2025年中考英语人教版总复习话题写作突破课件：话题5 梦想与目标

话题5

梦想与目标

分析新疆近6年中考真题可知，该话题在书面表达中未作考查。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知，此话题通常有以下命题角度：1.梦想与目标的内容及重要性；2.树立梦想与目标的原因；3.实现梦想与目标的方法。佳句赏析▶梦想与目标的内容及重要性1.As

the

saying

goes,

“Great

dreams

make

a

bright

future.”

My

dream

is

to

be

a

doctor

in

the

future.2.Just

as

President

Xi

once

said,

I

would

like

to

contribute

to

my

hometown.3.No

matter

who

you

are

and

what

you

are

doing,

you

should

have

your

dreams

and

hold

on

to

them

because

they

can

give

you

chances

to

taste

success.（No

matter

who表明梦想对每个人都很重要）4.It's

of

great

importance

for

us

to

make

up

our

minds

to

achieve

our

dreams.5.The

future

belongs

to

those

who

believe

in

the

beauty

of

their

dreams.▶树立梦想与目标的原因1.More

and

more

young

people

wish

to

return

to

their

hometowns

and

contribute

to

their

hometowns'

development

after

graduation.（contribute

to促成，有助于）2.I

like

talking

to

people

and

asking

questions,

so

I

want

to

be

a

journalist

when

I

grow

up.3.Since

my

early

age,

I

have

been

admiring

tour

guides

who

travel

worldwide.（who引导定语从句，解释说明梦想的职业）4.I

dream

of

being

a

good

teacher

who

teaches

kids

not

only

knowledge

but

also

the

truth

of

life.5.The

speech

given

by

a

famous

doctor

made

me

realize

my

dream

of

becoming

a

doctor

to

help

others.▶实现梦想与目标的方法1.My

first

plan

has

to

do

with

my

physical

health.

I

will

keep

exercising

every

day

to

build

up

my

body.（have

to

do

with与……有关，此处在阐明计划后具体描述实施该计划的方式）2.To

improve

myself,

I

plan

to

spend

one

hour

a

day

（in）

reading

the

books

I'm

interested

in.（动词不定式作目的状语前置）3.I

will

make

every

effort

to

discover

the

value

of

traditional

Chinese

medicine

and

make

it

more

popular

in

the

world.（make

every

effort

to

do

sth.竭尽全力做某事）4.Hard

work

pays

off.

I

believe

as

long

as

I

try

my

best,

my

dream

will

come

true

some

day.（Hard

work

pays

off.天道酬勤。）5.Stick

to

your

dream,

and

you

are

sure

to

achieve

success

in

the

end.6.I

strongly

believe

that

nothing

is

impossible

if

you

put

your

heart

into

it.7.If

you

want

to

make

your

dream

come

true,

you

should

learn

all

kinds

of

knowledge

to

enrich

your

brain.（用if引导的条件状语从句描写实现梦想的途径）8.I

plan

to

take

up

some

hobbies

like

painting

and

taking

photos.（用such

as/like对爱好进行举例）9.I

will

do

the

following

things

to

make

my

dream

come

true.10.All

in

all,

I'm

sure

I

will

realize

my

dream

as

long

as

I

try

my

best.句子仿写1）拥有梦想和希望对一个人的发展是非常重要的。［用短语be

of

great

importance仿写］____________________________________________________________________________It's

of

great

importance

for

a

person's

development

to

have

dreams

and

hopes.2）我打算成为一名老师,所以我将要在大学学习教育。［用连词so仿写］___________________________________________________________________________I

am

going

to

be

a

teacher,

so

I'm

going

to

study

education

at

university.3）当我长大后，我想成为一个能拯救很多人的好医生。［用who引导的定语从句仿写］________________________________________________________________________When

I

grow

up,

I

want

to

be

a

good

doctor

who

can

save

many

people.4）我梦想着成为一名钢琴家，因为我真的很喜欢弹钢琴。［用短语dream

of仿写］_______________________________________________________________________I

dream

of

being

a

pianist

because

I

truly/really

like

playing

the

piano.5）为了实现我的梦想，我会认真度过我有限的时间。［用动词不定式作目的状语仿写］__________________________________________________________________________To

make

my

dream

come

true,

I

ought

to

spend

my

limited

time

carefully.6）总之，只要我尽最大的努力，我确信我能实现我的梦想。［用连词as

long

as仿写］__________________________________________________________________All

in

all,

I'm

sure

I

will

realize

my

dream

as

long

as

I

try

my

best.7）我希望我能尽我所能帮助更多生活在山区的学生。［用that引导的宾语从句仿写］________________________________________________________________________________I

hope

that

I

can

try

my

best

to

help

more

students

living

in

the

mountain

areas.8）除非你全身心地投入学习，否则你不会实现你的梦想。［用put

one's

heart

into仿写］_______________________________________________________________________You

won't

realize

your

dream

until

you

put

your

heart

into

your

study.

（2024山东临沂改编）假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。Hi

Li

Ping,

You

mentioned

your

dream

job

in

your

last

letter.

I'm

really

interested

in

it.

Why

did

you

choose

it?

What/Who

influenced

you

to

make

the

decision?

Tell

me

your

experience,

please.

I

look

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon!Eric要求：

1.参考邮件内容，可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

4.词数80-120。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【审题】话题：梦想职业文体：______文要点：需要从邮件中提炼要点，邮件中的3个句子即3个要点：①你选择该梦想职业的原因；②影响你做此决定的人或事；③叙述你的经历。人称:用第____人称时态：要点①和②：用__________________时要点③：用__________时应用一一般现在/一般过去一般过去【写作框架】【润色与升格】连句成篇句子升格Dear

Eric,

Thanks

for

your

e-mail.

I'm

very

glad

to

tell

you

something

about

my

dream

job.

①I

have

wanted

to

be

a

teacher

since

I

was

a

child,

because

I

think

teaching

is

a

sacred

profession

and

I

enjoy

staying

with

children.（要点1：选择该梦想职业的原因）

Besides,

I

want

to

be

a

teacher

because

of

the

power

of

an

example—Miss

Li,

my

English

teacher.①用结构“dream

of

doing

sth.”升格句子：______________________________________________________________________________I

have

dreamed/dreamt

of

being

a

teacher

since

I

was

a

child连句成篇句子升格（要点2：影响你做此决定的人或事）She

often

helps

me

with

my

English

in

her

spare

time,

which

has

a

great

influence

on

me.

②I

still

remember

one

thing.

Once

I

failed

in

an

important

English

exam

and

was

upset.

She

cheered

me

up

and

told

me

some

good

ways

to

improve

my

English.

With

her

help,

I

made

great

progress

in

English.

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

be

a

good

teacher

like

her

when

I

grow

up.（要点3：叙述经历并升华主题）②用that引导的宾语从句连接两个句子：_____________________________________________________________________________I

still

remember

that

once

I

failed

in

an

important

English

exam

and

was

upset.连句成篇句子升格

③I

know

it

is

not

easy

to

be

a

teacher.

I

will

work

harder

to

realize

my

dream.

Best

wishes!Li

Ping③用although引导的让步状语从句和短语“make

every

effort

to”升格句子：_________________________________________________________________________________________Although

I

know

it

is

not

easy

to

be

a

teacher,

I

will

make

every

effort

to

realize

my

dream.【誊写】Dear

Eric,

Thanks

for

your

e-mail.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm

very

glad

to

tell

you

something

about

my

dream

job.

I

have

dreamed/dreamt

of

being

a

teacher

since

I

was

a

child,

because

I

think

teaching

is

a

sacred

profession

and

I

enjoy

staying

with

children.

Besides,

I

want

to

be

a

teacher

because

of

the

power

of

an

example—Miss

Li,

my

English

teacher.

She

often

helps

me

with

my

English

in

her

spare

time,

which

has

a

great

influence

on

me.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best

wishes!Li

PingI

still

remember

that

once

I

failed

in

an

important

English

exam

and

was

upset.

She

cheered

me

up

and

told

me

some

good

ways

to

improve

my

English.

With

her

help,

I

made

great

progress

in

English.

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

be

a

good

teacher

like

her

when

I

grow

up.

Although

I

know

it

is

not

easy

to

be

a

teacher,

I

will

make

every

effort

to

realize

my

dream.

人类因梦想而伟大，人生因拼搏而精彩。每个人都有一个梦想，你的梦想是什么？某英语学习网站正在开展“梦想成就未来”的征文比赛，请参照思维导图，以“My

Dream

Job”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：

1.参考思维导图，可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

4.词数80-120。My

Dream

Job_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

It's

important

for

everyone

to

have

a

dream.

Everyone

has

his

or

her

own

dream.

Dreams

make

us

full

of

hope

for

the

future.

Encouraged

by

my

mother,

I

dream

of

becoming

a

doctor

like

her

one

day.

Though

my

mother

is

very

busy,

she

often

says

she

feels

happy

when

she

helps

patients,

which

moves

me

a

lot.

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