

→Itisinthiswaythatwecanprotecttheenvironment.

3.TuYoyoisafamousscientist.ShewonTheNobelPrizeinMedicinein2023.

→TuYoyo,afamousscientist,wonTheNobelPrizeinMedicinein2023.

→TuYoyo,whoisafamousscientist,wonTheNobelPrizeinMedicinein2023.

4.WhenIsawthehorse,Ibegantocheerup.

→WhenIcaughtsightofthehorse,Icouldn’thelpcheeringup.

→Seeingthehorse,Ibegantocheerup.

5.IfoundthathewassuchanexcellentsingerandIwassurprised.

→Findingthathewassuchanexcellentsinger,Iwassurprised.

→Whatsurprisedmegreatlywastofindthathewassuchanexcellentsinger.

→Thefactthathewassuchanexcellentsingersurprisedme.

Ex2.Polishthecomposition.

假设你是李华，今年6月高考之后将有一个较长的假期。请根据下列要点，给你的米国朋友John写一封Email，谈谈你的暑期计划。要点如下：

1．聚会；

2．旅游；

3．学习某种技能。

DearJohn,

HowiseverythinggoingAsyouknow,I’llhavealongholidayaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination.

Iexpectthesummervacationverymuch,becauseI’vealreadyhadagoodplan.First,Iwillgettogetherwithmyfriends.Ialsoplantotraveltootherplacestoexperiencedifferentculturesandmakesomenewfriends.What’smore,Iwilllearnamusicalinstrument,becauseIamreallylikemusic.Aspartofmysummerplan,Iwillpassthedrivingtestforthedrivinglicense,too.

Ithinkitwillbeagreatholiday.

Yours,

LiHua

Iamlookingforwardtothesummervacation,forwhichI’vealreadycomeupwithagoodplan.WhatIamgoingtodofirstistogettogetherwithmyfriends.Ialsoplantotraveltootherplacestoexperiencedifferentculturesandmakesomenewfriends.What’smore,Iwilllearnamusicalinstrument,becauseIamreallyfondofmusic.Passingthedrivingtestforthedrivinglicensewillalsobeapartofmysummerplan.

Iamconvincedthatitwillbeanunforgettableholiday.

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