2025届新高考英语热点冲刺复习读后续写精讲精析

2025届新高考英语热点冲刺复习读后续写精讲精析读后续写Step1：精深语篇，精准理解Step2：理清思路，把握全局Step4：积累素材，激活表达Step3：推动情节，展开续写IlovethekidsofHawaii.Ienjoyedbeingone,andIenjoyedteachingthem.SoitwasfittingthatIendedupteachingandcoachingatthesameschoolIattendedasajuniorhighschoolstudent.Para.1fittingadj.合适的，恰当的endupdoing最终做

coachv.训练，指导n.教练；长途汽车，火车车厢，（飞机）经济舱Step1：精深语篇，精准理解

OnedayinOctober,twoeighth-gradegirlsonmyvolleyballteam,AmyandJane,cametotalkwithme."CoachAngie,"theysaid,"nowthatthevolleyballseasonisoverandthisisourlastyearatourschool,we'dreallyliketotryoutforthebasketballteam.Butwe'veneverplayedbasketballbefore,andwe'llbeembarrassediftheyoungerplayersmaketheteamandwedon't."Para.2nowthat既然

tryout选拔embarrassedadj.感到尴尬的maketheteam入选球队Para.3"You'rebothtalentedandathletic,"Ireplied."Ifyoudon'ttry,you'llneverknow."Hopingtoconvincethem,Iofferedtohelpthempreparefortryouts（选拔）iftheywerewillingtotry.Buttheirlookshowedtheywerestillunwillingtoacceptthechallenge.

talentedadj.有天赋的

athleticadj.运动的，强壮的

bewillingtodo愿意做某事Para.4

Asacoachandteacher,Ilovetoinspiremystudentstoachievemorethantheythinktheycan.SoItriedtoencouragethemwithmyownstory.ItoldthegirlshowIhadtwicecompetedandlostinthelocalandstatepreliminary（预备的）MissAmericapageants(选美比赛）backwhenIwasjust18and19yearsold."Youwinsomethingevenifyoulose,"Itoldthem."AlthoughIdidn'twinthestatecompetitions,

Igainedself-confidenceandimprovedmycommunicationskills.It'salwaysworthtrying."Thegirlssaidthey'dthinkaboutit,andwenthome.Para.5

Thenextday,theysurprisingly

agreedtomyplan.Buttheysaidtheywouldgetreadyforbasketballtryouts,onlyifIwouldcompeteagainforMissAmerica.Iwasscaredandshocked."Iwasjustateenagerthen.Besides,I'vegotajobnow!"Ireplied."Butyoustillhaveachancetotry,justlikeus!"Amysaid.surpringlyadv.令人吃惊地onlyif只要Step2：理清思路，把握全局本文是一篇记叙文，作者的学生Amy和Jane想参加校篮球队的选拔赛，但又怕竞争不过低年级学生而尴尬。于是，作者以自己曾参加选美失败但收获颇丰的经历来激励她们。Amy和Jane听后决定参加篮球选拔赛,但前提是作者必须再次参加选美比赛，作者犹豫了。Step2：理清思路，把握全局Para.语篇结构关键词1交代人物身份2学生寻求帮助lastyearatourschoolthey’dreallyliketotryoutneverplayedbeforewillbeembarrassedif...3-4以选美比赛的经历鼓励学生5学生答应选拔但提出要求endupteachingandcoachingtalentedandatheleticifyoudon’ttry,you’llneverknowhadtwicecompetedandlostyouwinsomethingevenifyouloseit’salwayswothtryingsurprisinglyagreedonlyifIwouldcompeteagainStep2：理清思路，把握全局Para.语篇结构关键词6我的决定7比赛的结果ThenightIcompetedinthepreliminarycompetition,AmyandJanewereintheaudience.Istayedsilent.Step3：推动情节，展开续写文章通过情节线“Amy和Jane想参加篮球选拔赛，向作者寻求建议—作者自己选美的经历鼓励—学生们同意了作者的建议，但要求作者再次参加选美—？”和情感线“热爱（教育）——鼓舞（学生）——震惊和恐惧—沉默”，按照时间顺序进行叙述。根据情节线和感情线可以清晰理清篇章结构和接下来的发展脉络，即老师最终同意学生的要求，参加了选美比赛。Step3：推动情节，展开续写语篇情节线（动作词汇）情感线（情感词汇）Para.1交代人物身份Para.2学生寻求帮助Para.3-4以选美比赛的经历鼓励学生Para.5学生答应选拔但提出要求Para.6-7老师同意参加选美（Action…？）

Step4：积累素材，激活表达（细节描写词汇）细节描写：动作线：老师最终同意学生的要求，参加了选美比赛.（侧重心理活动、语言描写等细节描写）情感线：作者的情感变化（侧重忐忑、决心等情感描写）Step4：积累素材，激活表达（细节描写词汇）心理活动描写语言描写Worry,Anxiety,Nervousness,Excitement,Confidence,Inferiority,Hesitation,Firm,Satisfaction,Loss,Anger,Depression,Relief,Peace

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remarks续写范文1Istayedsilent.Actually,Iwasshockedandscared.Ithoughttheywerejoking,buttheirseriousexpressionstoldmethattheywerenot.Afteramomentofhesitation,Iagreedtotheirrequest.WemadeadealthatifIcompeted,theywouldtryoutforthebasketballteam.Thenextday,IsignedupfortheMissAmericacompetition.Itwasterrifying!ButAmyandJanewereright.Istillhadachancetotry,justliketheydid.续写范文1ThenightIcompetedinthepreliminarycompetition,AmyandJanewereintheaudience.Theycheeredmeonandgavemeaboostofconfidence.AlthoughIdidn'twin,Ihadagreattimeandfeltproudofmyselffortrying.Afewweekslater,AmyandJanetriedoutforthebasketballteam.Althoughtheywerenervousatfirst,theyplayedamazinglywell.Theymadetheteamandhadagreatseason.Wealllearnedthattryingisthemostimportantthing,whetheryouwinorlose.It'sthejourneythatcounts,notjustthedestination.Andwewereallgratefulfortheopportunitytochallengeourselvesandgrowtogether.续写范文2Istayedsilent."Areyouscared?Don'tyouwant

tofaceandovercomeyourfear?”'Janesaid,keepinga

straightface.Ialmosthadtolaugh.Theycaughtmeat

myownlesson.Goinghomethatnight,Ithought,Ihad

toshowthemImeanwhatIsay,andsetanexample.ThenextdayIwentbackandagreedtotheirbargain.So

thegirlsstartedpracticingbasketball,andIagainbeganpreparingforthepageant,whilecontinuingtoteachandcoachthemattheschool.续写范文2ThenightIcompetedinthepreliminarycompetition,AmyandJanewereintheaudience.Whenitwas

announcedthatIwonsixthplace,earningthechancefor

thefinals,theybothsmiledwithpride.Andtheywere

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