读后续写练习 Mac骑行遇到狼 2024届高考英语作文备考

读后续写练习Mac骑行遇到狼

Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,buta

wolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

Q1:WhowasMaccyclingwith?Q4:WhodidMacrecallwhenhewascyclingalone?Q3:Whathappenedatthecriticalmoment?Q5:WhatdidMacdotostopthewolffromchasing?Q2:WhydidMacseparatefromhisfriends?Twoofhisfriends.Oneofhisfriends’bicyclewasbroken.Theystoppedtorepairit.Hiswifeandtwoyoungdaughters.Hefiredthebearspray.PaulandBeckydrovebyandnoticedMac.根据短文内容，回答下列问题。理解材料Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim…1.

OpeningMaccycledtoAlaskawithhisfriendsonawarmJulyafternoon.Maccarriedonwithhisroadtripwhilehistwofriendsstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair.

Macfiredsprayatthechasingwolfbutdidn’tstopit.Atthecriticalmomentheheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

EndingPara1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.

Para2：Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

Q1:Whatmighthappenassoonasthecarstopped?DidMacrushtogetintothecar?Didhemakeiteasily?Ordidsomeonegetoutofthecar?Q3:WhatdidMacdoonseeinghisfriends(theothertwocyclists)?Whatcameinsightofhisfriendsaftertheyarrived?原文划线单词可用于回答以下哪个问题？其中动词适用于哪一段情节？人物会产生怎样的互动？Q2:Howdidthewolfreacttowhatjusthappened?Diditgiveupandrunaway?Q4:WhatwereMac’sfeelingsaftertheincident?Didheandhisfriendscontinuetheircyclingtrip?Whatcanbeaproperending?研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Mac

（跳下）hisbikeand

（冲向）thebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.He

（绕到）tothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebeganto

（爬进）theopenwindow.Paulquickly

（锁上）thedoor,andthefrightenedman

（跳进去）,

（狠狠关上）thedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimal

（跑掉）.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Mac

（下车）thecarand

（拥抱）hisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”After

（告别）toPaulandBecky,Mac

（捡起）hisbicycle,andthethreemen

（继续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’

（踩踏板）downtheroad,Mac

（靠边停车）andcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.

Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.

Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.

BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.

“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”

AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中划线单词出现的语境。范文赏析——生动的语言

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”Aftersaying

goodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”与前文内容呼应范文赏析——生动的语言Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Mac

jumpedoff

hisbikeand

dashedfor

thebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.He

ranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlocked

thedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slamming

thedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”精彩闪现连续使用很急的动词生动表现Mac的求生欲望伴随状语时间状语jumpoffhisbikedashforclimbthroughtheopenwindowdiveinshortlyafterrunoffkeepinoneanother’ssightlinepullovercarryoncatchupwithtosb.’srelieftearintohis