读后续写语篇练习(狩猎老人野外遇险,好心司机展开营救)2024届高三

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——狩猎老人野外遇险，好心司机展开营救题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目再现3续写原文60-year-oldRichardOlsenhadretiredfromhiswork.Hewasveryinterestedinadventureandhunting.ThistimehehuntedonalandnearWatfordCity,N.D.,inthesparsely(稀少地)populatedwesternportionofthestate.Inthecoldwinter,hetriedanewspotandforgottobringhiscellphone,theonlytimeonthetrip.Hetrekkedmorethanhalfamilewithtwodogstoaharvestedwheatfield.Eyesfixedinthehorizoninexpectationofanotherpheasant(野鸡)takingflight,Richardsteppedonathincrustofsnowonacanal.Itcollapsedanddroppedhim.Realizingthathewasintroubleandwasgoingtohurthimself,Richardwassuddenlypickingupalotofspeed.Hisleftleghitfirst,andhelayonhissidetoreachforhisshotgun,unloadeditanduseditasacrutch(拐杖).Hespentanhourandahalfclimbingtheearthencanalbackwardtokeeppressureoffhisbadleg.Whenhewaspartlyup,heslippedandslidbackdown,becauseoneofhisfeetgotstuckbetweentworocks.Richardtoldhimselfthatifhedidn’tgethimselfoutofthecanal,hewasn’tgoingtohaveaverygoodnight.4续写原文Richardwalkedhisfootfreeandclimbedmoreslowlyandcautiouslyoutofthecanal.Richardimmediatelyrealizedthedifficultyofthetaskbeforehim.Theaccidentoccurredatabout2p.m.,anditwasnearly5p.m.withtheroadfarawayandthesunsetting.Richardfocusedoncrawlingtosafety.Evenwithhisgun’ssupport,hopping(单足跳跃)wasimpractical.Instead,hesatdownandpushedhimselfbackwardlessthan40inchesatatimewithhisgoodleg.Hewasstubbornandsurethathemustbepersistent.Hewasinexhaustionandhadmorefrequentbreaks.Temperaturesdroppedbelowzeroovernight,andhisglovesandbootsgotwet.Hishandsandfeetsoonwerecompletelynumb.5段首句Paragraph1:Richard’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.Paragraph2:However,gleamsofdaylightremained—Richardsawtheseventhcar.6Part2题目分析7已知短文内容本文讲述了8点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写建议第一段：理查德的两只狗之前一直在地里玩，最后终于来到主人身边，它们不停地叫着，围住他的身体来温暖他。理查德最后在两只狗的帮助下挣扎着走到靠近路边的篱笆旁。虽然理查德此时已经筋疲力尽，腿也很疼，但他仍然试着去挥手，想要拦下一辆车，因为他害怕自己可能会随时丧失意识。他拼命地挥手并大喊，但是没有一辆车有所回应。当第六辆车开过没有停下时，他陷入了绝望。第二段：所幸，天空此时仍有一丝光亮。理查德看到了第七辆车。他用尽所有力气和勇气，再一次拼命挥手。幸运的是，这一次车停了下来，驾驶员摇下车窗问他出了什么事。在意识到理查德的处境以后，司机下了车，帮助理查德和他的狗一起坐在后座上。泪水涌上理查德的眼睛，他用虚弱的声音表达了感激。最终他获救并得到了治疗。从那以后，每当遇到糟糕的情况，他总会用这次事故激励自己。10Part3范文呈现11范文呈现Richard’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.Thetwodogssurroundedhisbodytowarmhimwhilebarkingwildly.Richardfinallystruggledtothefenceneartheroadwiththehelpofthedogs.Despitehisexhaustionandpainfulleg,hestilltriedtowavedownadriverforthefearthathemightloseconsciousnessatanytime.Hewavedwildlyandshoutedloudlybutwithnoreplyfromanycar.Whenthesixthcarpassedwithoutstopping,hisheartsankindespair.12范文呈现However,gleamsofdaylightremained—Richardsawtheseventhcar.Musteringupallhisstrengthandcourage,hewavedwildlyagain.Fortunately,thistimethecarstoppedandthedriverrolleddownthewindowtoaskhimwhatwaswrong.AfterrealizingRichard’ssituation,thedrivergotoff,andassistedRichardontothebackseatwithRichard’sdogs.Withtearswellingupinhiseyes,Richardexpressedhisgratitudeinaweakvoice.Finally,hegotrescuedandcured.Fromthenon,wheneverheisconfrontedwithaterriblesi