2024届高考英语书面表达读后续写之句子扩写

ContinuationWriting续写时的问题情节不合理句子简单语言苍白主题抓不住无话可说时间来不及语法错误拼写错误句子简单语言苍白无话可说女孩打开她的礼物盒。Thegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.(主)

(谓)(宾)句子扩写Sentenceexpansion(informative,specificandvivid)形容词，可以是一个形容词，也可以是并列形容词或者形容词短语。1.The____________(天真的)girlunwrappedher___________(精致的)giftbox.2.______________________(好奇又兴奋),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3.____________________________________________________(满心喜悦),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

副词，修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或整个句子，指的是时间、地点、程度、方式等概念。(_____)Thelittlegirleagerly/carefully/merrily/joyfully/expectantly/

excitedlyunwrappedhergiftbox(_____).innocentdelicateCuriousandexcitedFullofjoy/wildwithjoy/overflowingwithjoy技巧1：使用形容词、副词Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧2：使用介词短语1.______________________________________________(毫不犹豫地),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.2.

_______________(惊讶地),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox__________________(非常小心地).4.Thegirl__________________________(黑色长发的)unwrappedherdelicategiftbox.Withoutanyhesitation/asecondthoughtInsurprisewithlongblackhairwithgreatcareThegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧3：使用非谓语动词1._________________________________(兴奋地尖叫着),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.2._________________________________(感受到了温暖),

thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3._________________________________(受到妈妈鼓励),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.FeelingasenseofwarmthScreamingwithexcitementEncouraged

byhermom注意：1.非谓语的选择要考虑状语和主句的主语是否一致，以及动词和主语的主被动关系；2.非谓语动词结构也可以放在句中或句尾，如果放在句中，需要一前一后出现两个逗号。请看下面例句：①Thegirl,

screamingwithexcitement,unwrappedhergiftbox.②Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox,

screamingwithexcitement.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧4：使用with复合结构/独立主格结构with的复合结构1.

______________________________(张大了嘴巴),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.独立主格结构2.

____________________________(心狂跳),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3.

_______________________(眼睛闪耀光芒),

thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.WithhermouthwideopenHerheartbeatingwildlyHereyessparklingThegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧5：使用从句定语从句1.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox__________________________________________________________(一直期待的).2.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox__________________________________________________________(用红丝带/蝴蝶结系好的).名词性从句1.____________________________________(好奇里面是什么),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.状语从句Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox______________________________(好像它是这世界上最珍贵的礼物).whichshehadbeenlookingforwardtowhichwastiedwithredribbon(/witharedbow)Curiousaboutwhatwasinsideasifitwerethemostpreciousgiftintheworld“句无霸”Curiousaboutwhatwasinside,theinnocentgirlunwrappedthedelicategiftboxwhichwastiedwitharedbow.

Withherheartbeatingwildly,theinnocentgirl,encouragedbyhermom,unwrappedherdelicategiftboxwhichshehadbeenlookingforwardtoforalongtime.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打开她的礼物盒。①Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.②Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.③WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?④AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.⑤Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”Para.1Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Para.2Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Thehummingbirdflewclose.①形容词The_______________________________________________hummingbirdflewclose.②介词短语__________________________________________,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.③副词___________________________,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.④with结构/非谓语_______________________________________________,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.⑤非谓语Thetinyhummingbirdflewclose_________________________.⑥从句Thetinyhummingbirdflewclose_________________________.___________________________,thetinyhummingbirdflewclose.tiny/cute/adorable/brightlycolored/brightlyfeatheredAftersomehesitation/Afterawhile/Inasecond/WithaflapofherwingsSuddenly/Unexpectedly/CarefullyWithherwingsbeating/HoveringintheskyforawhilewhichmadeiteasierformetokeepaneyeonhermovementsshowingnofearatallWhensherecognizedwhoIwas注意：不是成分越多越好，逻辑和句意的通顺是首位。Thehummingbirdflewclose.Thetinyhummingbirdflewclose,showingnofearatall.Withaflapofherwings,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.→人鸟互动WhensherecognizedwhoIwas,thetinyhummingbirdflewclose.在空中盘旋了一会儿，蜂鸟飞近了，轻轻地落在我的肩膀上，唱着我从未听过的最甜美的旋律。Hoveringintheskyforawhile,thelittlehummingbirdflewcloseandlandedgentlyonmyshoulder,singingthesweetestmelodythatIhadneverheard.Para.1Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.重回农场想起蜂鸟询问近况寻找等候失望离开停好车，看到挤奶房→想起蜂鸟→走近瞧瞧→“她怎么样了呢？”→朋友告知近况→在农场寻找→没找到→失望→准备离开。WhenIpulledupmycar,Isawthemilkinghouse.→WhenIpulledupmycar,_____________________________________(通往废弃挤奶房的小路映入眼帘)Asqueakingcallfarawayremindedmeofthehummingbird.→Alongit,severallittleunknownbirdswereflyingmerrily,_______________________(这让人想起了几周前的情景).I

approachedthemilkinghousetotakeacloselook.→_______________________________________(走近挤奶房),Inoticedthebrand-newwindowand____________________________________(一张充满期待的脸映在窗格上).Howwasthehummingbird?______________________________________________(似乎朋友感觉到了我在想什么).Myfriendtoldmethatthehummingbirdregularlyvisitedthefarm.___________________________________(抱着再次见到小鸟的信念),Istartedwonderinginthefarm.However,Ifailed.Asenseoffrustrationfilledmyheart.Thesunwassinkingbehindthewood.Iwasreadytoleave.thetrackleadingtothedilapidated(荒废的)milkinghousecameintosightwhichrecalledthemomentweeksagoApproachingthemilkinghouse/TakingastepnearertothemilkinghouseanexpectantfacewasreflectedonthepanesItseemedt