writing高中英语写作

决胜高考Writing1.要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，考生应能清楚、连贯的传递信息，表达意思。2.有效地运用所学语言知识。高考作文要求高考评分标准第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全到达了预期的写作目的。StructureLanguageStructureGoodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)NOUN:ChanceDifficultyOpinionPerspective…….…….Verb:ChanceDifficultyOpinionPerspective…….…….adj:ChanceDifficultyOpinionPerspective…….…….高级词汇短语同义词一、肯定不如双否好二、陈述不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲要强化“语法、修辞”两个概念

四个“不如”修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否认也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否认的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。一、肯定不如双否好Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.1.Hecamehereat5.(一般句式)

2.Hedidnotcomehereuntil5.Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.

倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。1.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陈述不如倒装妙NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.Iwillnevermarryyou.NeverwillImarryyou.1.否认词开头：2.Notuntil/till5pm.didhecomehereyesterday.3.Itwasnotuntil/till5pm.thathecamehereyesterday.1.Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.yesterday.把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary，whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.

2.地点状语开头Ourlibraryisinthecenterofourschool.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.Onthebankstandsomeflowers.Intheskyhanglittlestars.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.3.Only+介词短语：OnlyinthiswaycanIimprovemyEnglishOnlybytakingexercisescanwekeephealthy4.形容词+as+主语+be动词：1.YoungasIam,Icanmanageit2.Richasourcountryis,wehavealotofproblems3.Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecar’snumber.4.SogladamItohearfromyou.三、主动不如被动巧英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体表达在英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用是事物或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时：Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪种表达法分数会更高？几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。四、从句不如分词傲口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。

第一步，去掉连词if；Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is变成分词是being最后变成Suchbeingthecase,youshouldapologizetoher如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构。[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.

高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“HealthandSports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题适当展开，词数100~120。

范文评讲:

Somestudentssaythattakingsportsisjustawasteoftime.Atschool,therearesomanysubjectstolearnandsomuchhomeworktodo

thattimeisprecioustothem.Tousseniorthreestudents,everyminutecounts.Asa

consequence,thereisnotimeavailable,especiallyforstudentstotakeoutsidesports.However,Ishouldutterasonorousvoicethatsportsareessentialtous.As

anoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.”Concentratingonstudyforalldaylong

withoutanyrelaxationisnoteffectiveanddoharmtoourhealth.Takingsomeexercisesafterclasscanrelivethepressureoftakingexaminations.Ofcourse,itisimproperforstudentstooverdosports.

Asawhole,weshouldmakeabalancebetweensportsandstudy.HealthandSports

Themajorityofstudentsholdtheviewthattakingsportsisjustawasteoftime.Atschool,therearesomanysubjectstolearnandsomuchhomeworktodothattimeisprecioustothem.Asforusseniorthreestudents,everyminutecounts.Asa

consequence,thereisnotimeavailable,especiallyforstudentstotakeoutsidesports.However,Ishouldutterasonorousvoicethatsportsareessentialtous.As

anoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.”Concentratingonstudyforalldaylong

withoutanyrelaxationisnoteffectiveanddoharmtoourhealth.Takingsomeexercisesafterclasscanrelivethepressureoftakingexaminations.Ofcourse,itisimproperforstudentstooverdosports.

Asawhole,onlybymakingabalancebetweensportsandstudycanwebenefitalotfromitandkeepfitforever.09年湖北高考英语作文假设你是华华,与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信,以提高各自的外语水平.最近你收到汤姆的电子邮件(附后),发现有一个成语使用不当.请根据以下要点,用英文回一封电子邮件.要点:1.不应使用“无所不为”,应使用“无所事事”;2.说明这两个成语的用法;3.给予鼓励.HiTom,Nicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticedyou’vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostof