专题09-2021新高考英语读后续写典例分析09-After-a-Quarrel

专题092021新高考英语读后续写典例分析092021新高考英语AfteraQuarrel目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析01表达积累表达积累1.忍不住伤心地哭了2.她母亲的责骂3.在街上漫无目的地徘徊4.手头没有钱5.我请客

couldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullythescoldingfromhermotherwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetwithnomoneyinhandI’lltreatyou表达积累6.一碗面条7.默默地哭着8.只是被你的好意打动了9.擦去她的眼泪10.把我赶出了家

abowlofnoodlescriedsilentlywasjusttouchedbyyourkindnesswipedhertearsdrovemeoutofthehouse表达积累11.毫不在乎12.太无情了13.表达对某人的感激14.惊呆了，说不出话来15.饱经风霜的双手

showednocareforissomercilessexpressedyourgratitudetospeechlessandnumbwithshockweatheredhands表达积累16.让我觉得很感激17.道歉18.眼泪顺着他们的脸颊流下19.亮晶晶的眼睛20.兴奋的跳了起来

mademefeelindebtedmakeanapologytearsstreamingdowntheircheekstwinklingeyesjumpwildlyintotheairofexcitement02原文分析AfteraQuarrelJennywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotevenpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shesighedandhadtoleave.原文分析Jenny和妈妈吵架离家出走，在街上游荡，伤心，饿。Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes...butIdon’thavemoneyonme…”shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman,“comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,whosesmellwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.原文分析老板请她吃了一碗面条。“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJennyasshewipedhertears,“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymother,drovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”原文分析女孩和老板聊天关于感恩。Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelindebted,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Onthewayhome,Jennymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.原文分析Jenny决定向妈妈道歉。Paragraph1：

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Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback._______________________________________________________________________原文分析自己独自在伤心的回忆中，续写回忆妈妈的种种。说明上一段Jenny回家之后没有发现妈妈，妈妈回来了，续写女孩如何和妈妈感情归好。03续写扩展Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Shewonderedwherehermotherwas…Sherememberedhermother’scaring…Shewassosad…Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Shesawthatwashermother…Hermotherwaslookingforher…Sheapologized…句子润色当她敲门时，她发现门是锁着的，她妈妈不在。Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.thedoorwaslocked句子润色又累又伤心，她在房前坐下。TiredandsadTiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.句子润色“我妈妈会在哪里？”她想，“她还在生我的气吗？”？“Wherecouldmymotherbe?”shewondered,“Wasshestillangrywithme?”shewonderedBeangrywith句子润色争吵的情景又出现在她的脑海里。Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.thesceneofappearedinhermindThesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermindagain.句式的多变句子润色她记得她对母亲的粗鲁。rudenessSherememberedherrudenesstohermother.句子润色意识到母亲的责骂都是因为她，母亲真的很关心她，她觉得很惭愧，眼泪开始顺着脸颊往下滚。Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,shefeltratherashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.feltratherashamedtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks句子润色她抬起头，看到了她母亲熟悉的面孔。raisedherheadSheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother.句子润色“你来了！我一直在找你，”她说，既疲倦又松了一口气。。tiredandrelieved.“Hereyoucome!I’vebeenlookingforyou,”shesaid,tiredandrelieved.句子润色珍妮情不自禁地投入母亲的怀抱。Jennycouldn’thelpthrowingherselfintohermother’sarms.throwingherselfintohermother’sarms句子润色“妈妈，我很抱歉，谢谢你为我所做的一切。”她表示了诚挚的歉意和深深的感激。expressedhersincereapology“Mum,I’msosorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme.”Sheexpressedhersincereapologyandgreatgratitude.greatgratitude句子润色听了这话，她妈妈微笑着轻轻地拍着她的背。HearingthisHearingthis,hermothersmiledpattingherbackgently.pattingherback04续写赏析续写赏析Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.“Wherecouldmymotherbe?”shewondered,“Wasshestillangrywithme?”Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalota