2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写：和父亲去爬山 课件

和父亲去爬山Ilookedatthe

steep,rockymountainaheadofmeandknewthatmystrengthhadabandonedme.Eventhefreshbeartrackspressedintherecentlyfallensnowfailedtomakemetakeanotherstep.Mytiredeyesmetmyfather’s,andIfelttooexhaustedfortears.“Leaveme.Seekhelp.Returnforme.Icannotmovemylegs,”I

utteredwearily.Earlierthatday,myfatherandIsetoffonabriefjourney

accompaniedbymybrotherandafriendwhoactedasourguide.Ourcompanionhadassuredusthatitwouldbeaneffortlesstwohourhikingthroughanaturalenvironment.Wewereeagerandfilledwithanticipation.Havingspentthespring,summer,andearlyautumnhikinginthemountainswithmyfather,Ihadbeenconfidentthatthishikewouldpresentnodifficulties.However,fromthestart,wefoundourselvesoverasnow-coveredridge,anditappearedrougherthanexpected.Astwohourspassedwithoutreachingourdestination,itbecameevidentthatourfriendhadmadeamistake.Wehadnotyetreachedthefalls,yetheinsistedthattheywerejustashortdistanceaway.Despitebeingaccompaniedbyfallingsnowandhowlingwinds,wepressedon.Bythetimewefinallyarrivedatthefalls,darknessandwearinesshadtakenholdofus.Nevertheless,wecouldn’thelpbutbefascinatedbythecharmingpink,green,andcopperasweobservedthegracefulfishswimminginitsnaturalhabitat.Aslateasitwas,wecouldonlyrestandenjoythesceneryforashortwhileinordertomakeitbacktothecarbeforedark.Ourfriendassuredusthatwe’dfindtherestofthehikeeasyandshort.However,itprovedtobeanythingbut.Themountainweencounterednextwasthesteepestwehadfacedsofar.EachstepItookfeltlikemylegswerebeingsqueezedintomystomach.Asweclimbeddown,mylegsbecameincreasinglyknotted,anditbroughtgreatpaintomyknees.Wehopedthateachclimbwouldbethelast,onlytofindanotherpeakahead.P1:Darknessenvelopingus,mylegsreachapointofgivingout.P2:Withhisencouragement,Istruggledtomyfeet.v.覆盖，包住分发，耗尽，用完情节线索（倒叙）：setoffonabriefjourney-----hikingthroughanaturalenvironment-----Astwohourspassedwithoutreachingourdestination-----pressedon-----arrivedatthefalls------onlytofindanotherpeakahead情感线索：I：mystrengthhadabandonedme/exhausted/cannotmovemylegs-----mylegsreachapointofgivingout------Withhisencouragement,IstruggledtomyfeetP1Myreactions:(Theicywindstarthowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.

)1.feelings：breakdown崩溃depression/disappointment/frustration

沮丧

despair/desperation/hopelessness绝望

fear/scare/fright/panic/horror恐惧anxiety焦虑

sb.feltamixtureof+情绪1+and+情绪2+wellingupinsb.’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.

某人感觉着一股混杂着...和...的情绪在内心升腾

，奔涌2.actions:fell/slumped/collapsedtotheground3.words:giveupaskforhelpFather’sreactions:1.feelings:

worry/concernheartbrokensb.wasoverwhelmed/overcome/seizedwith+情绪Therewasapparent+情绪+insb’svoice/eyes/expression/behavior

某人的声音/眼神/表情/行为中带着明显的......2.actions：patted/slappedmyshoulderputhisarmaroundmyshoulder

Helookedatmeandsmiledwithathumbup.heldupone'sthumbwithanencouragingsmile3.words:Onestepatatimewillalwaysreachthedestination.makeit/comeonP2:Myfather:stretchedouthishand/reachedouttosteadymeI:

A,BandCstoodup,tookadeepbreathandregainedmynerveMyfather:

主句，doing

Myfatherwalkedbesideme,offeringsupportandstrength.Ending:madeitbacktothecargotovertheridge结尾：perseverance;willpowerThishikeisnotjustaboutreachingadestination;itisaboutovercomingobstructionsandgrowingstrongertogether.Despitethedangerandhardshipwefaced,weweregratefulfortheexperienceandthememorieswecreatedtogether.Italsoremindedmeofthebeautyandpowerofnature,whichweshouldalwaysrespectandappreciate.Successwasnotamountainntobeclimbedinasingleleap,butapathtobewalkedstepbydeterminedstep.

成功不是一跃而上的山峰，而是一条需要坚定步伐一步一步走过的路。Friendshipislikethelightoffireflies.Thedarkitis,thebrighterthelightwillbe.

友谊就像萤火虫的光。天越黑，光就月亮。Today’sexperiencewaslikeaneverlastingflowerbloomingintheriverofmymemories.

今天的经历就像一朵花永远绽放在我的记忆长河中。升华表达Darknessenvelopingus,mylegsreachapointofgivingout.Theicywindstarthowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.

Ifeltamixtureofdespairandpanicwellingupinmyheartandsurgingthroughme.Mybodyslumpedtothegroundasifithadlostallcontrol.Myfather'sfacewasetchedwithworry.Hekneltbesideme,puthishandonmyshoulderandsaidsoftly,"Youcandothis,son.We'llgetthroughthistogether.Justtakeonestepatatime."Hiswordsgavemearayofhope.Withhisencouragement,Istruggledtomyfeet.Myfather’shandreachedouttosteadyme.Istoodup,tookadeepbreath,andregainedmynerve.Everymuscleinmybodyscreamedinprotest,butIforcedmyselftomove.Myfatherwalkedbesideme,offeringwordsofsupportandstrength.Aswetookeachstep,ItoldmyselfthatIcouldnotgiveup.Eventually,wedidmanagetogetovertheridge,relievedtofindthatitwasthefinalmajorobstructiononourpath.YearshavepassedbutDad'swordsremainedinme:takingonesmallstepatatimewilleventuallygetmewhereIneedtobe.JupiterMarsisactuallyaverycoldplaceNeptuneIt’sthefarthestplanetfromtheSunIt’sthebiggestplanetofthemallSaturnSaturnisagasgiantandhasringsVenusVenusisthesecondplanetfromtheSunNeptuneisveryfarfromtheSunPRINCIPALANIMALSMercuryMarsisactuallyaverycoldplaceIt’stheclosestplanettotheSunSaturnSaturnistheonlyplanetwithringsNeptuneMarsJupiterJupiteristhebiggestplanetofthemallAWESOMEWORDS—SOMEONEFAMOUS“Thisisaquote.Wordsfullofwisdomthatsomeoneimportantsaidandcanmakethereadergetinspired.”APICTUREISWORTHATHOUSANDWORDSAPICTUREALWAYSREINFORCESTHE

CONCEPTImagesreveallargeamountsofdata,soremember:useanimageinsteadofalongtext.Youraudiencewillappreciateit4,498,300,000Bignumberscatchyouraudience’sattentionEarthsistheSun’smassisJupiter'srotationperiod24h37m23s333,000STATSOFWINTERSEASON80%It’stheclosestplanettotheSunandthesmallestintheSolarSystem50%VenushasabeautifulnameandisthesecondplanetfromtheSunMercuryVenus25%Despitebeingred,Marsisactuallyacoldplace.It’sfullofironoxidedustVenusDESKTOPAPPYoucanreplacetheimageonthescreenwithyourownwork.Right-clickonitandthenchoose"Replaceimage"(inGoogleSlides)or"ChangePicture"(inPPT)soyoucanaddyoursIPADAPPYoucanreplacetheimageonthescreenwithyourownwork.Right-clickonitandthenchoose"Replaceimage"(inGoogleSlides)or"ChangePicture"(inPPT)soyoucanaddyoursMOBILEAPPYoucanreplacetheimageonthescreenwithyourownwork.Right-clickonitandthenchoose"Replaceimage"(inGoogleSlides)or"ChangePicture"(inPPT)soyoucanaddyoursPeterSmithOURPROFESSORSJennaDoeYoucanspeakabitaboutthispersonhereYoucanspeakabitaboutthispersonherePRINCIPALHIBERNATORSBearsSaturnistheonlyplanetwithringsSealsJupiteristhebiggestplanetofthemallDeersMarsisactuallyacoldplace.It’sfullofironPROCESSOFHIBERNATIONDay1MercuryisthesmallestplanetDay2SaturnistheonlyplanetwithringsDay3MarsisfullofironoxidedustDay4JupiteristhebiggestplanetABOUTBEARSMarsDespitebeingred,Marsisactuallyacoldplace.It’sfullofironoxidedustMercuryIt’stheclosestplanettotheSunandthesmallestintheSolarSystemVenusVenushasabeautifulnameandisthesecondplanetfromtheSunHIBERNATIONCALENDARMonTueWedThuFriSatSun12345678910111213141516171819202122232425262728293031VenusVenushashightemperaturesJupiterJupiteristhebiggestplanetMarsDespitebeingred,MarsiscoldFollowthelinkinthegraphtomodifyitsdataandthenpastethenewonehere.Formoreinfo,clickhere25%MercuryistheclosestplanettotheSunandthesmallestoneintheSystem35%VenushasabeautifulnameandisthesecondplanetfromtheSun40%Despitebeingred,MarsisaverycoldplanetfullofironoxidedustANIMALSTHATHIBERNATEPRIMATES2YoucanenterasubtitlehereifyouneeditPRINCIPALANIMALSBearDeerRabbitDescriptionMercuryistheclosestplanettotheSunandthesmallestofthemallVenushasabeautifulnameandisthesecondplanetfromtheSunDespitebeingred,Marsisactuallyacoldplace.It’sfullofironoxidedustHibernationWINTERSTORMVenushasabeautifulnameVenusDespitebeingred,MarsiscoldMarsPlutoisadwarfplanetPlutoTheMoonisanaturalsatelliteMoonJupiteristhebiggestplanetJupiterABOUTTHEDENNINGMercuryIt’stheclosestplanettotheSunandthesmallestintheSystemVenusVenushasabeautifulnameandisthesecondplanetfromtheSunMarsDespitebeingred,Marsisactuallyacoldplace.It’sfullof