专题12 情绪-备战2022高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题答案解析)

备战2022高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练

（高考模拟+名校真题）专题12情绪（2021.山东烟台•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Areyoureadyforourwalk?”GrandmaaskedtheusualquestioneveryFridayevening.“Ofcourse,weare!"Weshoutedexcitedly,readytotalkabouttheendoftheweekandfillGrandmainaboutourweek.Growingup,mysistersandIalwaysknewGrandmahadheartproblemsandcouldn'tdoanythinghard,butwedidknowshewoulddoanythingtospendmoretimewithus.Whetheritwaswandersaroundtheblockorwalkstothelibrary,Grandmawastherebyourside.WhenIwasgoingintosixthgrade,weweretoldthatGrandmaonlyhad2%heartfunction.Herheartwasn'tbenefitingheranymore,butshefoundoutthattherewasawaytolivelonger:anIVAD.Itisaheartpump（起搏器）thatreplacestheheart,basically,abatteryinsteadofaheartandit'sconnectedtoabatterypackbyatubethatconiesoutoftheside.Grandmawouldbecomearobotwithnoheart!TheToledoHospital,theonlyhospitalnearusthatcoulddothissurgery,offeredtodoitforGrandma.She,obviously,agreed.Thegreymorningofthesurgerywasroughforourfamily,aswewokeupbrightandearlytodrivetothehospital.Thatcarrideleftmewithworriedthoughtsracingthroughmymind:WillGrandmabeokay?Willweevertakeanotherwalkaroundtheblock?Whenwearrivedatthehospital,weknewexactlywheretogo,aswe'dbeentheremanytimesbefore.Aftergoingthroughthosefamiliardoorsandupthestairs,mymomandIwalkeduptothenurses'deskandaskedforGrandma.“Oh,Mary?”Anurseanswered."She'soneofthenicestpatientswe'vehad."Thenshedirectedustothewaitingroomandtoldusthatonlytwoofuswerepermittedtogointotheward（病房）atatimetosaygoodbyetoGrandmabeforeshewentinforsurgery.注意：续写词数应为150左右：请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ThelasttwopeoplewereGrandpaandme.Finally,afterthelongestmorningofmylife,thedoctorenteredthewaitingroom,smiling.2.（2021.重庆南开中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。BettertoGivethantoReceiveWhenaspecialoccasionarrives,agiftoftenfindsitswaytoadoorsteporanofficedesk.Butonceinawhile,apresentarrivesatanunexpectedmomentasareminderthatsomeoneisthinkingaboutus.WandaAndersonrememberssuchagift.Therosebusheswerefinallyinfullbloomthatday.SeeingrosesalwaysbringstomindWanda'schildhoodmemories.Tothisyounggirl,thoseflowerswerealuxury."Weneverhadmoneytobuyextrathings,soevenatiredrosewassomethingtocherish,"Wandasaid.Nowadays,tohaveabackyardfilledwithmanydifferentrosesispureenjoyment.Wandaespeciallylovestheveryfirstblooms.Herhusband,Dale,devotedlytendstherosesandknowsthislittlefactabouthiswife.So,onthisparticularmorning,hepickedtheveryfirstflowersofspring,freshfromthegarden,justforWanda.ButasDalecameback,hewasmetbyaneighborwhohaddroppedby.Asthewomanturnedtogo,Dalegraciously（有风度地）handedtherosestoher.Eventhoughtheirvisitorinsistedshedidn'twanttotakethem,shewasrepeatedlyassuredthattheflowerswereherstokeep.ItoldherIwashappyforhertokeepthem,butIreallywasn't,"Wandasaid,recallingtheemotionsshewasfeelingrightthen.Seeingherverypreciousfirstbloomsgooutofthedoorfilledherwithregret.Throughouttherestofthemorning,Wandaarguedwithherself,knowinglogicallyitwas“bettertogivethantoreceive.Nevertheless,shewishedshecouldhavekepttherosesforherself.Laterthatday,thecouplejustarrivedatthepostoffice,wheretheywereabouttoparkthecar.1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Then,withoutwarning,abunchofmulti-colouredrosesappearedatthecar'swindow.Fortherestoftheday,shewashappyandmoved.（2021.山东枣庄•一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnarainynightinMarch2013,myhusbandReecewentouttogetaboxthathehadforgotteninhiscar.Onhiswaybackinside,henoticedasmallshadowmovingonthedriveway.Hewalkedtowardsitquietly,andfounditwasasmallhedgehog刺猬）,allwetinthegrass,eatingmud.Reecequicklyremovedhisjacketandpickeditup.Thehedgehogwasveryweakandunabletomoveaboutquickly.Buthedidnotseemtobefrightened;nordidheresistbeingscoopedup（抱起）.Oncehewasinside,Reececalledouttome,sayingthathehadsomethingthatwouldmakemyheartmelt,andhewasright!WenamedthehedgehogAlf,because,justliketheTVshowcharacterofthe‘'80s,hecameoutofnowhere.And,likeAlfthealien,thislittlehedgehogwasamazinglyintelligent.Notonlydidhelearntoeathisdinneranddrinkwaterfromhisbowls,buthealsolearnttowaitforusinsidehislittleindoorcubbyhouseandhopintohispetcarrierwheneverwetookhimoutwithus.Alfknowsusverywellandrecognizesbothourvoices.Hedoesnotrollintoaballorputhisspinesup.Everydayheallowsustopathim.Helovesplayingwithpaperandtowelsandwillbiteandtugonthebedsheetsifgivenachance.Likeallpets,Alfloveshistreats,inparticularsmallpiecesofsugar-coatedbiscuits.Unfortunately,inApril2014,Iwasinacaraccidentandhadtospendtwomonthsinthehospital.Andboy,didImissAlf!ReecetoldmethatAlfwouldsearcharoundthehouseforme,checkinginplaceswhereI'dnormallybe,suchasmydesk,myfavoriteseatinfrontoftheTVandevenmysideofthebed.注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Oneevening,Reecesetupavideocallformefrommyhospitalbed.IcannotdescribethefeelingwhenIarrivedhomeandsawhislittlefaceagain.（2021.辽宁•一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iusedtohaterunning.Itseemedtoohard,andpushingoutsidemycomfortzonewasnotsomethingIwasraisedtodo.Infact,Iwouldn'thavebecomearunnerifitweren'tformyhusbandCharles.Hehadbeenaseriouscompetitiverunnerformanyyears.Butseveralyearsago,hequittedrunningforsomereason.Afterourmarriage,hewouldn'tstoptalkingabouthowmuchhemissedit."Sostartrunningagain,whydon'tyou?"Iwasgettingtiredofhearingaboutit.Sohepickeditupagain,andafterayearorso,Istartedtojoinhimatthetrack.Justafewweekslater,Charlessignedusbothupforafive-kilometerraceinmycity.Ihesitatedaboutdoingit.Afterall,itwastoosoon.Butontheraceday,thereIwas.Assoonasthegunwentoff,thousandsofrunnerspushedforward.Thefirstkilometerwastootoughforme."Idon'tthinkI'mgoingtomakeit."Iwasalreadybreathingheavilyandpainfullyawareofthegroupofrunnerspoundingpastme."No,you'redoinggreat",saidCharles.Hewastryingtoencourageme,togetmefocusedonsomethingotherthanmydiscomfort."Ican't,"Isaid,inaweakvoice.Hetriedadifferentwaytopersuademe."Justmakeittothathouseandlet'sseehowyoufeel."Ihadtocontinue,sweatingallover.AfteranotherminuteIsawthethree-kilometermark.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatIwasdyingandthatmyhusbandwastorturing（折磨）me.Miserabledoesn'tevenbegintodescribehowIfelt.Andtherewaspain,somuchpainthatIwasonthevergeofbreakdown."You'llbefine.You'vegotlessthanakilometertogo,"Charlesshoutedloudly.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iroundedacorner.IhadmyarmsheldhigherwhenIpassedthroughthefinishline.（2021.河北邢台•一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Hollywasconfusedassheopenedthebirthdaypresentfromherbestfriend.Susan—itwasatwelve-by-eightinchdarkbluecarpet.Her“thanks”washardlyheardasHollytriedhardnottoshowherdisappointment.Thenextmorning.IcarriedakitchenrubbishbagoutsideonlytofindSusan'scarpetlyingthere.Iimmediatelyreachedinandpulleditoutoftherubbishcan.Aftergivingitabrushing.Ibroughtitintothehouseandputitaway.BeforeHolly'sbirthday,Susanhadbeenaregularvisitorinourhome.ButsuddenlyIrealizedthatithadbeennearlythreeweekssincewe'dheardthementionofSusan'sname.Imissedherwarmsmileverymuch.“Susaninvitedustogotoherhouseafterschooltomorrow.“Hollysaidassoonasshearrivedfromschool.FromhervoiceIsensedshewaspleasedwiththeinvitation.Weweretravelingalongthewindingcountryroadthatledtoherhousethefollowingday.OnthewaySusantalkednervouslyaboutherfostermomandtheseventeencatstheyhadtakeninandcaredfor.Whenwecametoastop,Susan'sfostermom—whointroducedherselfasGlenda—gaveusawarmwelcome.Susanguidedusthroughthehouse.Sheproudlyshowedusherroom,whichwasonlydecoratedwithsomeshabbyusedfurniture.IfollowedSusan'sfostermom,Glenda,intothekitchen.Afterclearingasmallarea,Glendapoureduseachacupofblackcoffeewithhertremblinghand.Thenshebegantorelaxaswedrankourcoffeeandchattedabouthercats.HereyesshoneassheshowedherfondnessforSusan.Butherexpressionturnedbluewhenshereferredtothegirl'spastInaninstant,Icametorespectthiswarmheartedwomanwhohadopenedherhometoayoungergirlandtiedhardtomakeadifferenceinherlife.注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Asdaylightbegantofade,weofferedourthanksforthevisitandsaidgoodbye.“Isthiswhatyouwerelookingfor?”（2021.江苏南通•二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.Iwaswalkingdownthemuddyroadonedaywhenmycellphonerang.Achild'svoiceontheotherendspoketomesoftly,"Dad,pleasecomehacksoon.Imissyousomuch!”Unconsciously,Iknewitwasawrongnumberonceagain.Idon'thaveasingledaughter.Ijusthaveasix-year-oldson.Itisnotunusualtoreceivethiskindofcallsnowadays,soIrepliedrudely,"You'vedialedthewrongnumber!”andthenhungupinanger.Duringthefollowingdays,Igotthesamecallnowandthen.Itdisturbedme,soIeitherrejectedherorhunguprightawayrudely.Icouldn'thelpcomplainingaboutthis,“Whatanimpolitegirl!Howcanshecallmeupoverandoveragain?”How1wishedthelittlegirlwouldstopcausinganytroubletomesomeday!Suddenly,thephonerangupagain.Itwasfromthesamegirl-Itseemedthatshewouldnotgiveupuntilshegotananswer.Sheconstantlycalledmeup.EvenifIdidnotgiveherananswer,shestilldialedmynumberfromtimetotime.EventuallyIunwillinglyansweredthephone.1heardtheweakvoiceofthatlittlegirl,“Dad,pleasecomebacknow.Imissyousomuch!Momtoldmethiswasnotawrongnumber.Itisyourcellphonenumber,right?Dad,Iaminsomuchpain!Momsaidyouweretoobusytotakecareofme.Sheistiredoutfromlookingafterme.Dad,Iknowyouarebusy.Ifyoucannotcomehome,pleasekissmeagaininthephone,OK?”Theinnocentrequestwasdifficulttoreject.Imadealoudkissintothephoneandheardaweakvoicesaying,“Thankyou....Dad,Iamso...happy,so...happy1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.Icouldn'twaittoaskthewomanhowherdaughterwas.（2021•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Asachild,IclearlyrememberedwatchingthePBScartooncharacterArthurgetglasses.Thepoorguyfeltashamedandwaslaughedatbyotherkidsduetohisglasses.SoIwasthankfulthatIhadgoodeyesight.However,whenIenteredtheeighthgrade,Icouldnolongerseeveryclearlythewritingontheblackboard.Luckily,Iwasusuallyseatedinthefrontoftheclassroom,andmystudywasnotaffected.SoIdidn'tturntoglasses.Duringmyfirstyearinhighschool,myeyesightbecamepoorer.Myeyeswereexamined,andthedoctordeterminedthatmyeyesightwasquitebad.Iwouldeitherhavetowearglassesfulltime,ortrycontactlenses（隐形眼镜）.SinceIhadwatchedthecartooncharacterArthurbefore,Iwasafraidtobejudgedbyothersduetomyglasses—itmademebelievetheglasseswouldaffectaperson'sbeauty.Andbeingateenagegirl,Icaredmuchaboutmyself-image.Besides,atthattime,therewerefewstudentsaroundmewearingglasses.SoIchosetowearcontactlenses.Ifelttheywouldnotaffectmyappearance.Onthecontrary,theywouldmakememoreattractive.Andafterwearingcontactlenses,myentireworldwastransformed.Treesactuallyhadleaves.Peoplearoundmeshowedclearexpressions.Iwasoverjoyedatmynew-foundsightandappearance,andIhadmoreself-confidence.Butwhenmyjunioryearcamealong,Ibegantohavetroublewithmyeyes.Onceinawhile,thecontactlenseswouldirritate（刺激）myeyes,almosttothepointwherethepainwasunbearable.Itwouldtakemethirtyminutesjusttogetthelensesincomfortablyeveryday,whichmademesoupset.Withtimegoingby,thepainonlygotworse.Inspiteofendlessvisitstothehospital,mydoctorfoundnothingwrongwithmyeyes.Hetriedcountlessmediationstoeasemypain,However,noneofthemworked,andtherewasnothinglefttotry.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:HesuggestedthatIwearmyglassesfull-time.Paragraph2:Laterinmysummercamp,Imetaveryoutgoinggirlwhoalsoworeglasses.（2021•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内界和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnJuly8,2017,eightmembersofafamilyintotal,wereenjoyinganeveningtogetheratthebeachinPanhandle,Florida.Asthesunsankloweronthehorizon,thetwoboysNoah11andStephen8swamintothewaveswithoutthegrown-upsnoticing.Soontheyrealizedthattheoceanhadpulledthemintothesea.Aftertryingandfailingtoswimback,theystartedwavingandscreamingforhelp.Butthelifeguardshadbeenoffdutyfortheevening.TheboyshadbeenstrugglingforseveralminuteswhenJackyandTabatha,acouplefromGeorgia,heardthem.Theydivedintothewaterands0onreachedthetwobrothers.Butafterafewminutes,theywerealltrappedinaripcurrent离岸流）,apowerfulonethatcouldsweepeventhestrongestswimmerouttosea!Bythen,someteenagershadheardthecry.Oneoftheteensrushedintothewater,grabbedJacky.andpulledhimbacktoshore.Meanwhile,Tabathacouldfeelherselfbeingpulledfartherout.Shewasalreadyexhaustedandbeginningtofeeldesperateasshewastryingtosavebothboysalone.Onshore,Jackywasterrified.Amanstopped.“What'swrong?”askedShaun,whowasheadingbacktohiscar.“Mywifeisdrowning!"Brittanysaid.Shaunimmediatelystrode（大步跨）intothewater.Butseveralminuteslater,agaping15feetstilllaybetweenhimandTabathaandtheboys.Heknewthatifhecontinued,he'dbecomeanothervictim.Heturnedaroundtoseekhelp.ItwasaboutthattimethatRoberta,theboys'mother,returnedfromthebathroomandlookedaroundforherchildren.Shewasshockedtospotthemfloatingmuchfartheroutthantheywereallowedtogo.Shefoughtthewavestogettoherscreamingsonsandthestrangerwhowastryingtosavethem,butshequicklydiscovereditwasnearlyimpossibletomakeheadwayinanydirection.Lookingaround,Robertasighedwithrelieftoseesomemorepeoplecomingtohelp.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1WhentheytriedinvaintorescuethebrothersandTabatha,ariskyideacametothem.Paragraph2Bythen,moreswimmershadalsonoticedthegroupintroubleandrushedtojointhehumanchain.（2020•全国•高二课时练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AlittleboyandhisgrandmothercametoseeSantaatMayfairMallinWisconsin.ThechildclimbeduponSantaClaus'slapholdingapictureofalittlegirl."Whoisthis?"askedSanta,smiling."Yourfriend?Yoursister?""Yes,Santa,"hereplied."Mysister,Sarah,whoisverysick,"theboysaidsadly.Santaglancedoveratthegrandmotherwhowaswaitingnearbyandsawherwipinghereyeswithatissue."Shewantedtocomewithmetoseeyouverymuch,Santa!"thechildshouted."Shemissesyou,"headdedsoftly.Santatriedtocheertheboyup,askinghimwhathewantedSantatobringhimforChristmas.Whentheyfinishedtheirtalk,thegrandmothercameovertohelpthechildgetoffhislap，andstartedtosaysomethingtoSanta,buthalted（停顿）."Whatisit?"Santaaskedwarmly."Well,Iknowit'sreallytoomuchtoaskyou,Santa,but..."Thegirlinthephotographismygranddaughter.Yousee...shehasleukemia（白血病）andisn'texpectedtomakeiteventhroughtheholidays,"shesaidthroughtear-filledeyes."Isthereanyway,Santa,anypossiblewaythatyoucouldcometoseeSarah?Allshe'saskedfor.forChristmas.istoseeSanta.Santablinked.swallowedhardandtoldtothewomantoleaveinformationwithhiselves（小精灵）astowhereSarahwas，sayinghewouldseewhathecoulddo.Santathoughtofnothingelsefortherestofthatafternoon."WhatifitwereMYchildlyinginthathospitalbed,dying?"hethoughtwithasinkingheart.注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Santaknewwhathehadtodo.OneyearlateratMayfairMall,alittlegirlcameuptositonSanta'slapandsaid,“Hi,Santa!Rememberme?”（2021.河北•张家口市第一中学高二阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为120左右。OnDecember16,2008,RandyHeisswashikinginPatagonis,atownneartheUS-Mexicoborderwhenhenoticedtherewasaredballoon.Hewalkedtowardsit,andfoundtheballoon'sstringwasattachedtoapieceofpaper.“Dayami”,itreadononeside,inachild'swriting.Heissturnedthepaperover.Itwasanumberedlist,allinSpanish.HeisssuspectedthatachildhadtriedtosendSantaClausaChristmaswishlistbyballoon,somethingheusedtodohimselfwhenhewasakid.Nobodyhadeverreturnedhisletters,buthewonderedwhetherhecouldfindthegirlwhohadsentthisone.Itwouldbedifficult,butHeisshadafewclues.About20milestothesouthwest,wasthecityofNogales,Mexico.Basedontheblowingwind,hewasprettysurethat'swhereitcamefrom.Heissbroughtthenotehometohiswife,whoisfluentinSpanishandhelpedhimtranslatethelist.TheyfoundthatDayamihadaskedforadoll,adollhouse,clothesandartsupplies.HeissthenpostedabouthissearchonFacebook,attachingphotos,hopingsomeofhisfriendsinNogalesmightknowthegirl'sfamily,butwithnosuccess.HeissworriedthattimewasrunningoutbeforeChristmas.OnDecember19,2008,hesentaprivatemessagetoRadioXENY,aradiostationinNogales.Thenextmorning,HeissgotamessagefromRadioXENY:TheyhadlocatedDayami,aneight-year-oldgirlwhoseparentswerekilledinacaraccident.Theywouldarrangeaget-togetherwithDayamiattheradiostation.SotheyboughtjustabouteverythingonDayami'slist.Paragraph1:ThentheHeissesdrovefor45minutes,crossingtheborderintoNogales.Paragraph2:Tenyearslater,HeissesreceivedaphonecallfromDayami.参考答案：1．OnepossibleversionThelasttwopeoplewereGrandpaandme.Enteringtheroom,IsawGrandmasittingonthebedwithablanketaroundher.Iranforwardandgaveherthebiggesthugwithtearfuleyes.Grandma,holdingmetightlyinherarms,said,“Iknowthere'sachanceIwon'tmakeit,butIloveyouforever.”GrandpapattedGrandmaonthebackandcomfortedher,“Don'tworry,honey.Weareallwaitingforyouhere.”Grandmanoddedwithherusualsmile.Thenshewaswheeledaway,leavinguswaitingandprayinganxiously.Finally,afterthelongestmorningofmylife,thedoctorenteredthewaitingroom,smiling.“Maryisoutofsurgery.You'reallowedtovisitheraslongasyou'requiet,”hesaid.Reliefsweptovermybodyandtearsbegantrailingdownmyface.Thankgoodness,IhadGrandmaback!Oncewewalkedintotheroom,therelayGrandma,lookingpeacefulyetpainfulwithsomanytubesattachedtoher.Ifeltsoshockedbutsohappy.Grandmawouldbeokay.Shewastakingthefirststeptobecomingbetterandgoingonanotherwalkwithusoneday.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的奶奶尽管心脏有问题，但也愿意花费更多的时间陪伴她们，后来奶奶的心脏功能只有2%，不得不做手术，作者和她的家人们都非常担心，但是手术最终成功了，作者和她的家人都非常开心，奶奶又可以陪她们散步了。【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句内容“最后两个人是爷爷和我。”可知，第一段可描写作者和爷爷同奶奶作手术前的谈话，互相安慰。由第二段首句内容“最后，在我生命中最漫长的一个早晨之后，医生微笑着走进了候诊室。”可知，第二段可描写作者的奶奶手术很成功，家人们都非常开心。续写线索：进入房间——拥抱——安慰——等待——看望--手术成功——开心词汇激活行为类进入：enter/getinto/comeinto拥抱：givesb.ahug/holdinone‘sarms/embrace看望：visit/payavisit/callon情绪类平静的：quiet/peaceful/calm开心的：happy/glad/pleased【点睛】[高分句型1].Thenshewaswheeledaway,leavinguswaitingandprayinganxiously(.现在分词作状语）[高分句型2].Oncewewalkedintotheroom,therelayGrandma,lookingpeacefulyetpainfulwithsomanytubesattachedtoher.（由once引导时间状语从句）2．Then,withoutwarning,abunchofmulti-colouredrosesappearedatthecar'swindow.Staringatthebeautifulroseswithheropenmouth,sherockedherhusband'sarmexcitedly,saying“Look，Dale!Roses!”Dalesmiledatherandopenedthedoorforher,saying“Theyarejustforyou，honey!”withthebunchoftherosesinhishands.Daletoldherthathehadplantedthemulti-colouredrosesespeciallyforherandinordertogiveherabigsurprise,heaskedagirltoholdtherosesatthepostoffice.Fortherestoftheday,shewashappyandmoved.Feelingherhusband'sthoughtfullove,sheexpressedhergratitudeandherdeepaffectionforhimagainandagain.Shehadexpectedtomissherfirstbloomsthisyearandhadbeendepressedallmorningthoughshecomfortedherselfnon-stopthatit'sbettertogivethantoreceive.Deeplytouched,shedecidedtogivethespecialbunchofrosestothelittlegirlwhohadjusthelditforhertotastethejoyofgivingratherthanreceiving.【解析】【分析】本文以Wanda的情绪变化为线索。讲述了童年贫苦的Wanda因为买不起玫瑰而将其视为享受。她的丈夫了解Wanda这段童年记忆便种植了满园的玫瑰，并且将第一束玫瑰送给妻子。但是，今年当丈夫带回第一束玫瑰花到家时，恰巧遇到邻居。出于礼貌，丈夫便把玫瑰花送给了邻居。Wanda虽然内心不断地告诉自己给予比接受更好，但是内心还是有遗憾。最后，没有想到的是，丈夫以一种意想不到的方式将第一束多彩的玫瑰送给Wanda。深受感动之后，Wanda决定将这束特殊的玫瑰花送给刚才帮助她的小女孩，去践行给予比接受更好。【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句内容“然后，毫无预兆地，一束五彩玫瑰出现在车窗前。”可知，第一段可描写这束多彩玫瑰的由来。由第二段首句内容“那天剩下的时间里，她又高兴又感动。”可知，第二段可描写Wanda收到这束多彩玫瑰后的兴奋与感动。续写线索：多彩玫瑰的出现——多彩玫瑰的由来——兴奋和感动——感悟词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）行为类想起：bringtomind/recall至U达：findone'swayto/arriveat/dropby感动：touch/move情绪类享受：luxury/enjoyment再三地/不停地：repeatedly/non-stop/againandagain遗憾地：fillsb.withregret/bedepressed惊讶：withheropenmouth/giveherabigsurprise【点睛】【高分句型写范文中的就可以，至少2个高分句型】[高分句型1].Staringatthebeautifulroseswithheropenmouth,sherockedherhusband'sarmexcitedly,saying“Look,Dale!Roses!"（非谓语动词短语Staringatthebeautifulroseswithheropenmouth和saying“Look,Dale!Roses!"做伴随状语）[高分句型2].Daletoldherthathehadplantedthemulti-colouredrosesespeciallyforherandinordertogiveherabigsurprise,heaskedagirltoholdtherosesatthepostoffice.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）[高分句型3].Shehadexpectedtomissherfirstbloomsthisyearandhadbeendepressedallmorningthoughshecomfortedherselfnon-stopthatit'sbettertogivethantoreceive.（though弓|导的让步状语从句）3．Oneevening,Reecesetupavideocallformefrommyhospitalbed.Whenthevideophonewasconnected,IsawReeceholdingAlfinhisarmsandAlfwasstaringatthephonescreen.Alfseemedshockedwhenitsawmeattheotherendofvideo.Itkeptscratchingthephonescreenwithitsclaws,whichmademesoexcitedthattearsfilledmyeyes.Atthismoment,Iknewshealsomissedmeverymuch.HowIwantedtorunbacktoitandpatit.Thenwecouldplaywitheachother.IcannotdescribethefeelingwhenIarrivedhomeandsawhislittlefaceagain.AsAlfsawmeagain,itrubbedmytrouserswithitslittleface,andthengrabbedmypantstightlywithitsclawsasifIwoulddisappear.WhenReecesawuslikethis,hesaidhethoughtAlfhadregardedmeashismother.Ilookedathimwithgreatexcitementandsaid,"Ialsothinkofitasmyownchild."Peoplecancultivatefeelingswitheachother,whilepeopleandanimalscanalsocultivatesuchaffection.AndthenwewouldlivehappilywithAlf.【解析】【分析】本文以动物为线索展开,讲述了作者的丈夫捡回来的一只小刺猬,他们给小刺猬起名叫Alf,并且像养宠物一样，让Alf学会吃饭和用碗喝水，在和Alf的相处中，Alf也和作者一家相处的非常快乐。但不幸的是,作者出了车祸,需要在医院呆两个月,作者非常想念Alf，Alf也非常想念作者，它们通过视频互相表达想念，最后作者终于康复回到家，再次见到Alf的经历。【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，里斯给在病床上的我打了一个视频电话。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Alf通过视频电话表达想念。由第二段首句内容“当我回到家，再次看到他的小脸时，我的感觉难以形容。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家再一次见到Alf的感受。续写线索：接通电话——盯着看——想念——回家——见面——激动快乐词汇激活行为类接通电话：connect/getthrough/putthrough盯着看：stareat/gazeat想念：miss/longtoseeagain认为：regardas/thinkof情绪类激动的：showingone'sexcitement/excited/excitedly快乐地：happily/joyfully【点睛】[高分句型1].Itkeptscratchingthephonescreenwithitsclaws,whichmademesoexcitedthattearsfilledmyeyes.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]AsAlfsawmeagain,itrubbedmytrouserswithitslittleface,andthengrabbedmypantstightlywithitsclawsasifIwoulddisappear.（由as引导的时间状语从句和asif引导的方式状语从句）4.Iroundedacorner.ImmediatelyIsawbothsidesofthestreetwhichwasthickwithpeoplewatchingtherace,allcheeringtherunnerson.Iwilled（用意志力驱使）mylegstokeepgoing.ThenIlookedupandsawtheclock.Thesecondstickingawaygavemeanincentive动力）.IknewthatifIhadactuallyfinishedthisraceIwouldhaveachievedsomething.So,Istraightenedup,andgatheredupallmystrengthtodashforthefinishline.IhadmyarmsheldhigherwhenIpassedthroughthefinishline.Isucceeded.ButIwastootiredtosayanyword,onlypantingforbreath.Avolunteerputamedalaroundmyneck.Charlesracedtomeandcriedinexcitement,“Youdidgreat!I'msoproudofyou!”Hepattedmyshoulderandhelpedmeup.“Thatwasamazing!Iwanttodoanotherrace.Thisrunningstuffisamazing!”Ishouted,restingmyheadonmyhusband'sshoulder.Mylungsandmycomfortzonebothexpanded.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者以前讨厌跑步,但是在丈夫的激励下，作者加入了跑步并且参加赛跑。比赛过程中，作者在丈夫的鼓励下，坚持不懈地跑着，虽然过程很痛苦，但是最后作者成功了，她走出了自己的舒适区。【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我拐过一个弯。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到赛道两旁的观赛者给参赛者加油，于是自己坚定意志力继续前行，努力冲向终点。由第二段首句内容“当我冲过终点线时，我把手臂举得更高。”可知，第二段可描写作者非常棒地完成了比赛并获奖，感悟自己走出了舒适区。续写线索：观看比赛——继续前行——成功——疲惫——兴奋词汇激活行为类观看比赛：watchtherace/watchthegame继续前行：keepgoing/keeponmoving成功：succeed/win/triumph情绪类疲惫：tired/exhausted兴奋：excitement/inhighspirit/exhilaration【点睛】［高分句型］1］ImmediatelyIsawbothsidesofthestreetwhichwasthickwithpeoplewatchingtherace,allcheeringtherunnerson.（由关系代词which引导的定语从句，修饰先行词thestreet）［高分句型2］IknewthatifIhadactuallyfinishedthisraceIwouldhaveachievedsomething.（由that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中又有if引导的条件状语从句）5．Asdaylightbegantofade,weofferedourthanksforthevisitandsaidgoodbye.Hollysatquietlyinthecaronthewayhome,pressingherforeheadagainstthewindowasiflostinthought.Allthewaywedidn'tsayevenasingleword.Nosoonerhadwecometoastopinthedrivewaythanshethrewopenthebackdoorandflewstraighttothesidegateofourhouse.IfollowedhersilentlyandmythroattightenedasIobservedmydaughterstandingbytherubbishcanlookinginside.Soonshepuffed,pausedforasecondortwo,andwalkedinside,seemingslightlyanxiousandirritated.“Isthiswhatyouwerelookingfor?”IaskedherinagentlevoiceasIdrewoutthecarpetfromthecupboardandplaceditinfrontofher.Shegazedatmewithabsolutesurprise,whichsoonturnedtowildjoy.“Thanks.Thankyoumom,but...“ShenearlyscreamedoutwhenIthrewopenmyarmsandhuggedhertightlyjustasshedidwiththecarpet.Icouldseetearsshininginhercrystaleyes,adroportwosplashingontothedarkbluecarpet.Magically,whatsheoncedidn'tevenwanttorefertonowturnedouttobeherpreciousbirthdaypresent.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的女儿Holly对好友Susan送的生日礼物一一一张小毯子——很不满意，并把它扔进了垃圾桶里，作者看到之后把它清理干净并且收好。之后很长一段时间Holly都没有提到Susan，直到有一天，Holly说Susan邀请她们去她家里，在那里她们认识了Susan的养母Glenda，她是一位温暖有爱的人，并且从她家简陋的陈设来看，为了抚养Susan她付出了很多努力。回到家之后，Holly急切地寻找被她扔掉的小毯子，当她从妈妈手里拿过那张毯子时，她很感激妈妈，并且意识到这是她收到的最珍贵的礼物。【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句内容“天快黑时，我们表示感谢，并道别。”可知，第一段可描写在开车回家的路上Holly的反应，以及对那条毛毯的重新认识，并且希望重新找到它。由第二段首句内容“这就是你在寻找的东西吗？”可知，第二段可描写Holly看到被妈妈收起来完好无损的毛毯时的情绪反应，以及她的反思。续写线索：回家一一找毛毯一一拿出毛毯一一感谢妈妈一一珍惜毛毯一一反思词汇激活行为类回家：gobackhome/returnhome寻找：lookfor/searchfor凝视：gazeat/stareat情绪类感谢：showone'sappreciation/showone'sgratitude/begrateful焦虑：beanxiousabout/beworriedabout【点睛】[高分句型1]Nosoonerhadwecometoastopinthedrivewaythanshethrewopenthebackdoorandflewstraighttothesidegateofourhouse.（nosooner...than引导的时间状语从句，nosooner放句首，句子部分倒装）[高分句型2]IfollowedhersilentlyandmythroattightenedasIobservedmydaughterstandingbytherubbishcanlookinginside.（as引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型3]Shegazedatmewithabsolutesurprise,whichsoonturnedtowildjoy.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）6．（Onepossibleversion）Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.WhenIcalledthenumberback,awomananswered,“Sorry,sir.Iamreallysorrytobotheryou.Ididwanttocalltoapologize.”Fromthewoman,Ilearntthatthegirlhadbonecancerwhenshewasborn,andunfortunatelyherfatherdiedinanaccidentweeksago.Thelittlegirlsufferedfromunbearabletreatmenteveryday.Feelingpainful,shewouldcryforherdadwhohadalwaysencouragedher,sohermothergaveherarandomnumber.Icouldn'twaittoaskthewomanhowherdaug.hTtheerwwoamsanthoughtforawhile,sayingsadly,“Shehasgone.Youmusthavekissedheronthephone,andshewentwithasmileasshetightlyheldthecellphonewithwhichshecouldhearhervoice...”Onhearingthis,Icouldn'tkeepbackmysadfeeling,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.Ididn'tknowwhattosay,soIslowlyhangupmyphone,prayingforherhappinessandhealthinheaven.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者无意中接到一个女孩找爸爸的错误来电并粗鲁挂断之后，女孩依旧不时地拨打作者的号码，即使并未得到答复。在意识到女孩不会轻易放弃后，作者最终接了女孩的电话。感动于女孩对爸爸的想念，作者应其请求，在电话中给了她一个吻，女孩也因为这个吻而感到格外的开心。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在这之后不久，我对电话的另一端是谁产生了兴趣……，所以接下来应该写作者回拨电话以及女孩妈妈对作者的回复内容。特别要详细描述女孩之所以不停打电话找爸爸的具体原因。第二段开头是：我迫不及待地想问那个女人她女儿怎么样了……。本段应该写女孩现在的情况以及作者得知实情后的表现。续写时需要注意：（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：sufferedfrom，apologize，encourage，thinkforawhile，streamdown，prayfor等高级词汇；限制性定语从句“shetightlyheldthecellphonewithwhichshecouldhearhervoice...”，“Ididn'tknowwhattosay,soIslowlyhangupmyphone,prayingforherhappinessandhealthinheaven."中非谓语的灵活使用以及“Icouldn'tkeepbackmysadfeeling,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.”中独立主格的熟练运用。7．Paragraph1:HesuggestedthatIwearmyglassesfull-time.Atlast,Ihadnochoicebuttotakehisadvice.Thenextday,withapairof“ugly”glassesonmynose,Ienteredtheclassroom,loweringmyheadalltheway.Icouldsensesomeonestaringatmeandwhisperingtoeachotheraboutmyglasses.“TheymustbelaughingatmeandfeelingIamweird.”Isaidtomyself.Fromthatdayon,Ialmostdidn'tspeaktoanyone,juststayingaloneinthecorneroftheclassroom.Mylifewasdarkenedbythe“ugly”glasses.Paragraph2:Laterinmysummercamp,Imetaveryoutgoinggirlwhoalsoworeglasses..However,theglassesonherfaceneverseemedtobotherher.Shewasactiveandconfident,neverafraidtoexpressherself.Soonwebecamegoodfriends.OnedayIsharedwithhermystoryabouttheglasses.Afterlisteningtomeattentively,shehuggedmeandsaid,“Guesswhat,dear,apairofglassesneverruinsaperson'slife,butalackofconfidencedoes.Whetheryouwearglassesornot,aslongasyouloveyourselfandarefullofconfidence,yourlifewillbegreetedwithsunshine.”Iowemanythankstothelovely“glasses”girl,whopulledmeoutofthedarknessandbrightenedmylife,makingmeabraveandconfidentgirl.【解析】【分析】本文以眼镜为线索展开，讲述了作者因为看了卡通人物Arthur戴眼镜而被嘲笑的故事后，对戴眼镜的行为很抗拒，所以在视力变差之后作者选择了戴隐形眼镜。但是在大二的时候，戴隐形眼镜让作者眼睛产生刺痛感，但是医生检查不出问题，也没有解决办法。【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他建议我整天戴眼镜。”可知，第一段可描写作者无奈之下接受建议，并且因为之前对戴眼镜的抗拒而在戴眼镜之后出现的心理和行为上的变化。由第二段首句内容“后来在我的夏令营，我遇到了一个非常外向的女孩，她也戴着眼镜。”可知，第二段可描写作者通过跟这个女孩的相处，改变了对戴眼镜的看法，认识到自信才是最重要的。续写线索：接受建议——变得自卑和自闭——遇见外向女孩——成为朋友——改变态度词汇激活行为类进入：enter/getinto破坏：ruin/destroy/brea