初中英语写作公开课九年级

ALessonofWriting1精品PPT|实用可编辑第一页，共二十六页。Howtowriteacomposition.2精品PPT|实用可编辑第二页，共二十六页。Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主题）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(时态):pasttense&presenttense

一般过去时&一般现在时First,considerthetaskcarefully.3精品PPT|实用可编辑第三页，共二十六页。LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools农耕工具reasongovernmentefforts4精品PPT|实用可编辑第四页，共二十六页。liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducation5精品PPT|实用可编辑第五页，共二十六页。PPT内容概述ALessonofWriting。精品PPT|实用可编辑。3.Where:LiMing’shometown。First,considerthetaskcarefully.。Then,writethecomposition.。Onepossibleversion:。马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便。马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便。4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的。takeplace发生。First,consideritcarefully.。I/myself。a.Changesin。c.Changesin。is/are。Inthepast。25第六页，共二十六页。LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

Changesin

livingconditions.b.

Changesin

workingtools.C.

Changesin

education.7精品PPT|实用可编辑第七页，共二十六页。OutlineTitle题目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading开头：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

Changesin

livingconditionsb.

Changesin

workingtoolsC.

Changesin

educationConclusion结尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提纲8精品PPT|实用可编辑第八页，共二十六页。配色花哨文字多套用模板套用模板逻辑不清内容空洞太土太杂太乱太繁“”精品PPT·实用可编辑第九页，共二十六页。Then,writethecomposition.10精品PPT|实用可编辑第十页，共二十六页。Finally,checkoverthecomposition.11精品PPT|实用可编辑第十一页，共二十六页。ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading开头body正文conclusion结尾12精品PPT|实用可编辑第十二页，共二十六页。AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.13精品PPT|实用可编辑第十三页，共二十六页。以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

14精品PPT|实用可编辑第十四页，共二十六页。Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense时态:First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……15精品PPT|实用可编辑第十五页，共二十六页。LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(头脑风暴)educationroadsbuilding16精品PPT|实用可编辑第十六页，共二十六页。Example:Outline提纲Title题目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion结尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportation17精品PPT|实用可编辑第十七页，共二十六页。nowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(时态)18精品PPT|实用可编辑第十八页，共二十六页。LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.19精品PPT|实用可编辑第十九页，共二十六页。精品PPT·收集整理第二十页，共二十六页。schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)21精品PPT|实用可编辑第二十一页，共二十六页。Then,writethecomposition.22精品PPT|实用可编辑第二十二页，共二十六页。以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

23精品PPT|实用可编辑第二十三页，共二十六页。TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!24精品PPT|实用可编辑第二十四页，共二十六页。ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,