高二基础英语作练文习与评讲

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基础性作文Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.第一节基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）【写作内容】你收到一位笔友的电子邮件，你要给他写一封回信。【写作内容】请根据以下信息写一封回信。1．得知笔友所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此感到非常遗撼；2．提出你的建议，包括： (1)勤洗手，避免到家禽(poultry)较多的地方去。 (2)最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭，如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感染病毒。 (3)如果发现自己有感冒、发烧等症状，及时就医。【写作要求】1．只能用5个句子表达全部内容；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。DearTom,Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.1．得知笔友所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此感到非常遗撼；ItisapityforyoubecauseIheardthatthebirdfluisattackingyourhometown.IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatthebirdfluisattackingyourhometown.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.2．提出你的建议，包括： 勤洗手，避免到家禽(poultry)较多的地方去。Toensureyourhealth,Isuggestwashingyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidinggoingtoplaceswheretherearealotofpoultry.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.3.最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭，Besides,it’sbestnottoeatthelocalchickenorduckwhenthebirdfluisgoingaroundEvaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.4.如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感染病毒。Evenifyouwanttoeatit,youshouldn’teatituntilitiswellcookedsothatyouwon’tbeaffectedbyitsvirus.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.5.如果发现自己有感冒、发烧等症状，及时就医Ifyouhaveacoldorfever,youshouldseeadoctorimmediately.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearTom,IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatbirdfluisattacking(侵袭，袭击)yourhometown.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearTom,IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatbirdfluisattackingyourhometown.Toensureyourhealth,I

suggestwashingyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidinggoingtoplaceswheretherearealotofpoultry.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearTom,IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatbirdfluisattackingyourhometown.Toensureyourhealth,Isuggestwashingyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidinggoingtoplaceswheretherearealotofpoultry.Besides,it’sbestnottoeatthelocalchickenorduckwhenthebirdfluisgoingaround.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearTom,IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatbirdfluisattackingyourhometown.Toensureyourhealth,Isuggestwashingyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidinggoingtoplaceswheretherearealotofpoultry.Besides,it’sbestnottoeatthelocalchickenorduckwhenthebirdfluisgoingaround.Evenifyouwanttoeatit,youshouldn’teatituntilitiswellcookedsothatyouwon’tbeaffectedbyitsvirus.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearTom,IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatbirdfluisattackingyourhometown.Toensureyourhealth,Isuggestwashingyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidinggoingtoplaceswheretherearealotofpoultry.Besides,it’sbestnottoeatthelocalchickenorduckwhenthebirdfluisgoingaround.Evenifyouwanttoeatit,youshouldn’teatituntilitiswellcookedsothatyouwon’tbeaffectedbyitsvirus.Ifyouhaveacoldorfever,youshouldseeadoctorimmediately.Yours,Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.Thepassagemainlytellsusthat+第一段第一句和最后一段最后一句第一段概括USexpertscallforgreatattentiontothegirls’mathsandscienceeducation.Fromhighschooltocollege,therearefewerandfewergirlslearningmathsandscience.Soparentsarewarnedtopaymoreattentiontotheirdaughters’learningthem.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.第二段.(评价)

AsfarasIamconcerned,atschool,mostofgirlsdon’tlikemathsandscience.Theythinkmathsandsciencearedifficultsubjects.What’smore,someparentsthinkgirlsareborntobepooratthem,which,insomeway,willmakemanygirlsafraidofstudyingthem!Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.第三段.经历感受

Onreadingthestory,mymindbeganitssearchforasimilarexperience.Immediatelyitoccurredtomethat自己或者别人的例子读了这个故事，我的头脑开始搜索类似的经历，很快，我就想起了….Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.Idon’tagreetotheabove.Itistruethatgirlsarenotgoodatmathsandscienceatschool.Butgreatwomenscientistshaveprovedthatgirlscandoaswellinthemasboysdo.Forinstance,MadamCurie,aNobelPrizewinner,setagoodexampletous.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.第四段.(总结)

1.Insummary,….+谚语总之，…..2.wecansafelydrawaconclusionthat….+谚语综上所述…..Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.