新概念英语第二册期末话题作文课件

新概念英语第二册期末话题作文添加文档副标题汇报人：常考类型Whatisyouridealhouse?直接问观点类Whatdoyouthinkisthefunctionofart?Areyouenthusiasticaboutthepursuitofknowledge?WhyorWhynot?观点选择类Doyoulikehorrorstories?Whyorwhynot?话题作文（大作文）常考形式Whydoyouthinksomepeoplechoosetoworkfromhome?现象分析类Whydidyoudecidetohavehighereducation?Howcanuniversitiesimproveeducationquality?措施/建议类Howcanweimproveourdrivinghabitsforthesakeofsafety?话题作文（大作文）2.如何构思内容？一般来说，对于所给主题，要么回答是好的，要么是坏的；构思内容的时候就往好处或者坏处的角度构思。1.想好处的思路：（1）“以人为本”--身体、精神对身体：身体强健；塑身养型；感官灵敏；四肢发达等。对精神：视野扩宽；提高意识；丰富内心世界；生活充实；身心愉悦；内心平静；增进感情；各种能力培养；增强自豪感、自信心、荣誉感等。（2）“服务社会”--保护环境；节约资源；丰富生活；社会和谐；促进进步等。话题作文（大作文）2.想坏处的思路：（1）“以人为本”--身体、精神对身体：抵抗力下降，生（疾）病等。对精神：性格孤僻；失去自豪感、自信心……；内心空虚；玩物丧志等。（2）“社会”：环境--破坏、污染；公共安全--危险、不和谐；经济--衰退、贫穷回答为什么，要学会找客观事物的特点来做原因，或者大众所认知的常识和观点。一般来说，对于所给主题，询问看法时，要么回答是好的，要么是坏的；构思内容的时候就往好处或者坏处的角度构思。2.如何构思内容？话题作文（大作文）写作专题（2）：大作文--内容如何构思（2）→八字方针“以人为本，服务社会”如何审题→题干核心名词结构模板→观点选择类如何搭建段落→主题句+支撑句+细节句+总结句课前回顾12.如何开展一个段落一般的段落结构（1）TopicSentence（主题句）（2）SupportingSentence（支撑句）（3）DetailSentence（细节补充句）（4）ConcludingSentence（总结句）OneEnglishparagraphusuallyincludesthefollowingfourparts:话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落段落主题句（topicsentence）的特点Atthebeginningoftheparagraph.（段落第一句）presentingthemainideaoftheparagraph.（表明段落的中心思想）Astatementthatcanbeargued–notsimplyafact.

（不能是一个无法反驳的事实）Itshouldnotbeaspecificdescription.

（描写细节的句子不能作主题句）

Relatedtothethesisstatement.（与主旨句对应）

话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落判断以下句子能不能成为段落主题句1.Hesenthiswifeadiamondringonherbirthday.2.Theymovedtoanewapartmentlastmonth.3.Todaymoreandmorewomenaregoingouttowork.4.Heencounteredanoldfriendyesterday.话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落判断以下句子能不能成为段落主题句1.Hesenthiswifeadiamondringonherbirthday.2.Theymovedtoanewapartmentlastmonth.3.Todaymoreandmorewomenaregoingouttowork.4.Heencounteredanoldfriendyesterday.(X)(X)(X)(X)话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落①Guilinisanamazingplacetovisit.②First,itisaplaceknownforitsscenicbeauty.③Yougottoseethemountainsshapinglikecamel’shump.④WalkingaroundtheLiRiverwillbringyoutheuniquebeautyofthehillandwater.⑤Also,Guilinoffersarangeofadventureactivitiesforthevisitors.⑥Youcangohang-gliding,dobungyjumpsortakeaboatingtripandotheractivitiesforthevisitors.⑦Inaddition,yougettovisitexoticplaceswithinthecity.⑧Youcanexplorethecaveswherelotsofstalactitegrowortakephotosinthosefolkstreetswithlocalpeople.⑨ThesefeaturesmakeGuilinatrulyamazingplacewellworthavisit段落结构话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落①Guilinisanamazingplacetovisit.②First,itisaplaceknownforitsscenicbeauty.③Yougottoseethemountainsshapinglikecamel’shump.④WalkingaroundtheLiRiverwillbringyoutheuniquebeautyofthehillandwater.⑤Also,Guilinoffersarangeofadventureactivitiesforthevisitors.⑥Youcangohang-gliding,dobungyjumpsortakeaboatingtripandotheractivitiesforthevisitors.⑦Inaddition,yougettovisitexoticplaceswithinthecity.⑧Youcanexplorethecaveswherelotsofstalactitegrowortakephotosinthosefolkstreetswithlocalpeople.⑨ThesefeaturesmakeGuilinatrulyamazingplacewellworthavisit主题句：地基支撑句：钢筋细节句：水泥总结句：房顶段落结构话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落Foranotherthing,cyber-datingisprettysafe.Firstly,thedatingwebsiteshaveastrictentrycondition.Ifyouwanttobecomeauserofadatingwebsite,youmustsubmityourpersonalinformationandensureitistrueandeffective.

Basedonthat,thewebsitewillmakeasurveyonyoursocialbackground,creditassessment,yourfinancialsituationandsoon.

Iftheyfindsomefalseinformation,youwillnotbeallowedtousethewebsite.

Secondly,thewebsiteusershaveenoughtimetodistinguishwhetherthepersontheyarechattingistrustworthyornot.

Iftheynoticesomepeoplewhohavesomeevilmotivesonthewebsite,theycanreporttothestaffatonce.举例说明话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落【主题句】Foranotherthing,cyber-datingisprettysafe.【支撑句1】Firstly,thedatingwebsiteshaveastrictentrycondition.【细节句】Ifyouwanttobecomeauserofadatingwebsite,youmustsubmityourpersonalinformationandensureitistrueandeffective.【细节句】Basedonthat,thewebsitewillmakeasurveyonyoursocialbackground,creditassessment,yourfinancialsituationandsoon.【细节句】Iftheyfindsomefalseinformation,youwillnotbeallowedtousethewebsite.【支撑句2】Secondly,thewebsiteusershaveenoughtimetodistinguishwhetherthepersontheyarechattingistrustworthyornot.

【细节句】

Iftheynoticesomepeoplewhohavesomeevilmotivesonthewebsite,theycanreporttothestaffatonce.举例说明话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落Solotripscanhelptodevelopnewrelationships.Foronething,thesolotravelerscanmeetnewcompanionswithcommoninterests.Whentheyareintrouble,theymayaskforhelpfromotherstrangetravelers,afterthat,thetravelersmayfindthelocalspecialfoodorfamoussightstogetheralongwiththenewpartners.Foranotherthing,

thesolotravelershaveanopportunitytomakefriendsordobusinesswiththosepeopletheymeetbychancebutsharethesimilarvalue.

Thetravelersmaychatwiththepassengersonatrainwhoworkindifferentindustries,suchasteachers,students,bankersevenworkers.Theymaydiscussthepolitics,theidols,economyandsoonandafterthiswonderfulconversation,theymaygivecontactinformationtoeachother.举例说明话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落举例说明【主题句】Parentsareusuallyeagertopassontheirvaluestotheirchildren.Butshouldchildrenalwaysbelievewhattheirparentsdo?【支撑句1】Maybedifferentgenerationsneeddifferentwaysofthinking.【细节句】Whenchildrenareyoung,theybelievethattheirparentsarealwaysright.【细节句】Butwhentheygetolder,theyrealizethereareotherviews.【支撑句2】Sometimesparents,especiallyolderones,cannotkeepupwithrapidsocialortechnologicalchanges.【细节句】Astudentwhohasfriendsofalldifferentracesandbackgroundsatschoolmayfindthathisorherparentsdonotreallyunderstandorvaluethedigitalrevolution.【细节句】Sometimeskidshavetofindtheirownwaystowhattheybelievein.话题作文（大作文）12.如何开展一个段落举例说明However,thereareargumentsinfavorofchangingjobsfrequently.【支撑句1】Oneisthataworkerimproveshisemployability.Workinginseveraldifferentjobsoftenmeansthattheindividualhasmoreskills.Suchpeopleareseenasmoredynamicandversatile.【支撑句2】Anotherbenefitofchangingjobfrequentlyisthatonenevergetsstuckinarut.Frommyownexperience,IgotboredwhenIspenttoolonginajob.Followingthis,thequalityofmyworkwouldsuffer.

【支撑句3】Ialsobelievethatemployersgenerallydon’ttendtogreatlyrewardloyaltyorcommitment.Increasedwagesandpromotionareofteneasiertoattainbychangingjobs.生词：frequentlyemployability就业能力dynamic有活力的versatile多才多艺的rut凹槽commitment贡献promotion升职话题作文（大作文）试一试？【例】In1863theFootballAssociationwasestablishedinEngland,andtherulesofthegamehaveremainedessentiallythesameeversince.Theirrelativesimplicity,andneedforlittleequipmentensuredthatitbecameverypopular.ThepoweroftheBritishEmpiremeantthatitbecameplayedineverycorneroftheworld.翻译要点·英译汉试一试？【例】In1863theFootballAssociationwasestablishedinEngland,andtherulesofthegamehaveremainedessentiallythesameeversince.Theirrelativesimplicity,andneedforlittleequipmentensuredthatitbecameverypopular.ThepoweroftheBritishEmpiremeantthatitbecameplayedineverycorneroftheworld.【基础翻译】他们相对的简洁性以及对设备的接近零需求确保了它变得非常流行。【进阶翻译】足球运动（规则）相对简单易行，而且不需要多少设施，因而这项运动迅速风靡英伦。翻译要点·英译汉试一试？【例】Onesourceofangerisfailedattemptstochangeinthepast.Peoplebecomesofrustratedbyearliereffortsthattheycanactuallybecomemadwhenyoupointtoanimportantnewissue.翻译要点·英译汉试一试？【例】Onesourceofangerisfailedattemptstochangeinthepast.Peoplebecomesofrustratedbyearliereffortsthattheycanactuallybecomemadwhenyoupointtoanimportantnewissue.【基础翻译】人们因先前的努力变得如此沮丧以至于当你指出另一个新的重要的问题时，他们会疯掉的。【进阶翻译】先前的努力白费了，人们沮丧不已，倘若你又提出新的重要问题，他们可能会发疯。翻译要点·英译汉我们来总结下：你觉得英译汉的难点是什么？翻译要点·英译汉我们来总结下：你觉得英译汉的难点是什么？现阶段如何克服？单词不认识？认识单词，可看不懂句子？不说人话？翻译要点·英译汉我们来总结下：句子翻译考查什么？翻译要点·英译汉我们来总结下：句子翻译考查什么？词汇、短语句子结构（语法）翻译技巧实操很重要！实操很重要！实操很重要！翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,andneedforlittleequipmentensuredthatitbecameverypopular.翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤1.通读句子，结构分析2.句子拆分或断句3.分块翻译4.整合译文5.重读，检查校对【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,andneedforlittleequipmentensuredthatitbecameverypopular.翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对1.通读句子，结构分析（1）简单句：只包含一个主谓结构句子叫简单句；【例】Sheisfondofcollectingstamps.她热衷于收集邮票。翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对1.通读句子，结构分析（2）并列句：包含两个或两个以上主谓结构的句子叫并列句，句与句之间通常用并列连词或分号来连接；

【例】Thefoodwasgood,buthehadlittleappetite.

食物很好吃，但他没什么胃口。翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对1.通读句子，结构分析（3）复合句：包含一个主句和一个或几个从句的句子叫复合句，从句由从属连词引导。【例】Thefilmhadbegunwhenwegottothecinema.当我们到达电影院的时候，电影已经开始了。翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对1.通读句子，结构分析目的：可以初步判断需要翻译的句子是简单句还是复杂句：

简单句：基本上进行断句再翻译即可，注意词语的处理；

复杂句：需进一步分析主从句，找出连接词及主从之间的逻辑关系等。翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对2.句子拆分或断句拆分要点：拆分原则：主从拆开，把句子的主干和修饰成分拆开，断句用“/”表示；【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,andneedforlittleequipmentensuredthatitbecameverypopular.翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对2.句子拆分或断句拆分要点：拆分点：引导词/连接词、并列连词（除非连接的是两个单词则不需要拆开）、标点符号、介词处（固定搭配不拆分）、非谓语、主语很长时（拆到谓语动词之前）；【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,/and/

needforlittleequipment/ensured/

thatitbecameverypopular.翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对2.句子拆分或断句拆分要点：例外：拆分后，内容很短或意思很简单，就不拆分。【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,/and/

needforlittleequipment/ensured/

thatitbecameverypopular.翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对2.句子拆分或断句目的：可以快速找出句子核心部分，掌握大意：

技巧：如果读起来不通顺的时候，我们便可以重新断句翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤2.句子拆分或断句（补充了解）翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对3.分块翻译拆分断句之后，以意群或者句段（不是指段落）为单位，进行词义推敲，译文分块翻译处理。【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,/and/

needforlittleequipment/ensured/

thatitbecameverypopular.【析】Theirrelativesimplicity他们的相对简洁性

andneedforlittleequipment以及对设备的接近零需求

ensured

确保了

thatitbecameverypopular

它变得非常流行翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对4.整合译文分块翻译之后，意群或句段的基本意思出来了，整合译文，得到初步的译文。【例】Theirrelativesimplicity,/and/

needforlittleequipment/ensured/

thatitbecameverypopular.【析】Theirrelativesimplicity他们的相对简洁性

andneedforlittleequipment以及对设备的接近零需求

ensured

确保了

thatitbecameverypopular

它变得非常流行初步译文：他们相对的简洁性以及对设备的接近零需求确保了它变得非常流行。翻译要点·英译汉翻译的基本步骤通读句子，结构分析句子拆分或断句分块翻译整合译文重读，检查校对5.重读，检查校