【教学评一体化】Unit 1 Loo k it up Section5 Writing 写作优 质课件+嵌入音视频--新沪教八上

Unit1LookitupSection5Writing写作优质课

沪教版（2024）八年级上Learningobjectives1LeadinPre-writing3ReadforwritingWhile-writing5SummaryAssessment7Homework2468Bytheendofthelesson,Iwillbeableto...1234learntostructureanencyclopaediaentryproperly.collectandorganizefactualinformationaboutanotableperson.writeanencyclopaediaentryusingfacts,notopinions.applytargetwordsandexpressionsfromtheunitinwriting.00LearningobjectivesLeadinPre-writingWritinganencyclopaediaentryWritingWearecallingforarticlesaboutfamouspeoplearoundtheworld.Writeanencyclopaediaentryandsendittous.OnlineEncyclopaediaforTeensPre-Writing02二一教育BasicinformationyearofbirthanddeathMainachievementshybridriceresearchAwardsandtitlesMedaloftheRepublicTipEncyclopaediaentriesshouldcontainfactsinsteadofopinions.YuanLongpingPre-writing03二一教育BasicinformationyearofbirthanddeathMainachievementshybridriceresearchAwardsandtitlesMedaloftheRepublicWriting042Whodoyouadmire?Findinformationaboutthispersonandwriteanencyclopaediaentry.Step1PlanDrawyourownmindmap.Step2WriteWriteanencyclopaediaentryaboutthepersonyouadmire.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________05BasicinformationyearofbirthanddeathMainachievementsAwardsandtitlesQianXuesengWritingBodyEndingBeginning1.Basicinformation(Name,identity...)2.LifetimeImportantstory3.AchievementsEvaluation

Structure

引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等人物成就以及评价---人格，贡献，闪光点注意：运用正确的时态。评价人物等常用

，

而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、

经历、事迹时常用____________

一般现在时一般过去时人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分：WritingWriting【写作指导】1.审题本篇书面表达要求介绍科学家钱学森。主题：人物类介绍体裁：anencyclopaediaentry时态：以一般过去时为主人称：以第三人称为主Writing行文布局第一段：开头。引入写作主题，说明自己最喜欢的科学家是钱学森，总体介绍。第二段：主体。具体介绍科学家钱学森的生平经历及成就第三段：结尾。给出评价WritingStep1审题时态:V-ed

人称:Hehimhis

文体:anencyclopaediaentryWritingStep2列要点1.

开头简介：

oneofthegreatest/mostfamous....

hisgreatachievementin...2.

生平

：wasbornon(某天)showedgreatinterest/intelligencein...graduatedfrom....(从...毕业)showedgreatperseverance3.

成就

：

gained得到alotofexperience/prizes.madegreat/significantcontributions4.

评价/看法：is

considered

to被认为dedication...admirablesuch...that...WritingStep3连框架(Firstofall,Besideds,Inaddition...)Whenhewasachild....Ashegrewolder...AfterhegraduatedStep4加细节,加梯度，查错误每个点适当扩充Writing

Agreatscientist--QianXuesen

Amongthegreatscientists,IlikeQianXuesenbest.Heiswell-knownforhisgreatachievementinChina'saerospaceindustry.

Hewasborn

onDecember11,1911inShanghai.Ashegrewolder,heshowedgreatintelligenceinMaths.AfterhegraduatedfromNationalChiaoTungUniversity,hewenttoAmericaforfurthereducationin1935.QianXuesenreturnedtoChinain1955afterovercominglotsofdifficulties.

Hardworkpaidoff.Hemadegreat/significantcontributionsto

China’saerospaceindustry,andwasknownasthe“FatherofChineseAerospace”.

QianXuesenissuchagreatscientistthateveryoneinChinawillnotforgethim.Hisperseverance毅力anddedication奉献

makehimarolemodelformanyyoungpeople.Weshouldlearnfromhim.WritingWritingSummary06二一教育出生于：_____________表现出极大的兴趣：____________在……方面有天赋：_______________beborninshow

greatinterestinbetalentedin...1.引出人物：---简单介绍人物背景(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)072.介绍人物主要经历做…工作：____________把…奉献给…：___________________起重要作用：_______________坚定的决心__________________在…获得巨大的成功：___________________下定决心做某事：_____________________devoteoneselfto...playaimportantroleinstrongwillachievegreatsuccessin...makeupone’smindtodoSummaryworkas3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇做出巨大贡献：_________________________作为……而闻名：__________________树立好榜样：_________________

值得我们尊重：_________________________________makegreatcontributionstobeknown/famousassetagoodexampledeserveourrespectWriting1.He/Sheputhis/herheartinto…andmadegreatcontributionsto…他/她全心全意投入…,并为…做出了巨大贡献…2.Asagreat...，he/shewillberememberedbyusforever.作为一个伟大的……，他/她将被我们永远铭记。3.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重Writing下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于中国科学家屠呦呦的介绍，请你根据提示，用英语写一段文章介绍屠呦呦

。基本信息：中国科学家，1930年生于浙江宁波，至今在世

。成长背景：早年对中医药和化学极感兴趣。一生致力于抗疟疾药物研究

。主要成就：发现青蒿素（artemisinin），有效治疗全球疟疾患者，让中医药获国际认可

。荣誉与影响：获“共和国勋章”（theMedaloftheRepublic），被誉为中医药抗疟研究先驱

。PracticePractice

TuYouyouisaremarkablemedicalscientistinChina.Shewasbornin1930.Whenyoung,shewasdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChinesemedicineandchemistry.Fordecades,shefocusedonresearchingantimalarialdrugs.Finally,shediscoveredartemisinin.ThisdiscoverycaneffectivelytreatmalariapatientsallovertheworldandhelpstraditionalChinesemedicinegetmoreinternationalattention.TuYouyouhaswontheMedaloftheRepublic.SheisagreatpioneerinusingtraditionalChinesemedicineforantimalarialresearch.Herworksavesmillionsoflivesandinspiresmorepeopletoexploretrad