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Unit5Omission减省译法1/272/273/274/275/276/277/278/27I.WhatisOmissionasaskill?Amethodtoavoidtranslatingsomewordsintheoriginallanguagewithoutreducingorchangingtheoriginalmeaning.(Prerequisitecondition:Faithfulnessinmeaningdoesn’tsuffer)前提：忠实于原文Thepurposeofomissionistomakethetranslationsoundsmoothandnaturalinthetargetlanguage.(AstrategytoachieveExpressivenessandsometimesEleganceaswell)目标：通顺，自然，增强表示力9/27I.WhatisOmissionasaskill?Thedecisivefactors: a.meaningandstructureoftheoriginallanguage b.grammaticalandlexicalstructureofthetargetlanguage10/27II.TwoTypesofOmission

1.SyntacticOmission句法性减省 differencesatbothwordandsentencelevel2.RhetoricOmission修辞性减省 differencesinthewayofexpressing, e.g.:thesourcelanguage--moregeneralwhilethetargetlanguage--morespecific.11/27Examples:1.Wearelookingforwardwithinteresttoyourreply. 我们带着极大兴趣期望贵方回复。 盼复。2.Agentlemanwilldieforonewhoappreciateshisworthwhileawomanwillbeautifyherselfforonewhoattractsher.

士为知己者死，女为悦己者容。12/273.Pleasemakeseriouseffortstogetthegoodsdispatchedwiththeleastpossibledelay. 请尽快发货，尽可能不要延误。 请速发货，切勿延误。4.Yourpromptreplywouldbegreatlyappreciated. 贵方快速回复将使我们不胜感激。 若能及时回复，不胜感激。 即复为感。13/27SyntacticOmission：

1.冠词省译1.Thesunrisesin

theeastandsetsin

thewest. 太阳东边升起西边落。2.Thepolicemanaskedthedrivertodescribetheaccidentingreaterdetail.警察要求司机把事故经过讲得更详细些。3.Thelittleboypretendedlikeaman. 小男孩假装大人。14/27SyntacticOmission：2.介词省译1.ThestudentsfromGuangzhouliveathomewhile

theothersliveinthedormitory.

广州同学住家里，其它同学住宿舍。2.Nowcomplaintsareheardinallpartsofthatcountry. 该国各地当前怨声载道。3.ThePeople’sRepublicofChinawasfoundedin1949. 1949年中华人民共和国成立。15/27SyntacticOmission：3.代词省译人称代词、反身代词、关系代词1.InJapanitisrudetoblowyournoseandasinChina,rudetoleaveyourchopsticksstandingupinabowlofrice.在日本，擤鼻子很不文雅。而在中国，将筷子竖直插在饭碗里是很不恰当。2.Allthefellowsgatheredaround,stretchingtheirneckslikegeese. 全部小伙子都聚拢来，像鹅一样伸长脖子。16/273.“Youmustfinishyourhomeworkbeforeyougoouttoplay,”saidMumtoTom.

母亲对汤姆说：“你必须做完家庭作业后，才能够出去玩。4.Howdoatomsarrangethemselvesinsolid? 原子在固体中是怎样排列？17/275.Whendeeplyabsorbedinwork,whichheoftenwas,hewouldforgetallabouteatingandsleeping.他经常聚精会神地工作,往往废寝忘食.6.Ifyouwanttokillasnakeyoumusthititfirstontheheadandifyouwanttocatchabandofrobbersyoumustfirstcatchtheirleader. 打蛇先打头，擒贼先擒王。18/27SyntacticOmission：

4.形式代词“It”省译形式主语、形式宾语、时空和天气概念1.Itisonlyshallowpeoplewhojudgebyappearances. 只有浅薄人才以貌取人。2.Hetookituponhimselftopayoffthedebt. 他自愿负责还清债务。19/273.Itwasjustgrowingdark,assheshutthegardengate. 她关院子门时，天黑了。4.Itlookslikerain.You’dbettergohomenow. 好象要下雨了。你回去吧。20/27SyntacticOmission：5.连词省译并列连词、隶属连词(因果连词、条件连词、时间连词等)1.Helookedgloomyandtroubled. 他看上去有些忧郁不安。2.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind? 冬天来了，春天还会远吗？21/273.Justliketheever-changingweather,people’slifeisunpredictable.

天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。4.Let’sthinkofasituationwherethisidiomcanbeused. 我们来想一个能够使用这个习语场所。22/275.Asitwasalreadyratherdark,wedecidedtostopatthetempleforthenight. 天已经很黑了，我们决定在庙里过夜。6.Whenthemassesareofoneheart,everythingbecomeseasy. 群众齐心协力了，一切事情就好办了。

众人一条心，其力可断金。23/27SyntacticOmission：6.动词省译1.Whenthepressuregetslow,theboilingpointbecomeslow. 气压低，沸点就低。2.Thirtyyearsago,concernforenvironmentalissueswasrestrictedtosmallgroupsofscientists.三十年前只有少数科学家关注环境问题。24/273.Therepresentativesofthetwosideshavenowagreedontheproposalsputforwardbythecoordinator.双方代表（已）一致同意协调人方案。4.Thesedevelopingcountriescovervastterritories,comprisealargepopulationandaboundinnaturalresources.这些发展中国家土地辽阔，人口众多，资源丰富。25/27RhetoricOmission：

1.原文重复词语省译1.Universitypostgraduateapplicantswhohadworkedatajobwouldreceivepreferenceoverthosewhohadnot. 报考大学硕士生人，有工作经验优先录用。2.Thecrowdwaspushingharder.Thoseinthemiddleweresqueezedagainsteachothersotightlytheycouldnotmoveinanydirection. 人群越挤越厉害，夹在当中人被挤得动弹不得。26/27RhetoricOmission：

2.不言而喻词语省略1.Forourpart,wefullyrealizedthattoavoidt