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图表作文开头段写法开头段写法：改写/转述题目同义替换1.同义词替换2.关键词词性、位置转换。3.时间、地点改写。4.名词和从句之间相互转换。第1页

1.同义词替换。（关键词词性、位置转换。）第2页ThetablebelowshowstheproportionofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.FamilytypeProportionofpeoplefromeachhouseholdtypelivinginpovertySingleagedperson6%Agedcouple4%Single,nochildren19%Couple,nochildren7%Soleparent21%Couplewithchildren12%Allhousehold11%第3页原题：ThetablebelowshowstheproportionofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.改后：Thefollowingchartdescribesthepercentageofdiversetypes（同义词替换）ofpoorfamilies（改变关键词位置和词性）inAustraliain1999.第4页图表作文开头段惯用替换1.show:(10种)give,describe,demonstrate,outline,indicate,reveal,present,illustrate,offer/provideanoverview

of…,

compare第5页2.Information:data,statistics,numbers,figures,3.proportion:percentage,share

4.types:kinds,divisions,sorts,categories,aspects,classifications

第6页2.时间、国家改写。第7页 原句：Thegraphbelowshowstheunemploymentrates

intheU.S.and

JapanbetweenMarch1993andMarch1999.

时间改写：

betweenMarch1993andMarch1999duringtheperiodfromMarch1993toMarch1999.

地点改写（详细概括）intheU.S.andJapan:

intwodifferentcountries第8页3.名词和从句之间相互转换第9页

Thegraphbelowshowstheunemploymentrates

intheU.S.and

JapanbetweenMarch1993andMarch1999N.howN.+V.(change/fluctuate)

unemploymentrates

howunemploymentrateschanged第10页总结开头段写法：改写/转述题目同义替换1.同义词替换2.关键词词性、位置转换。3.时间、地点改写。betweenAandBduringtheperiodfromAtoB地点改写（详细概括）4.名词和从句之间相互转换。N.howN.+V.(change/fluctuate)第11页1Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.

练习：第12页原题：Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries改写1：Thegivenlinechartcomparesthepercentageofagedpeople

inJapan,SwedenandU.S.A.duringtheperiodfrom1940to2040.改写2：Themainconcernofthefollowi