佛山市禅城区2025届高三上学期统一调研测试（一）英语试题

佛山市禅城区2025届高三上学期统一调研测试（一）英语试题广东省佛山市禅城区2025届高三上学期统一调研测试（一）英语试题

第二节(满分25分)

47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Inaworldwherenegativityoftenseemstodominatetheheadlines,it’seasytooverlookthesmallactsofkindnessthatcanmakeasignificantdifferenceinsomeone’sday.Irecentlyexperiencedthisfirsthandduringaparticularlychallengingweek.

Ihadaharddayatwork,myweekdidn’tgowellandproblemsjustkeptpoppingupeverywhere.Thingsbrokeorquit,unexpectedbillscameinandIwasstrugglingtocopewithallthestress.Thenanunexpectedruntothestorepoppedup,whenallIwantedtodowasgohomeandwell,IfeltlikeIwasattheboilingpoint.

Imadethetripacrosstowntothestore,eventhoughIonlyneededafewthings,andfoundtheparkinglotpacked.Toaddtoit,thepersonnexttowhereIwasgoingtoparkseemedtothinkhiscarwasentitledtoTWOparkingspots,whichbotheredmewhenitwasasmallvehicleanditparkedonthemiddlelineoftwospaces,clearlytakingthemboth.IfinallyparkedandthenrealizedIhadleftmypurse,withmydebitcard(借记卡),checkbook,etc.,athomethatday.Thankfully,Ihadasmallamountofcash,soIgrabbeditandmycoupon(优惠券)bookandwentinside,thinkingthatwiththecoupons,Iwouldevenhavesomecashleftover.Thestorewasreallybusy,butIjustwentandfoundthefewthingsIneededandgotinoneofthefewlanesopen,andpreparedtowait.

Iwaitedandwaited.Meanwhile,myimpatiencegrew.Afterastressfulday,allIwantedtodowasgohome,butIwasstuckinthecheckoutline.ThelineIjoinedseemedtocrawlatasnail’space.Mystresslevelswererising.IwasshiftingrestlesslywhilewaitinginlinewhenIspottedanoldladystandingbehindme.Itseemedthatshesensedmyanxietybecauseshecastakindsmile.Awkwardlyreturningasmile,Ikeptwaiting.Afterwhatseemedlikeanage,itwasmyturnandIgottothefront.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.

第二节(满分25分)

47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Inaworldwherenegativityoftenseemstodominatetheheadlines(定从),it’seasytooverlookthesmallactsofkindness(非谓语动词做主语)thatcanmakeasignificantdifferenceinsomeone’sday(定从).Irecentlyexperiencedthisfirsthandduringaparticularlychallengingweek.

Ihadaharddayatwork,myweekdidn’tgowellandproblemsjustkeptpoppingupeverywhere.Thingsbrokeorquit,unexpectedbillscameinandIwasstrugglingtocopewithallthestress(a,bandc).Thenanunexpectedruntothestorepoppedup,whenallIwantedtodo(定从)wasgohomeandwell(状从),IfeltlikeIwasattheboilingpoint(宾从).

Imadethetripacrosstowntothestore,eventhoughIonlyneededafewthings,andfoundtheparkinglotpacked(让步状从).Toaddtoit,thepersonnexttowhereIwasgoingtopark(定从)seemedtothinkhiscarwasentitledtoTWOparkingspots(宾从),whichbotheredme(定从)whenitwasasmallvehicleanditparkedonthemiddlelineoftwospaces(状从),clearlytakingthemboth(非谓语动词做方式状语).IfinallyparkedandthenrealizedIhadleftmypurse,withmydebitcard(借记卡),checkbook,etc.,athomethatday(宾从).Thankfully,Ihadasmallamountofcash,soIgrabbeditandmycoupon(优惠券)bookandwentinside,thinkingthatwiththecoupons,Iwouldevenhavesomecashleftover(宾从).Thestorewasreallybusy,butIjustwentandfoundthefewthingsIneeded(定从)andgotinoneofthefewlanesopen,andpreparedtowait.

Iwaitedandwaited.Meanwhile,myimpatiencegrew.Afterastressfulday,allIwantedtodo(定从)wasgohome,butIwasstuckinthecheckoutline.ThelineIjoined(定从)seemedtocrawlatasnail’space.Mystresslevelswererising.Iwasshiftingrestlesslywhilewaitinginline(状从)whenIspottedanoldladystandingbehindme(状从).Itseemedthatshesensedmyanxiety(表从)becauseshecastakindsmile(状从).Awkwardlyreturningasmile(非谓语动词做伴随动作),Ikeptwaiting.Afterwhatseemedlikeanage,itwasmyturnandIgottothefront.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.

1.读后续写的分类分析

分析角度内容原文反应句

类型分析本篇属于“情感转折型"的读后续写。本文主要围绕主人公经历的一天，从压力累积到情绪崩溃，再到偶然遇到一位善意的老人的微笑，情感发生了变化。

思路构思续写时需要聚焦主人公情感的转折点，尤其是在遇到老人的微笑后心境的变化。在接下来的段落里，需通过情感的递进与外部事件（如老人的举动）相结合，强化主人公的情感转变与感悟。

布局与框架1.第一段：描述主人公的无助与压力感。

2.第二段：通过老人的微笑引发情感的改变，进而推进故事的发展。

承接原文事项1.保持原文的情感基调——压力与无奈。

2.强调突如其来的意外善意（老人微笑）。需强调主人公的压力情绪到遇到意外的情感转变。

整体注意事项1.保持语境连贯，关注细节描写；

2.强调情感的转折——由焦虑转为温暖；

3.需要展现主人公的内心世界。语言要简单却具有情感深度，展现人物的内心变化与外部事件的呼应。

巧妙设计内容1.借由老人的善意举动，展现人与人之间的温暖与关爱；

2.最终通过主人公的内心独白或感悟，圆满故事。老人微笑后，主人公回想自己生活中的压力，并感受到人际关系中的关爱，抛开负面情绪，找回希望。

2.故事山模式（StoryMountain）分析

思维导图（StoryMountain）

引入：主人公经历了一个极其糟糕的日子，所有的负面情绪开始积累。

事件：工作上的不顺，意外的停车问题，忘记带钱包等。

冲突：主人公在商店排队结账时焦虑和无助感加剧。

事件：排队等待时间长，压力不断累积。

高潮：老人微笑的善意触动了主人公的内心，情感发生转折。

事件：老人的微笑带来了温暖的情感转折。

解决：主人公从压力中解脱，感受到了周围的善意与关爱。

事件：主人公恢复冷静，重新获得希望。

3.伏笔与冲突点分析

分析角度内容原文反应句

人物刻画主人公经历了一天的挫折和情感低谷，形成了心态的变化。“Thingsbrokeorquit,unexpectedbillscameinandIwasstrugglingtocopewithallthestress.”

情感层次从焦虑和无助，到遇到意外的善意后，情感得到缓解并发生转折。“Itseemedthatshesensedmyanxietybecauseshecastakindsmile."

关键情节点老人的微笑是触发情感转折的关键点。“Afterwhatseemedlikeanage,itwasmyturnandIgottothefront.”

情感转折从焦虑的情绪转变为内心的温暖和感激。“Awkwardlyreturningasmile,Ikeptwaiting."

4.动作、心理、环境描写的英文例句推荐

动作描写：

Shegrabbedhercashquicklyandrushedinside.

Sheshiftedrestlesslywhilewaitinginline.

Jadescannedthestore,tryingtofindtheshortestqueue.

Herfingerstrembledasshereachedforthecouponbook.

Sheclenchedherfists,tryingtocalmhernerves.

Shesighedheavilyasthequeueseemedendless.

Sheturnedtolookatthepersoninfrontofherinline,wonderingiftheywereasfrustrated.

Shefinallysteppedforwardtothecounter,heartracing.

心理描写：

Jadefeltherheartsinkwitheverypassingsecond.

Shethought,"WillIevermakeithomeintime"

Thethoughtofmorestresspushedhertotheedge.

Foramoment,shewonderedifanyonewouldunderstandherfrustration.

Hermindwasracing,herpatiencerunningthin.

Sheclosedhereyesbriefly,hopingforsomerelief.

Jadefeltawaveofhelplessnesswashoverher.

Butthesmilefromtheelderlyladymadeherfeelstrangelyatease.

环境描写：

Thestorewaspacked,everyaislefilledwithhurriedcustomers.

Thecheckoutlineseemedtostretchforever,withonlyoneregisteropen.

Thefluorescentlightsaboveflickeredintermittently.

Thenoiseofcartsclatteringandpeopletalkingfilledthespace.

Outside,thesunwassetting,castingawarmglowovertheparkinglot.

Theairfeltstuffyandwarm,astheheatfromsomanypeoplefilledtheroom.

Thecoolbreezeoutsidewasasharpcontrasttothecrowdedstore.

Theshelveswerelinedwithproducts,mostofthemonsale.

5.高级替换词及短语推荐

场景替换词例句

焦虑anxious,worried,stressed,uneasy,troubledShefeltanxiousastheminutestickedby.

无助helpless,powerless,defeated,overwhelmedJadefeltcompletelyhelplesswhenherpatiencewasrunningout.

微笑smile,grin,beam,flashasmile,showasmileTheoldladyflashedawarmsmilethatmadeJadefeelinstantlybetter.

拥挤crowded,packed,congested,jammed,bustlingThestorewaspackedwithcustomers,makingithardtomovefreely.

压力stress,pressure,tension,strain,anxietyShecouldn’tbearthetensionanymore,feelingasthoughthepressurewasgoingtobursther.

6.高中语法现象分析

语法现象搭配与语法点例句

动词短语shiftrestlessly,grabquickly,sighheavily,glanceat"Sheshiftedrestlesslywhilewaitinginline."

虚拟语气if+主语+had+过去分词"Ifshehadnotreceivedthesmile,shewouldhaveleftinfrustration."

感叹句Whatarelief,Howsweet,Whatamoment"WhatareliefitwaswhenIfeltherkindness."

从句宾语从句：Shefeltthat…

状语从句：Althoughitwascrowded,she…

定语从句：Thestore,whichwascrowded,wasnoisy."Althoughitwascrowded,Jadekeptwaiting."

PossibleAnswers

Version1

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.Theelderlylady’ssmilehadaprofoundimpactonme.Atthatmoment,Ifeltanoverwhelmingsenseofcalmwashoverme,asthoughhergesturehadbrokenthroughthewallofstressandfrustration(状从)Ihadbuiltup(定从).Itwasasiftheentireuniversehadpausedforabriefsecond(表从),allowingmetobreatheandreflect(非谓语动词短语做结果状语).IcouldnolongerfocusontheinconveniencesIhadfacedearlierintheday(定从).Instead,Ifoundmyselfthinkingaboutthekindnessofstrangersandhowsuchsmall,seeminglyinsignificantmomentscanalterourperspectiveontheworld(宾从).ThenoiseinthestorefadedintothebackgroundasItriedtograspthefullsignificanceofthesmile(状从).

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.Iturnedaroundandfoundthesameelderlylady,holdingoutasmall,crumpledbill(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作)withagentlesmile(介词短语做状语).“Youdon’tneedtoworryaboutit,”shesaidsoftly.Atfirst,Iwastoostunnedtorespond.Ilookedatherindisbelief,wonderingwhyastrangerwouldofferhelpwithouthesitation(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作+宾从).Slowly,Irealizedthatitwasn’tjustthemoney,buttheactofkindnessitselfthattouchedmedeeply(宾从+强调句).Myinitialskepticismgavewaytoafeelingofimmensegratitude.Ithankedherwithallmyheart,realizingthatinaworldfilledwithchallenges(非谓语动词短语做后置定语),itwasthekindnessofothersthatcouldturnatoughdayaround(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作+宾从+强调句).

亮点语法与词汇分析：

加分语法点：

虚拟语气：Ifshehadnotsmiled,Iwouldhavefeltevenmorestressed.

情态动词：Shecouldnothaveknownhowmuchhersmilemeanttome.

倒装句：NeverhadIfeltsomovedbysuchasimplegesture.

情绪描写：

词汇：calm,overwhelmingsense,breathe,reflection,disbelief,immensegratitude.

替换选项：peaceful(calm),deepappreciation(immensegratitude).

动作描写：

词汇：patonmyshoulder,holdingout,stunnedtorespond,offeredhelp,gaveway.

替换选项：extend,handover,pause.

Version2

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.Themomenttheoldladysmiledatme(状从),everythingseemedtoslowdown.Hersmile,sowarmandgenuine(adj做补语),cutthroughthechaosaroundme.Inthatfleetingsecond,Ifeltasifthepressureoftheworldhadliftedfrommyshoulders(表从).IhadbeensoconsumedbymyfrustrationsthatIhadforgottenhoweasyitwastooverlookthekindness(宾从+宾从)thatsurroundsus(定从).Ipaused,staringattheelderlywomanforamoment,feelingawaveofreliefwashoverme(现在分词做伴随动作).Itwasagentlereminderthatsometimes,allittakes(定从)isasmallactofkindness(强调句)tobrightensomeone’sdayandchangethecourseoftheiremotions(目的状语).

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.Turningaround(非谓语动词做伴随动作),Isawtheelderlyladystandingthere,herfaceradiantwithkindness(独立主格).ShehandedmetheexactamountIneeded(定从)andsimplysaid,“Ihopethishelps(宾从)."Icouldn’thelpbutfeelamixofsurpriseandappreciation.Itwasahumblingexperiencetoreceivesuchgenerosityfromastranger(todo做后置定语).Ithankedherprofusely,feelingadeepsenseofwarmthfillmychest(非谓语动词做伴随动作).AsIleftthestore(状从),Icouldn’tstopthinkingabouttheimpactthissmallinteractionhadonme(定从).Itmademerealizethatthereisstillgoodintheworld,andthatit’softenthelittlethingsthatmatterthemost(定从).

亮点语法与词汇分析：

加分语法点：

非谓语动词：Hersmile,sowarmandgenuine,cuttingthroughthechaos.

定语从句：Theelderlylady,whohadasmilethatcouldlightuptheroom,stoodbesideme.

虚拟语气：HadIknownaboutherkindnessearlier,Iwouldhavebeenlessstressed.

情绪描写：

词汇：relief,surprise,humblingexperience,warmth,deepsense.

替换选项：comfort(relief),overwhelmingjoy(warmth).

动作描写：

词汇：turnedaround,handedme,filledmychest,couldn’tstopthinking.

替换选项：passed,reachedout,pondered.

Version3

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.Theoldlady’ssmilewaslikeabreathoffreshairinthemidstofmystormoffrustration.IhadbeensoabsorbedinmyownworriesthatIfailedtonoticethesimplejoysinlife.Hersmilewasareminderthatnomatterhowdifficultadaymayseem,kindnesscanstillfinditswaythrough.Ifeltashiftinmyattitudeasthesmiledissolvedmyangerandanxiety(状从).ItwasasifIhadbeengivenagift,notintheformofmaterialthings,butintheformofcompassion(表从).Ismiledback,suddenlyfeelinglighter(非谓语动词做伴随动作),asthoughtheworldhadbecomealittlebrighter(状从).

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.Iturnedaroundtoseetheelderlyladystandingbehindme,holdingoutafewbills(非谓语动词做伴随动作).“Youdon’tneedtoworry,”shesaidkindly.Herwordsweresimple,yettheycarriedsomuchmeaning.Ilookedather,astonishedatthekindnessofastranger(非谓语动词做主语补语).Withoutthinking,Iacceptedthemoney,gratefulforhergenerosity(非谓语动词做主语补语).AsIleftthestore(状从),Icouldn’thelpbutfeelarenewedsenseofhope.Itwasareminderthat,despitethestrugglesweface,therearealwayspeoplewhocareandarewi