《课时把关练》英语选择性必修第三册RJUNIT 4 Part IV Writing 写作专练含答案

UNIT4ADVERSITYANDCOURAGE第课时把关练PartIVWriting妙笔生花——读后续写读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。OneweekendinJuly，Janeandherhusband，Tom，haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately，onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake，JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom，“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp，”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow，Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace，sheturnedaround，hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise，shesawnothingbuttheforestand，farbeyond，asnow-cappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving，butthefarthershewalked，themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall，Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark，JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday，hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy，shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow，Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeditwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream，Janeheardahelicopter.“Isthatforme?”Unfortunately，thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater，anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse，thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemdowniftheycamebackagain.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键前文概要审语篇类型：记叙文审时态：一般过去时审前文大意以及要点第一段：露营的路上夫妻吵架，简出走；第二段：简迷路；第三段：简自救，思念汤姆；第四段：简寻找出路；第五段：简听到直升机的声音。步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节①续写第一段所给首句：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.上文提到简迷路，在野外待了一夜，第二天听到了直升机的声音，她试图吸引直升机的注意。根据第一段的首句提示可知，再没有直升机飞过来，而且夜幕再次降临。本段续写时，要注意描写简继续自救的过程。例如如何度过寒冷的夜晚、简当时的心理感受等。②续写第二段所给首句：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.本段应该描写简继续自救和最终获救的过程。续写时要注意前面提到的直升机以及她是如何引起直升机上人员的注意的。步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节话题激活词汇环境：forest，stream，rock，berry，valley，steep，cave，lake，waterfall困难：hunger，starve，thirsty，injure，broken，blood，panic，shelter，survive（survival），suffer，cold，severe活动：walk，climb，fall，crawl，taste，attempt，struggletoone’sfeet，makeone’swayto，pickup  情绪：tired，breakdown救援：rescueteam，doctor，searchfor意志品质：calm，courage，will评价：amazing，makeit句式翻译1.晚上的温度比白天更低了，简穿上了她的黄色上衣。__________________________________________________________________________________________2.她感到身心疲惫。（both...and连接两个状语）___________________________________________________________________________________________3.她继续向前走，因为她真的很想尽快见到汤姆。（because引导原因状语从句）__________________________________________________________________________________________4.简沿着小溪走了大约两个小时，觉得很累，所以她找到了一个平坦的地面来度过漫长而艰难的夜晚。（so连接并列分句）___________________________________________________________________________________________5.她正沿着溪边走。（主谓状）___________________________________________________________________________________________6.她听到直升机从头顶上飞过。（主谓宾宾补）___________________________________________________________________________________________7.直升机发现了她，把她带到了她丈夫那里。（and连接并列成分）___________________________________________________________________________________________8.他给了她曾经收到过的最温暖的拥抱。（定语从句）___________________________________________________________________________________________步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级1.将句1升级为so连接的并列句___________________________________________________________________________________________2.把句2、3升级为含although引导的让步状语从句的复合句___________________________________________________________________________________________3.用动词-ing形式作状语升级句4___________________________________________________________________________________________4.用bedoing...when升级句5、6___________________________________________________________________________________________5.把句7、8升级为含who引导的定语从句的复合句___________________________________________________________________________________________步骤五：高分在即——连句成篇，认真誊写并仔细检查Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________课时把关练PartIVWriting参考答案步骤三1.Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime.Janeputonheryellowblouse.2.Shefeltexhaustedbothphysicallyandemotionally.3.ShecontinuedwalkingforwardbecauseshereallywantedtomeetTomassoonaspossible.4.Janefollowedthestreamforabouttwohoursandfelttired，soshefoundaflatgroundtospendthelongandhardnight.5.Shewaswalkingalongthestream.6.Sheheardahelicopterflyingoverhead.7.Thehelicopterfoundherandtookhertoherhusband.8.Hegaveherthewarmesthugshehadeverreceived.步骤四1.Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime，soJaneputonheryellowblouse.2.Althoughshefeltexhaustedbothphysicallyandemotionally，shecontinuedwalkingforwardbecauseshereallywantedtomeetTomassoonaspossible.3.Followingthestreamforabouttwohours，Janefelttired，soshefoundaflatgroundtospendthelongandhardnight.4.Shewaswalkingalongthestreamwhensheheardahelicopterflyingoverhead.5.Thehelicopterfoundherandtookhertoher