Unit+1+People+of+Achievement+Using+Language+writing高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册

UsingLanguageIntroducesomeoneyouadmireThemanwhochangedourunderstandingoftheuniverse.Whatwordswouldyouusetodescribehim?Slightlyodd-lookingIntelligent/clever/wiseFamous/well-knownBrilliant/extraordinary/outstandingKind,gentleWarming-up1.Readandpredictwhatyouwillreadfromthetext.HisachievementsandcontributionsHisscientificdiscoveryHispersonalqualitiesHislikesanddislikesTask11.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Tips:keywords,topicsentences...Task21.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Task2Keywords:Thegreatest…thesmartest…agenius…courageous,madenumerouscontributionstotheworldpara1:Introduction(hisgreatcontributionsandpersonalities)1.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Task2para2:Hisearlylifeandeducationpara3:Hisworkexperienceandachievements1.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Task2Metaphor暗喻，隐喻para4:Hismiddle-lifecrisisappearancePersonification拟人simile明喻storieshumorouspara5:Hisappearanceandstoriesshowinghispersonalities1.Whattypeofwritingisthistext?2.Howdoesthewriterdevelopthetext?ExpositionB.ArgumentationC.BiographyD.PracticalwritingOn18April1955,itwasreportedthatEinstein

hadpassedaway,andthewholeworldmournedthegreatlossofabrilliantscientist.Einstein’sdeathEuphemism[ˈjuːfəmɪzəm]委婉Theorganizationfeature:intimeorder人物简介是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。它涉及人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价等。ConclusionStep1Chooseapersonyou'regoingtowrite.Step2Makealistofthingsyou'regoingtowrite.Step3Finishandreviseyourdraftwithyourpartner.1.出生在一个……的家庭2.在某人十几/二十几/三十几岁的时候

3.长相普通/英俊4.毕业于……5.获得……(方面的)学位get/obtaina…degreein…bebornina…familyinone’steens/twenties/thirtiesordinary/plain-looking/handsome-lookinggraduatefrom…

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6.对……有浓厚的兴趣

7.对……有天赋

8.竭尽全力做某事

9.受……尊重10.献身于devoteoneselftohaveagift/talentfor…show(a)stronginterestin…

berespectedby…tryone’sbesttodosth.makeevery/greatefforttodosth.

11.为……树立榜样

12.被誉为……

13.全心全意为……服务14.高度评价

15.为……作出伟大的贡献makegreatcontributionsto…setanexampleforsb.to…behonoredas…serve…heartandsoulthink/speakhighlyof钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家,他是我国航天事业的先驱.QuanXuesenwasborninawealthyfamilyinHuangzhou,ZhejiangonDecember11,1911andhewasthepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.QuanXuesen,thepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry,wasbornin….QuanXuesen,whowasborn…,wasthepioneerofapioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.QuanXuesen,bornin…,wasthepioneerofapioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.2.李平从…大学毕业之后,就投身于科研事业当中了.Aftergraduatingfrom…University/Havinggraduatedfrom…,LinPindevotedhimselftothescientificresearch.3.毕业后,他去了美国深造,并在那里获得了博士学位.Havinggraduatedfrom…University,hewenttoAmericaforfurthereducationandgainedadoctor’sdegree.Havinggraduatedfrom…University,hewenttostudyinAmerica,wherehegainedadoctor’sdegree.4.凭着他的决心和毅力，他在两年内创下了多项世界纪录并在田径界获得了高度的评价。5.他不仅献身于志愿者工作，而且还全心全意为人民服务。Withgreatdeterminationandperseverance,hesetseveralworldrecordswithintwoyearsandwasthoughthighlyofbytheathleticcircles.Notonlydidhedevotehimselftovoluntarywork,butalsohewaswillingtoservepeopleheartandsoul.6.他是中国最伟大的小说家之一，作为一个杰出的人物他将被永远铭记。HeisoneofthegreatestnovelistinChinaandwillbealwaysrememberedasanoutstandingman.(2020全国卷I)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因注意：1.词数100左右2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。ThePersonIRespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.对社会有突出贡献的人物：1.民族英雄/领导人物/知名人物/

有影响力的人物2.伟大的/勇敢的/成功的/杰出的3.被认为是4.被授予...的头衔5.乐于助人6.深受他的思想影响nationalhero/leadingfigure/famousfigure/influentialfigureagreat/brave/successful/remarkable/anoutstanding...beconsidered/regarded/recognizedasbeawardedthetitleofbereadytohelpothersbegreatlyinfluencedbyhisthoughts对社会突出贡献的人物7.享有声誉8.为...树立好的榜样9.对...做出巨大贡献10.致力于，献身于自己的事业11.有影响，有重要作用12.全心全意为人民服务13.起重要作用have/enjoyagoodreputationsetagoodexamplefor/tomakegreatcontributionstodevoteoneselftoone'scareermakeadifferencetoservethepeopleheartandsoulplayanimportantrole/partin句子：1.我很钦佩MrSun,我的英语老师，一个不多言语的中年男人。IhavegreatadmirationforMr.Sun,myEnglishteacher,amiddle-agedmanoffewwords.2.他的友善和责任感使我钦佩他。ItisbecauseofhisfriendlinessandthesenseofresponsibilitythatIshowgreatadmirationforhim.3每当我考试不及格和情绪低落时，他总是给我及时的鼓励和耐心的指导。WheneverIfailintheexamandaminlowspirits,healwaysgivesmetimelyencouragementandpatientguidance.WheneverIfeelcastdownbecauseofmypooracademicperformance,....4.有了他的经常的鼓励和无条件的信任，我重拾信心然后继续追求我的梦想。Withhisconstantencouragementandunconditionaltrust,Iregainmyconfidenceandcontinuetopursuemydream.5.如果没有他，我也不可能被理想的大学录取。Haditnotbeenforhim,Icouldn'tbeadmittedtomyidealuniversitynow.6.给我们学生树立了一个好榜样，他很值得我们的尊敬。Havingsetagreatexampletousstudents,hefullydeservesmyrespect.7.我最尊敬的人是我的阿姨，一个中年护士，在新冠肺炎期间与病毒做斗争。TheoneIrespectmostismyaunt,amiddle-agednurse,whofoughtagainsttheCOVID-19duringthetoughtimesoftheepidemic.

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8.我最尊敬的人是MissHuang,我的班主任和英语老师，她的教学对我的学习和生活有很大的影响。TheoneIrespectmostisMissHuang,myheadteacherandEnglishteacher,whoseteachinghasmadeagreatdifferencetomystudyandlife.开头：(点出最尊敬的人是谁，是某个人)强调句：Itis...thatIrespectmost.1.TheoneIrespectmostismyneighbor,UncleLi.2.Asforme,mymathteacher,Mr.KongisthepersonIrespectmost.3.ThepersonIloveandrespectmostismymom,anordinarymiddle-agedwoman(同位语)whohasaprofoundinfluenceonmylife.(定语从句)4.Amongthem,thepersonIrespectmostisZhongNanshan,whohasbecomeahouseholdnameforhiscontributionstodefeatingvirus.(定语从句:整体

概述成就)Para2:1.人物简介

2.尊敬和爱戴的原因HeisavolunteerwhoworksasagateguardinourcommunityduringtheepidemicofCOVID-19,andhismaindutyistomeasurebodytemperatureandcheckresidentsforexitandentry.(人物简介)Regardlessoftheriskofgettinginfected,UncleLiisresponsibleandfullydevotedtohisjob.Eveninfreezingweather,hestillstickstohispostandleavesnooneunchecked.Thankstohiseffortsinepidemicpreventionandcontrol,ourneighborhoodhasbeeninagoodstate.(尊敬和爱戴的原因)Para2:1.人物简介

2.尊敬和爱戴的原因Mr.Liuisateacherwhoshowsgreatenthusiasmandloveforteachingandhisstudents.(人物简介)Icanwellrememberhowhisencouragementhasspurreduson.Itishishelpfulnessandkindnessthatwinhimgreatpopularityandagoodreputationamongus.Whateverdifficultieswecomeacross,hedoesn'thesitatetocometoouraid.Insomesense,heisvirtuallyabeaconofhope,urgingusnevertogiveup.Ontopofthat,hisrichexperienceanddevotiontoteachingnotonlygiveuseasyaccesstoprofessionalknowledgebutmostimportantlyshapeourcharacter.(尊敬和爱戴的原因)Para2:1.人物简介

2.尊敬和爱戴的原因ZhongNanshan,amedicalscientist,isaleadingfigureinthebattlesagainstSARSin2003andCOVIDin2020,winninghimtheworldwiderespect.(人物简介)EverytimeIseethepicturesinwhichheisfightingtosavepeople'slives,Icannothelpbeingmovedbyhim.Whatimpressesmemostisthataged84,herushedtothefrontlineoftheepidemicarea

withouthesitation.ZhongNanshanandhisworkmatesworkedtogetherdayandnighttotreatthepatientsinfectedwithCOVID19.Withtheirjointefforts,remarkableresultswereachievedandCOVID19wasfinallyundercontrol.(尊敬和爱戴的原因)Para3回扣主题1.Actually,therearemanyselflesspeoplelikeUncleLiaroundus,whowelldeserveourrespect.2.SuchisMr.Li,adedicated(富有献身精神的)teacherIhavethehighestrespectfor.3.Hisdedicationtoworkisadmirable,whichtrulyinspiresmetobecomearespectedmanlikehiminthefuture.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.TheoneIrespectmostismyneighbor,UncleLi.HeisavolunteerwhoworksasagateguardinourcommunityduringtheepidemicofCOVID-19,andhismaindutyistomeasurebodytemperatureandcheckthepassersforexitandentry.Regardlessoftheriskofgettinginfected,UncleLiisresponsibleanddevotedtohisjob.Eveninterribleweather,hestillstickstohispostandleavesnooneunchecked.Thankstohiseffortsinepidemicpreventionandcontrol,ourneighborhoodhasbeeninagoodstate.Actually,therearemanyselflesspeoplelikeUncleLiaroundus,whowelldeserveourrespect.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunthingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.InmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Mymom,anordinarymiddle-agedwoman,is

thepersonIloveandrespectmost.Bornintoapoorfamily,shehasalwaysbeenindependentandcherishedwhatshehashad.Nowsheisateacher,workswellintomidnightbutseldomcomplains.ThereasonwhyIshowrespectforheristhatsheneverlosestemples,butinsteadalwaysencouragesus.MythoughtsflashedbacktothedayswhenIfeltcastdownonaccountofmypooracademicperformance.Awareofmylowspirits,shetoldmefirmlythataslongasItriedmybest,shewouldtakeprideinmewhatevertheresultwouldbe.Inthemeanwhile,shesecretlystucksomefamoussayingsuchaswherethereisawillthereisawayonmytable,remindingmetokeepapositiveattitudetowardlife.withherconstantencouragementandunconditionaltrust,Iregainedmyconfidenceandcontinuedtopursuemydream.Wereitnotforher,IcouldnotbewhatIamnow.Suchismybelovedmom,asimpleyetgreatwomanlikeabeamofsunshine,brighteningmywayahead.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.IhavegreatadmirationforMr.Sun,myEnglishteacher,amiddle-agedmanoffewwords.First,hishelpfulnessandkindnesswinhimgreatpopularityandagoodreputationamongus.Whateverdifficultieswecomeacross,hedoesn'thesitatetocometoouraid.Insomesense,heisvirtuallyabeaconofhope,encouragingusnevertogiveup.Ontopofthat,itishisrichexperienceanddevotiontoteachingthatnotonlygiveuseasyaccesstoprofessionalknowledgebutmostimportantlyshapeourcharacter.SuchisMr.SunthatIhavethehighestrespectforhim.

Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Amongthem,thepersonIrespectmostisZhongNanshan,whohasbecomeahousholdnameforhiscontributionstodefeatingvirus.(点出最尊敬的人是谁，是某个人)ZhongNanshan,amedicalscientist,isaleadingfigureinthebattlesagainstSARSin2003andCOVIDin2020,winninghimtheworldwiderespect.EverytimeIseethepicturesinwhichheisfightingtosavepeople'slives,Icannothelpbeingmovedbyhim.Whatimpres