2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 写日记改掉抱怨的坏毛病 讲义素材

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。I'lladmitit.Icanbeacomplainer.Afterall,there'ssomuchinthislifetocomplainabout:thedirtyclothesthatdon'tmakeitintothebasket,thatannoyingneighbor'sloudmusic,myhusband'sshoesspreadoutatthefrontdoor,rainydays,traffic...我承认。我可以抱怨。毕竟，这辈子有太多可抱怨的事情：脏衣服进不了篮子，那个烦人的邻居大声的音乐，我丈夫的鞋子铺在前门，雨天，交通。。。ComplainingisahabitIcultivatedsincechildhood,askillIdevelopedthroughtheyears.Myparentsdidn'tseemtomind—theyweregreatcomplainers,too—thoughIdorecallsomeeye-rollingandlong-drawnsighsfromfriendsandschoolmateswhenIwouldvoicemynegativeopinions.Infact,IcandistinctlyrecalltheexactmomentwhenIfirstrealizedmycomplaininghabitreacheditsexpertlevel.抱怨是我从小养成的习惯，也是我多年来养成的技能。我的父母似乎并不介意——他们也是很爱抱怨的人——尽管我确实记得当我发表负面意见时，朋友和同学们会翻白眼，长叹一口气。事实上，我清楚地记得我第一次意识到我的抱怨习惯达到专家水平的确切时刻。Oneday,asIremindedrayhusbandonceagaintoremovehisbillsfromthedining-roomtable,puthisshoesaway,andlowerthatbothersomeradio,heputuphishand."Stop!You’reyourcomplaining.It'sdrivingmecrazy."有一天，当我再次提醒雷丈夫把账单从餐桌上拿下来，把鞋子收起来，放下那台烦人的收音机时，他举起了手。“住手！你在抱怨。这快把我逼疯了。”Ilookedathimblank-eyed.Hetookadeepbreath."Youneverhearmecomplaining,doyou?""Well,"Ianswered,"you'recomplainingaboutmycomplaining,soactually,yes,Iamhearingyoucomplainrightnow."Hiseyeswidened.Adropofsweatformedhisupperlip.Thenhegrabbedhiscarkeysandranoutofthedoor.我茫然地看着他。他深吸了一口气。“你从来没听我抱怨过，是吗？”“嗯，”我回答，“你在抱怨我的抱怨，所以实际上，是的，我现在听到你在抱怨。”他的眼睛睁大了。他的上唇出了一滴汗。然后他抓起车钥匙跑出了门。PerhapsI'dgonetoofar,Ithought.MaybeIreallydidcomplaintoomuch.But,whattodoaboutit?Afterall,ithadbeenalifetimehabit.Andhabitsarehardtobreak.Itookabreakandsatdowntothinkaboutsolution.WhenIfeltannoyed,Icouldlockmyselfinthebathroomandscream.No.Theneighborswouldprobablyhearme.Phoneafriend?Sheprobablywouldn'tbeafriendforverylong.Thenithitme.I'dbeeninthehabitofkeepingajournalformostofmylife.Itprovidedasortoftimelineforme，andIlikedtoreviewpastentriesoccasionallytoreviewthepathIhadbeenonatthatpoint.Journalingkeptmehonestwithmyself,andIlikeditforthatreason.Perhaps,Ithough,acomplaintjournalmightbetheanswerIwasseeking.也许我走得太远了，我想。也许我真的抱怨太多了。但是，该怎么办呢？毕竟，这是我一生的习惯。习惯是很难打破的。我休息了一下，坐下来思考解决方案。当我感到恼火时，我可以把自己锁在浴室里尖叫。不，邻居们可能会听到我的。给朋友打电话？她可能不会成为很长时间的朋友。然后我想到了一个主意。我一生中大部分时间都有记日记的习惯。它为我提供了一种时间线，我喜欢偶尔回顾过去的条目，以回顾我当时所走的道路。记者让我对自己保持诚实，因此我喜欢它。也许，我想，一本投诉日志可能是我想要的答案。注意：1．续写词数应为l50左右：2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：Thatday,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Besidestheimprovedrelationshipwithmyhusband,Isawothereffectssoon.文本分析：文章大意--我是一个喜欢抱怨的人，从小到大都是如此。一天，我丈夫受不了我的抱怨，冲出门外。至此我开始反思自己的行为，开始寻找好的替代方法来避免抱怨。冥思苦想之后，我终于想到了一个好主意。当我有抱怨和生气的时候，我就记日记，把自己的不满和牢骚统统写到日记里。续写情节发展：-我开始尝试在负面情绪的时候，写下我的不满和沮丧。这让我非常放松且放下了心里的负担。这种发泄的出口没有伤害到任何人也不再引发争吵，效果非常好。丈夫和我的关系开始缓和。-效果非常明显，我和朋友邻里的关系日益融洽。当我们发现自己有坏习惯的时候，只要勇于想办法克服，一定就可以实现目标，取得成功。参考范文：Thatday,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Withouthesitation,Igotapeninmyhandandunloadedallmydissatisfactionanddisappointmentaboutmyhusbandontothepaper.Itfeltsogoodandrelaxingtosayexactlywhatwasonmymindwithoutanyonejudgingmcormythoughts.Withthelastwordputdown,Ifeltrelievedasifaheavyweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulder.Later,eachtimeIfoundmyselffeelingtheurgetovoiceapettyirritation,Ipromisedmyselftowriteitinmycomplaintjournalthatevening.Gradually,withoutfearoftriggeringaquarrel,myreservedhusbandopeneduptomemoreandourrelationshipgotbetter.Besidestheimprovedrelationshipwithmyhusband,Isawothereffectssoon.Oldfriendshipsbecamedeeper,andnewfriendshipsappeared.Neighborsbecamemoreneighborly.Overall,Istartedtojustfeelhappierandlessstressed.WhenIlookedbackonsomeofmyinitialentries,Ihadtolaughoutloud.SomeofmycomplaintsappearedtrulyridiculouswhenreadinhindsightThosefewmoments'whenIcouldsitdownandfreemyselfofwhateverisbotheringmemadeabigdifferenceforthebetterinmylife.Reflectingonthisexperience,Ifirmlybelievedthatwithdeterminationandsmartapproaches,Icouldnotonlybreakabadhabitbutalsoachieveanything.下水文1：Thatday,Idecidedtogiveitatry.EachtimeIfoundmyselffeelingtheurgetovoiceapettyirritation,Ipromisedmyselftowriteitinmycomplaintjournalthatevening—noholdsbarred.Atfirst,Icouldn’twaittogetthatpeninmyhandandreallyunloadontothepaper.Itfeltsogood,sofreeing,tosayexactlywhatwasonmymindwithoutanyonejudgingmeormythoughts.Besidestheimprovedrelationshipwithmyhusband,Isawothereffectssoon.Theinitialbenefitwasimmediate.Withoutfearofrecrimination,mygenerallyreticenthusbandopeneduptomemore.Otherbenefitstookmoretimetobecomeapparent,yetIeventuallybecameawareofthemallthesame.Oldfriendshipsbecamedeeper,andnewfriendshipsappeared.Neighborsbecamemoreneighborly.Overall,Istartedtojustfeelbetter—happierandlessstressed.下水文2：Thatday,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Withouthesitation,Iquicklytookapenandwrotedownmydissatisfactionanddisappointmentwithmyhusbandonpaper,lettingmythoughtsflowoutwiththetipofthepen.Writingmythoughtswithoutanyonejudgingorcaringaboutthemfeelsrelaxedandrelievestheburdeninmyheart.Finally,Ifeltasenseofrelief,asiftheburdenonmyshouldershadbeenlifted.Lateron,everytimeIfoundmyselfimpulsivelyexpressingalittleanger,Iwouldimmediatelywriteitdowninmylog.Gradually,withoutworryingaboutsparkinganargument,myreservedhusbandopeneduptome,andourrelationshipbecamemoreharmonious.Besidestheimprovedrelationshipw