高考英语复习写作第15讲如何写议论文牛津译林版

第15讲怎样写议论文第1页一、魔法导航1.明确论点论点是议论文灵魂和统帅。但要注意一篇议论文只有一个中心论点,有时

能够有分论点。论点应鲜明、准确、概括,而不可模棱两可。2.选取恰当论据论据是用来证实论点材料,有事实论据和理论论据两种。论据必须围绕中

心论点而展开。另外,论据还必须含有经典性,其表述要精要,只要表述出与论

点相关内容即可。3.确定合理论证角度论证是议论文写作主要步骤,其基本类型有立论和驳论两种。立论从正面

叙述,驳论从反面叙述。——思维缜密,论证有力第2页4.明确写作思绪在高中阶段“引入问题——分析问题——处理问题”是最惯用写作思绪,

有时还可依据需要在文章结尾强化论点或给出推论,所以“总——分——

总”式结构是议论文最惯用写作思绪。5.灵活利用论证方法例证法(用经典事例作论据来证实论点)、对比论证(这种方法能够增强论证

鲜明性)、反证法(从反面论证自己观点合理性)、引证法(引用名人名言

等)是最惯用论证方法,同学们应熟练掌握。第3页二、惯用句式(1)Opinionson...varyfrompersontoperson.(2)Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.(3)Somepeopleareinfavorof/for/againsttheideathat...(4)Somepeoplebelievethat...Othersarguethat...(5)Ontheotherhand,...peopleobjectthat...(6)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyview/Personallyspeaking...(7)Asisvividlydescribedinthepictureabove...(8)Accordingtothepicturesabove,wecanseethat...(9)It'sobviousthat...(10)Onlyinthiswaycanwe...(11)It'shightimethat...第4页三、典题示例

真题在线(福建)孩子成长和教育是社会热议话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过分依赖等

现象十分严重。请阅读下面漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求:1.描述漫画内容;2.分析漫画所揭示问题;3.提出你看法。第5页

注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;3.词数120左右;4.文中不能出现考生详细信息。参考词汇:铺路pavetheway第6页Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.

审题谋篇文章体裁议论文中心人称第三人称主体时态普通现在时关键点布局第一段:描述漫画主要内容(thechild,thefatherandthemother)。第二段:分析漫画所揭示问题。

第三段:提出自己看法。1.过分保护孩子危害;2.提出处理问题提议。第7页考场作文:Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Thewell-dressedboywalksproudlyandlooksvery①relaxing.However,hismotherispavingthewayforhim.Meanwhile,hisfatheriswalkingbehindhim,holdinghisjackettopreventhimfrom②hurt-ing.Asweallknow,mostChineseparentsareoverprotectingtheirchildren.It'stypicalofthemtogivetheirchildren③thattheywant.Itdoesgreatharmtotheirdevelopmentandgrowth.Personally,parentsshouldgivetheirchildrenplentyofspacewheretheycanimprovetheira-bilitytoliveontheirown.It'samustforthemtoadapttothesocietyandliveahappylifeinthefuture.文章提升:1.修改错误:1)“人感到……”应使用-ed形容词,故应将①

relaxing改为

。2)hurt与him(指代孩子)组成被动关系,故应将

②hurting改为

。3)that引导宾语从句既不在从句中担当句子成

分,也没有任何意义,故将③that改为

。2.提升提议:将画线部分变成主从复合句:

阅卷现场第8页参考范文:Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,

wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthe

motherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthe

hopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethe

wayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhave

noindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextreme-

lybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencourage

theirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthis

waycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.第9页

答案1.修改错误:1)relaxed2)beinghurt3)whatever2.提升提议:It'stypicalofthemtogivetheirchildrenwhatevertheywant,which

doesgreatharmtotheirdevelopmentandgrowth.第10页四、高分秀场(江西九江高三二模)近年来,微信(WeChat)成为了人们日常生活中必不可少通讯工具,尤其在今

年春节期间,“微信抢红包热”(Redenvelopfever)风靡全国。请对这一现象

写一篇100词左右短文,内容包含以下几点:1.使用微信利与弊。2.自己看法和提议。[我来试写]Inrecentyears,WeChatisbecomingincreasinglypopular.

第11页

答案Onepossibleversion:Inrecentyears,WeChatisbecomingincreasinglypopular.“Redenvelop”fever

hassweptthecountryespeciallyduringthisSpringFestival.TherearemanyreasonsforWeChattobeknown.Tobeginwith,WeChatisarela-

tivelycheapwayofcommunication,whichcutsdownthecostofmakingaphone

call.Next,WeChatistothetasteofthemajorityofpeoplewithitsvariousfunc-

tions,anditisavailableeverywhereatanytime.However,problemsalsoexist.Firstly,ou