北师大版高三英语一轮复习类型二第3讲续写门话题历险脱困课件

第三部分写作专题突破类型二读后续写第3讲续写热门话题历险脱困阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2024·湖北省七市联考)EzriandOliverweresokeentoclimbthemountainthattheybeggedtojointheirdadBrandonforanotherhike．Justafter8a．m．onabeautifulSundaymorning，theysetoff．Brandon'sbackpackheldhisphone，Clifbars(能量棒)，packetsofapplesauce，apples，waterbottlesandfishinggear．Brandonhadplannedavariedrouteupthemountain．Thewindingupwardslopewasfunanduneventful．Nearthetop，thicksnowblanketedthepath．Excitedly，thekidsracedacrossthehardsurface．Theysharedthesecond-lastClifbarandrestedforanhour．Brandonlookedaround．Hisphoneshowed1:30p．m．andnosignals．Whenthekidsstarteddownthefarsideoftheslope，Brandonsaid，“Youguysreallywanttofindthosefishinglakes，don'tyou？”“Oh，yes！”Ezrisaid．Sotheytookanunfamiliarroutedowntheothersideofthemountain．BythetimeBrandonrealizedthepathhadbecomeananimaltrailalongsideastream，itmadesensetokeepfollowingit．Thestreamsangtothem，andtheykeptfollowingitdown．Midafternoon，whenthesundisappearedbehindheavygrayclouds，theysuddenlyfeltlost，coldandhungry．Forhalfanhourtheycautiouslymoveddownwarduntiltheyreachedasteepcliff(悬崖)edge．Thestreambecameanoisy，six-metrewaterfall．Mistenvelopedthemasthewaterracedoverahugerock．Brandoncursed(咒骂)himselffortakinganunknownroutedown．TheyheldhandsandincheddownuntilOliverslidonalooserockandallthreewentflying．Brandonwipedbloodfromhisforeheadandgatheredhissenses．Wasanyonehurt?Oliver，cryingandshivering，seemedokay．Ezriwasweeping，butshetooappeareduninjured．Brandonhimselfdidn'tfeelanythingworsethanthewoundonhisforehead．Thebackpackwasstuckintherockssixmetresaway．Hesawnousetryingtofinditback．Theairwascoldandgettingcolder．Theywerewetandtired．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Tosavethekids，Brandonrealizedhehadtolookforawayoutalone．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ahelicopterwiththefatherandmanyvolunteerssetoffimmediately．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导：Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可描写Brandon独自离开去寻找出路，最终联系上911。第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写Brandon和志愿者成功找到孩子们，Brandon非常感动。范文佳作：To

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alone．Afterhemadethedecision，hewrappedhiscoataroundthemandkissedeachofthemontheforehead．“Stayhere，nomatterwhat．I'llgoforhelp，”herepeatedseveraltimesinatremblingvoice．Inthefollowinghours，Brandonwalkedthroughthebushandevensufferedanotherbadfallontheway．Exhaustedandbloodied，heemergedfromtheforestandbumpedintoafamilyofhikers，whocalled911．A

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immediately．Onthereturntrip，Brandonanxiouslydescribedthegenerallocationofthechildrentotherescuers．Finally，afteralongsearch，theysuccessfullylocatedthepoorchildren．Uponthehelicopter'sarrival，Brandonjumpedoffandrantoembracehischildren，movedtoseesomanystrangersinbrightredjackets．Everytimehethinksofbrightredjackets，hewouldfeelhewasnotalone．There'salwayssomeoneouttherewhoiswillingtohelp．话题佳句：1．Whenwereacheddeepintotheforest，suddenlythesmogspreadeverywhereandwewerenotabletoseeeachotherclearlyandlostourway．当我们到达森林深处时，烟雾突然弥漫，我们无法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。2．Theybothspentaminutecatchingtheirbreathandcalmedthemselvesdown．他们两人都花了一分钟时间喘了口气，让自己冷静下来。3．Theicywaterpiercedmyskinlikeneedles．Iwasanxioustoclimboutbymyself，butcountlesspreviousfailuresstoppedmefromstrugglingagain．冰冷的水像针一样刺痛我的皮肤。我渴望自己爬出去，但之前无数次的失败阻止了我再次挣扎。4．Hebegantoshakeoffthesnow，movedsnowawaywithbarehands，andmanagedtopullhimselfout．他开始抖落积雪，徒手把雪移开，并设法把自己拉了出来。5．Tomwasshockedtofindthatthewaterkeptrising．Hewastrappedinhishouseandhisheartsuddenlyjumpedintohisthroat．汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。6．Gatheringallhisstrength，carefully，bitbybit，Simpsonclimbedoutofthesnowhole．辛普森用尽全身力气，一点一点地，小心翼翼地从雪洞里爬了出来。7．Thefrontdoorwasonlyafeetaway，butthewindwassostrongthatJessicahadtofightherwayoutofthecarandstruggledintothehouse．离前门只有一英尺远，但风太大了，杰西卡不得不奋力从车里出来，艰难地进了房子。8．Hefeltweakbutotherwisefine．Hewasgladtobeoutofdangerandreunitedwithhisfamily．他感到虚弱，但其他方面还好。他很高兴脱离了危险，与家人团聚了。9．MomremindedmeofhowfortunateIwasfromthejawsofthealligator．Itwasanarrowescape．妈妈提醒我，我能从短吻鳄的口中逃脱是多么幸运。这是一次死里逃生。10．Finally，wewentoutoftheforestthattrappedus．Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm．最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。11．Ourbeinglostadded