【课件】回复询问信+课件

Aletterofreplytoinquiry高考写作之回复询问信

回复询问信特点及写作步骤题型特点：回复询问信是回复他人问题的信件。写作思路与步骤：第一步：收到来信+写信目的第二步：回复对方问题第三步：表达期待假定你假定你是李华，你收到外国朋友Peter的邮件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情(COVID-19epidemic)期间线上教学的情况。请你给他回复邮件：1.课程与时间；2.你的学习状态；3.你的期待。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯01020304ThinkingThinking(审题）Step1体裁：回复询问信话题：线上教学情况时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称，第三人称开头正文:结尾：Para.1Para.2Para.3①表明收到来信②说明写信目的

表达期待Outlining（列出提纲）Step2要点3课程与时间学习状态要点2要点1线上教学情况正文：Outlining（列出提纲，写出要点）Step21、课程与时间

haveonlinecourseslearn9subjectsbescheduledtobeginfrom8amto5pmeachclasslasts45minutes2、学习状态becomeanindependentlearneradapttothiswayoflearningrequireself-disciplineandconcentrationcontrolmyselfDearPeter,I’msogladtohearfromyou.LearningthatyouareconcernedaboutouronlineschoolingduringtheCOVID-19epidemic,I’dliketosharewithyousomerelatedinformation.Thoughthespringsemesterispostponed,schoolingcontinuesonlineunderourteachers’guidance.ThesubjectswelearnincludeChinese,English,Mathsandsoon.Eachofthedaily8classesisscheduledtolast45minutes,witha15-minutebreakbetweenclassesforself-relaxation.Learningathomeischallenging,whichrequiresself-disciplineandconcentration.Gradually,I’veadaptedtosuchauniquewayoflearningandbecomeanindependentlearner.However,Istillhopetoreturntocampus,whereIcanenjoyface-to-faceclasseswithmyclassmatesandteachers.Ifirmlybelievewecanfighttheepidemicandeverythingwillbebetter.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHuaPolishing(润色定稿）Step3高考作文高分卷的特点

形式美：字体清晰工整、卷面整洁美观、段落层次分明。内容美：避免低级错误，语言词汇、句型结构的准确性、合理性、丰富性和多样性。逻辑美：使用恰当的连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。小结亮点句1Iamwritingtosharewithyousome

relevantdetails.AsforChinesetablemanners,Iamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetails.Letmetellyousomedetails.亮点句1AsforyourlastletteraskingaboutChinesetablemanners,

Iamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetails.AsforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutChinesetablemanners,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Letmetellyousomedetails.亮点句1DelightedtolearnfromyourlastletterthatyouareinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome,

IamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetailsaboutChinesetablemanners.Letmetellyousomedetails.亮点句1你在信中询问我们学校学生的体育运动情况，我现在写信告诉你一些细节。Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschool,

Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.中英Letmetellyousomedetails.亮点句1知道你对中国的剪纸很感兴趣，我写信跟你分享一些相关细节。DelightedtolearnfromyourlastletterthatyouarekeenonChinesepaper-cutting,Iamwritingto

sharewithyousomerelevantdetails.Letmetellyousomedetails.中英亮点句1Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingabout…,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Delighted

tolearnfromyourlastletterthat…,Iamwritingtoshare

withyousomerelevantdetails(about…).亮点句2Youhadbetterarrivethereearly.Youhad

betterarrivethereearly,becausebeinglateisimpolite.Youhad

betterarrivethereearly,becausebeingpunctualisconsideredpoliteinChina.Youshouldarrivethereearly.亮点句2Youareencouragedto

arrivethereearly,becauseyouwillhaveachancetoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Youareencouragedto

arrivethereearly,makingitpossibletoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Youshouldarrivethereearly.亮点句2你可以早点到，可以提前熟悉环境。Youareencouragedtoarrivethereearly,makingitpossibletofamiliarizeyourselfwiththeenvironment.Icando…中英亮点句2反对浪费的标语在校园餐厅到处可见，可以提醒我们不要浪费食物。Slogansopposingwastecanbeseeneverywhereattheschoolcanteen,makingitpossibletoremindusnottowastefood.Icando…中英亮点句2Youhad

better

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considered…Youareencouragedto…,becauseyouwillhaveachanceto……,makingitpossibleto…亮点句3Itisnecessaryforyoutobringaproperpresent/gift.Ifyou’dliketobringagift,abunchofflowersorsomefreshfruitwillbeagoodchoice.Youshouldbringagift.亮点句3Itisnecessaryforyouto…Ifyou’dliketo…,…willbeagoodchoice.亮点句4Itisimportantforyoutolearnmoreaboutpropertablemanners.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemanners

isofgreatimportance.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemannersplaysavitalroleinbeingaguest.亮点句4勤劳、负责和热心肠对于一个志愿者来说很重要。Beingdiligent,responsibleandwarm-hearted

isofgreatimportanceto

avolunteer.Beingdiligent,responsibleandwarm-heartedplaysavitalroleinbeing

avolunteer.中英英…beofgreatimportance…playsavitalrolein亮点句4…isofgreatimportance.…playsavitalroleinbeing…亮点句5Itistheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeat.ItistheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeatsincetheyarewellrespectedinChina.Theelderlyarethefirsttoeat.亮点句5体育馆配有大操场，这使我们有了体育运动的机会。Itisthenewstadiumequippedwithabigplaygroundthatoffersusanopportunitytodoawiderangeofsportsactivities.中英Itis…that/who…亮点句5Itis…who/thatofferssb.anopportunitytodo…Itis…who/that…,since(因为)…亮点句6Traditionally,youshouldusechopsticks.DoastheRomansdowheninRome,andyoushouldusethechopsticks.Youshouldusechopsticks.亮点句6TypicalofChinesetablemanners,chopsticksconveythecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.TypicalofChinesetablemanners,chopsticksnotonlyhavespecialsignificancebutalsoconveythecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.Youshouldusechopsticks.亮点句6剪纸具有中国文化的典型特征，不仅有特殊的意义，而且表现了中国传统文化的内涵和本质。TypicalofChineseculture,papercuttingnotonlyhasspecialsignificancebutalsoconveysthecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.中英Itis…that/who…亮点句6Typicalof…,…notonlydo…,butalsodo…亮点句7EatingwithoutmuchnoiseisconsideredpoliteinChina.EatingwithoutmuchnoisemeanspolitenessinChina,whichisattachedgreatimportancetoineveryfamily.Youcan’tmakenoisewhileeating.亮点句7令我高兴的是，一个新的体育馆已经建成，它变成了我们学校的标志。Tomygreatjoy,anewstadiumhasbeensetup,whichhasbecomethelandmarkinourschool.中英非限制性定语从句…,which…亮点句7此外，随着新体育馆的建成，可以开展各种体育活动，其中乒乓球、足球和跑步比赛非常受欢迎。Besides,withthenewstadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportsactivitiescanbecarriedout,amongwhichtabletennis,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.中英非限制性定语从句…,which…亮点句7就我个人而言，没有什么比打篮球更好,打篮球有助于跟别人合作。AsfarasIamconcerned,thereisnothingbetterthanplayingbasketball,whichcontributestomecooperatingwithothers.中英非限制性定语从句…,which…亮点句7非限制性定语从句…,which…非限制性定语从句…,介词+which…亮点句8ThisexperiencecanattributetoyourbetterunderstandingofChineseculture.ThisexperiencecannotonlyattributetoyourbetterunderstandingofChineseculture,butalsobroadenyourhorizon.Itismeaningful.notonlyattributeto…butalsobroaden…亮点句8这次活动不仅能有助于我们与别人的合作，而且拓展了我们的视野。Thisactivity

notonlyattributestouscooperatingwithothers,butalsobroadensourhorizon.中英亮点句8…notonlyattribute(s)to…,butalsobroaden(s)ourhorizon.亮点句9Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,youcanexperiencethepowerofChinesecultureanddohaveagoodtime.Ihopeyouhaveagoodtime.亮点句8希望我提供的信息对你有帮助。Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.中英Hopefully,…亮点句8希望你有机会亲自来体验。Hopefully,youcancomeandhavearealexperienceofit.中英Hopefully,…亮点句8Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.表达「邀请体验或表达祝愿」Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.表达「活动意义与体会」Thisexperiencecannotonlyattributetoyourbetterunderstandingof…,butalsobroadenyourhorizon.表达「回复具体信息」Youareencouragedto…,makingitpossibleto…Ifyou’dliketo…,…willbeagoodchoice.表达「写信目的」Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingabout…,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Whatdoyoufind?Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Letmetellyousomedetails.AsforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutChinesetablemanners,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.DelightedtolearnfromyourlastletterthatyouareinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome,IamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetailsaboutChinesetablemanners.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Youshouldarrivethereearly.Youhad

betterarrivethereearly,becausebeingpunctualisconsideredpoliteinChina.Youareencouragedtoarrivethereearly,becauseyouwillhaveachancetoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Youareencouragedto

arrivethereearly,makingitpossibletoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Youshouldbringagift.Itisnecessaryforyoutobringaproperpresent/gift.Ifyou’dliketobringagift,abunchofflowersorsomefreshfruitwillbeagoodchoice.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Itisimportantforyoutolearnmoreaboutpropertablemanners.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemannersisofgreatimportance.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemannersplaysavitalroleinbeingaguest.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Theelderlyarethefirsttoeat.Youshouldusechopsticks.ItistheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeatsincetheyarewellrespectedinChina.TypicalofChinesetablemanners,chopsticksnotonlyhavespecialsignificancebutalsoconveythecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Youcan’tmakenoisewhileeating.Itismeaningful.EatingwithoutmuchnoisemeanspolitenessinChina,whichisattachedgreatimportancetoineveryfamily.ThisexperiencecannotonlyattributetoyourbetterunderstandingofChineseculture,butalsobroadenyourhorizon.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Ihopeyouhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.锤炼词汇askingaboutrequiringsomethingaboutsomedetailsrelevantdetailsimportantvital010203significant锤炼词汇make/helpattributetotakepartinparticipateinshowconvey040506锤炼句式Iamwritingthislettertotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyhometown._________________________________________greatchangesinmyhometown,______________________________________.01Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutthe

greatchangesinmyhometown,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.锤炼句式Thetrafficinmyhometownhaschangedalot.Thehigh-speedrailwayshavebeenbuiltsothatthepeopleobtaineasierwaystotravelaround.______________________________________andmoresubwaylinesunderconstruction,__________________________________,offeringuseasierwaystotravelaround.02Withhigh-speedrailwaysrunninginalldirectionsandmoresubwaylinesunderconstruction,

thepublictransportationisswiftlydeveloping,

offeringuseasierway