高一英语短文改错

4/8高一英语短文改错1.Havingadreamisofgreatimportance.Yourdreamsareordinaryandrealistic.IhopeIwilladmittedintoatopuniversityandbecomeagooddoctorafterIwillgraduatefromuniversity.IhopedonedayIcanfindacureforcancer.IhopethosewhomlovemeandthosewhomIloveupmybody.Iwilltrymybesttofocustimeandenergytomystudy.Imustworkhardatmylessonsorbefullypreparingfortheentranceexam.【小题1】通篇都在讲我的梦想，因此代词My。【小题2】加动词原形，“被录取”beadmittedinto,后面加be.2.Onenight,IwasonmywayhomeformyChristmasholidaywhenmycarbrokedown.Itwascompletedead,andIwasafewmilesawayfrommyhomeinthatcold,wetnight.IdecidedtowalkaroundalittleafteracceptingthatI’dhavetospendthenightinthecar.MaybeIcanfindatelephone.Actually,Ididn’thavetowalkfarbeforeIfoundthesmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.Iknockedthedoorwasdelightedwhenapleasantoldmanopenedthedoorandlistenedtomystorycarefully.Hesaidhehadnotelephoneandthatitwasn’tanywithinwalkingdistance,buttheoldmanwhoofferedtogotorepairmycar.【答案】1.complete改为completely2.in改为on3.after改为before4.can改为could5.the改为a6.shone改为shining7.knocked后加at/on8.was前加and9.it改为there10.who删掉3.MynameisLiHua.IwasborninQingdao，ShandongprovinceonFebruary1995．Istartedtheschoolin2001whenIwassix.IstudiedhappyinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom2001to2007.AfterthatIwenttoNo.39MiddleSchoolofQingdaoandgraduatelastsummer．ThemainsubjectsIstudyatschoo1includedChinese，maths，English，physics，chemistryandcomputer．IlikeEnglishandcomputerbestandIamverygoodatit.LastyearIwinnedfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.InmysparetimeIenjoylisteningpopularmusicandcollectingstamp．Myfavouritesportsisswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter．【答案】【小题1】on-in【小题2】去掉the【小题3】happy-happily【小题4】graduate-graduated【小题5】study-studied【小题6】it-them【小题7】winned-won【小题8】listening-listeningto【小题9】stamp-stamps【小题10】is-are【解析】4.Maryisahighschoolstudent,whodevotedherselftoherlessonseveryday.LastSaturday,asusual,shewenttoseveralclass.Intheevening,shecontinuedtostudyuntildeeplyintonight.Shewastoosleepyandtiredthatshecouldn’tworkeffectively.OntheSundaymorning,shewasabouttodoherlessonswhileherfathercameupandadvisedhertotakeabreak.Soontheycameupagoodidea.Wedecidedtogocyclinginthecountryside.Maryenjoyedherself,competingandchattingwithherfather,andfeltrelaxingintheopenair.OnMonday,Marywasenergeticbutactiveinclass.【答案】【小题1】devoted改为devotes【小题2】class改为classesunderstand“realmusic”·AfterIgraduatedfromhighschool,thefriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweallthoughtitwascool.Iwillneverforgetthedayonthatwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstore.HereIsawaguitarplayerplayingtheguitar,whichIreallyenjoyed.Hebecamemyfirstguitarteacher.ThereweretoomanywonderfulmodelstochoosethatittookmealongtimetobuyoneNowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.9.Thismorning,Igotothestorenearmyhometodosomeshopping.IwaswalkingdownthepassagewhileIgaveaviolentcough.Thewomanstandingnexttomewassoshockingthatsheconsequentlydroppedajarofoil.Forthatverymoment,agirlwaswalkingby.Sheslippedontheoil,fellontothebrokeglassandhitherheadonthefloor.Afterawhile,therewerebloodpourdownherface.Ifeltreallyguiltyandsentthegirltothenearesthospitalwithoutthedelay.Thedoctorexaminedherwoundcarefully.Tomyrelief,itwasnotserious.Thegirlhadalittlesmileonherfacebeforethedoctordressedwound.【答案】【小题1】go-went【小题2】while-when【小题3】shocking-shocked,【小题4】For-At,【小题5】broke-broken,【小题6】were-was,【小题7】pour-pouring,【小题8】thedelay去the,【小题9】before-after，【小题10】wound前加the/her10.Dearschoolmates，Inordertogethighschoolstudentstoattachingimportancetotheenvironmentandraiseourawarenesstoprotecttheenvironment，andChinaDailyisplanningtoholdaninterestinglyknowledgecontest．AconteststartsonOctober14thandendon31st．Remember,youcantakethecontestinChinaDailynewspaper,thatisverypopularamonghighschoolstudent．TheanswersheetmustcutfromthenewspaperandsenttoChinaDailyafterthedeadline．Pleasepaymoreattentiontotherelatedinformationofthecontestandtakeanactivepartinthemontime．Students’Union【答案】【小题1】attaching改为attach【小题2】第二行and去掉【小题3】interestingly改为interesting【小题4】第三行A改为The【小题5】end后面加s【小题6】第四行that改为which【小题7】student后面加s【小题8】must后面加be【小题9】after改为before10.最后一句them改为it11.DearAndy,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Youaskaboutmyhealthinyourlastemail.SoI’mgoingtotellyouaboutdiet.I’maveryhealthperson.That’swhyweliveneartheseaandweoftenhavefish.Idon’tknowexactlywhatmymotherwillcookforustonight,andtherewillprobablebefishandvegetables.Andofcoursetherewillalsobesomerices.IfyoucometovisitmeinChinaononeday,youwon’teatmanysweets.SoIhopeyoudon’thavesweettooth.I’mgoingtoaskmyfathertotakesomephotosforthefootballmatchandI’llemailthemtoyou.Ithinkyou’lllikeourteam’sclothes.12.Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.Thirtyminutespast,butnobuscame.Bothupsetandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.NowwheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthisexperience.【答案】【小题1】添加for【小题2】past改为pasted【小题3】feet改为foot【小题4】when改为than【小题5】a改为the【小题6】other改为another【小题7】do改为did【小题8】possible改为possibly【小题9】去掉it【小题10】lose改为losing13.Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.I