高中英语写作-议论文(正反观点)

英语写作议论文——正反观点Writing作为两年来最为热门的网络社交媒体，微信（WeChat）在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，很多高中生开通了自己的微信。请你就这一现象写一篇英语短文，内容要点如下：1.正面影响：方便获取有用信息，方便交流；2.负面影响：某些信息误导学生，影响学习；3.你的看法。注意：词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。WiththepopularityoftheInternet,WeChatisbecomingincreasinglypopularamonghighschoolstudents.________________________ ______________________________________Howdowewritethearticle?四步写作一、审题：仔细阅读题目要求，了解文章的体裁（议论文）和结构（三段式），确定时态（一般现在时）和人称（第三人称）写作步骤二、布局：通常三段式写文，即开头、正文、结尾。议论文——论点（提出问题）论证（分析问题）论据（解决问题）写作步骤三、书写：第一段（开头）：微信（WeChat）在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，很多高中生开通了自己的微信。第二段（正文）：

1.正面影响：方便获取有用信息，方便交流；

2.负面影响：某些信息误导学生，影响学习；第三段（结尾）：

3.你的看法。写作步骤四、检查：

1.是否有一个明确的中心论点；

2.时态和人称是否正确；

3.是否有linkingwords，层次分明，过渡自然。

4.语言是书面语，一般不用口语。关键步骤

第三步：书写草稿按布局写出关键词语、句子、关联词等。第一段（开头）：已给出第二段（正文）：

1.正面影响：方便获取有用信息getuseful information

，方便交流communication

；

2.负面影响：某些信息误导学生

misleadstudents，影响学习affecttheirstudies；第三段（结尾）：

3.你的看法。明确赞成一方。哪一方？怎么做？ WeChatindeedplaysanimportantroleinourlife.However,wemustuseitwiselysothatitcanserveusbetter。OtherwordsItisconvenientforustogetalotofusefulinformation.asmuchinformationaspossiblecontributetoathomeandabroadthroughWeChat/usingWeChat/byusingWeChat

communicatewithsb.keepintouchwithothershaveabadeffectonmisleadtakeinOtherwordsspendtimeon(indoing)sth./taketimetodo…havenotimelefttodosth.bedevotedto/concentrateon/beburriedin/beabsorbedinbeaddictedtoplayanimportantrole/partinreasonableOnlyinthewaycanwemakeitserveusbetter.LinkingWordsNotonly……butalso……AswellasFirstly,….secondly,….What’smore/besides/inaddition/moreover/furthermoreHowever/ontheotherhandInstead/onthecontraryconsideringthatInmyopinion/asforme/asfarasI’mconcerned/personally,Ithinkthat…

Example

WiththepopularityoftheInternet,WeChatisbecomingincreasinglypopularamonghighschoolstudents.ThroughWeChat,studentscanquicklygetusefulinformationathomeandabroad.Besides,WeChatisagoodwayofcommunication,whichcanmakeuskeeptrackofeachotherconveniently.

However,everycoinhastwosides.Thereisnodoubtthat

WeChatcanalsobringsomenegativeeffectsonstudents.Becausesomeinformationismisleading,someyoungpeopleareeasilytakeninattimes.What’smore,addictedto

WeChat,studentscan’tconcentrateontheirstudies.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,WeChatindeedplaysanimportantroleinourlife.However,wemustuseitwiselysothatitcanserveusbetter.Attention1.三段式写文，正面观点可放在第一段中，也可放第二段。2.要点齐全，适当增加的语句要围绕要点展开。3.尽可能使用短语、固定句式、主从句等。4.过渡词要自然恰当。5.力求句句为佳句。6.书写规范，卷面整洁。WriteagainWiththepopularityoftheInternet,WeChatisbecomingincreasinglypopularamonghighschoolstudents.1ByusingWeChat,wecannotonlygetalotofusefulinformationathomeandabroad,butalsocommunicationwithmorepeoplefromthedifferentcities.

2Also,itismoreconvenientforustokeepintouchwithothers.3However,ontheotherhand,WeChathasanegativeeffectontheyoungpeople.

4Sometimes,someinformationcouldmisleadthemsothattheyaretakenineasily.5Tomakemattersworse,theyspendalargeamountoftimeonWeChat,sotheycan’tdevotethemselvestotheirstudies.6AsfarasI’mconcerned,weshoulduseWeChatreasonably.7Onlyinthewaycanwemakeitserveusbetter.LookOnebyOne1.ByusingWeChat,wecan

notonlygetalotofusefulinformationathomeandabroad,butalsocommunicationwithmorepeoplefromthedifferentcities.=ThroughWeChat,notonly

canwegetasmuchusefulinformationaspossibleathomeandabroad,butalsocommunicationwithmorepeoplefromthevariouscities.2Also,itismoreconvenientforustokeepintouchwithothers.3However,ontheotherhand,WeChathasanegativeeffectontheyoungpeople.4Sometimes,someinformationcouldmisleadthemsothattheyaretakenineasily.=Consideringthattheyarelackinginexperience,someinformationcouldmisleadthemsothattheyaretakenineasily.5Tomakemattersworse,theyspendalargeamountoftimeonWeChat,sotheycan’tdevotethemselvestotheirstudies.=Worsestill/what’sworse,theyspendalargeamountoftimethattheyshouldhavetakentostudyonWeChat.Asaresult,theycan’tbedevotedtotheirstudies.6AsfarasI’mconcerned,weshoulduseWeChatreasonably.7Onlyinthewaycanwemakeitserveusbetter.双方观点的写作Wehavehadaclassmeetingtodayonwhetherweshouldgivemoneytobeggarsandwehavedifferentopinions.Somebelievethatweshouldgivemoneytothosewhoareinbadneedofourhelp.Amongthesebeggarsaretheelderly，drop-outsandthedisabled,whocanhardlymakealiving1______________________oldage,povertyorphysicalinability.dueto/becauseof/owingto填写过渡词Manymorestudents,2_______,thinkweshouldn’tgivethemmoney3_____________mostofthebeggarsarebegginginthehopeofearningsomeeasymoney.4___________________________________________,togivemoneywouldencouragethemtobelazy5________________theyhavetheabilitytowork.

6

____________________________________,__________weshouldhelpthepeopleoftheinferiorgroup,7____weshouldremainsensiblewhengivingthemmoney.buthoweverbecause/since/asBesides/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermoreevenif/eventhoughIngeneral/Inshort/Allinall/Todrawaconclusion双方观点的写作

第一段

Wehavehadaclassmeetingtodayonwhether

…….（讨论的主题）andwehavedifferentopinions.

第二段Somebelievethatweshould…….(陈述理由)Ontheotherhand,morestudents,however,thinkweshouldn’t…...(陈述理由)

第三段

Inshort,weshould……,butweshouldremainsensiblewhen……(明确观点)Usefulexpressions

1.theminority/majorityof...2.somepeople…….Others…….3.befor/againstapprove/disapproveofagree/disagreewith/that……beinfavourof/beopposedto最近一则关于“狼爸”通过严厉的家教,甚至鞭打子女促使他们考上北大的报道掀起了讨论的热潮。你们学校上周末也因此开展了一场“IsWolfDadapproachwrong?”的讨论,你对辩论赛作了一份总结。20%的学生认为“狼爸”方法正确80%的学生不赞成这种方法1.教会孩子自律2.解决中国父母过分溺爱孩子的问题1.方法粗暴,甚至是违法的2.使孩子更叛逆3.孩子童年快乐更重要［写作内容］

1.以上表格的内容；参考词汇：rebelliousadj.叛逆的self-discipline自律

2.你的看法。Writing[参考范文]

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