书面表达12篇（第三期）-2024年高考英语复习冲刺训练

备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递（江苏专用）

第三期

专题08书面表达12篇

一、书信写作

I.（2023上•江苏苏州・高三苏州中学校考期中）假如你是校学生会主席李华，你发现很多同学一日三餐都

在学校食堂吃，但是触目惊心的浪费现象几乎每天都在发生。请以“向食堂餐饮浪费说不”为主题写一封倡

议书。

内容包括：1.倡议的背景；

2.倡议的具体内容；

3.提出倡议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dearfellowstudents,

LiHua

PresidentoftheStudentUnion

【答案】Dearfellowstudents,

Wcallfeelconcernedwhenseeingleftoverspiledinthebinsofthecanteen.Beingthriftonfoodisa

Chinesetraditionalvirtue.Moreimportantly,inthetimeofpandemicandnaturaldisasters,savingfoodisofvital

significanceforacountrywith1.4billionpeople.

Theschoolistolaunchacampaignagainstfoodwaste.Bannerswillbeputuptoadvocatesavingfood.As

fbrusstudents,pleasedon'torderfoodthatwecan'tfinish.Furthermore,let'sremindeachothertocleartheplate

allthetimeorpackleftovershome.

Remember,everygraincsafterhardtoil.Let'ssavefoodanddoitfromtoday!

LiHua

PresidentoftheStudentUnion

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求学生针对学校浪费粮食的情况，以“向食堂餐饮浪费说不”为主题写一封倡

议书。

【详解】1.词汇积累

担,心的：concerned—*worried

重要的：vital-crucial

意义：significance^consequence

此外：furthermore—*moreover

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Moreimportantly,inthetimeofpandemicandnaturaldisasters,savingfoodisofvitalsignificancefora

countrywith1.4billionpeople.

同义句：Moreimportantly,in（hetimeofpandemicandnaturaldisasters,itisofvitalsignificanceforacountry

with1.4billionpeopletosavefood

［点睛］［高分句型1］Asfbrusstudents,pleasedon'torderfoodthatwecan'tfinish.（that引导的定语从句）

［高分句型2］Wcallfeelconcernedwhenseeingleftoverspiledinthebinsofthecanteen,（when引导的时间

状语从句）

2.（2023上•江苏泰州•高三姜堰中学校考期中）假设你是李华，你校交换生英国学生John将在一周后抵达

泰州并入住你家，你们将在同一个班级学习一个月。请你写一封信，告知他你去车站接他的时间以及随后

的安排。

内容包括：

1.表示欢迎；

2.接他的时间和地点；

3.你的安排。

注意：

I.写作词数应为80左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearJohn,

Yours,

LiHua

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

DearJohn,

Delightedlyacquaintedwiththefactthatyou'reingtoTaizhouandlivewithme,1can'tcontainmy

excitement.Tmwritingtoextendmywannestweletoyouandconfirmourschedule.

I'mgoingtopickyouupatTaizhoustationat10:00nextSundaymorning,standingat（heexitandwearinga

recjacketsoyouwon'tmissme.Afterwards,wearetoheaddirectlytomyhomewhereyouaretosettledownin

aseparateroom.Thenextday,youwillbeintroducedtoourclassmatesandwewillstudytogetherforthe

followingmonth.Wewillalsosparesometimetoexperiencethelocalculturesandhaveabiteoftheauthentic

cuisineinmyhometown.

Wishyouahappyjourneyandmayourfriendshipbenurtured2ndfosteredinthefollowingmonth.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给即将到来的交换牛.英国学生John写一份告知信，需表

示欢迎，说明去车站接他的时间加地点，并介绍随后的安排。

【详解】1.词汇积累

兴奋：excitement—>eagerness,exhilaration

表示：extend—>express,convey

体验：experience—^undergo,feel

正宗的：authentic—>genuine

培养：nurture—>cultivatc,develop

2.句式拓展

转换

原句：I'mgoingtopickyouupatTaizhoustat沁nat10:00nextSur.daymorning,standingattheexitandwearing

aredjacketsoyouwon'tmissme.

拓展句：I'mgoingtopickyouupatTaizhoustationat10:00nextSundaymorning,standingattheexitand

wearingaredjacketincaseyouwillmissme.

［点睛］［高分句型I］Delightedlyacquaintedwiththefactthatyou'reingtoTaizhouandlivewithme,Ican't

containmyexcitement.（运用了ihal引导的同位语从句）

［高分句型2］Afterwards,wcarctoheaddirectlytomyhomewhereyouarctosettledowninaseparateroom.（运

用了where引导的限制性定语从句）

问题：issue—problem/malter

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Moreandmoreoften,weseeariseinthenumberofstudentsfacingemotionalandpsychological

challenges.

拓展句：Moreandmoreoften,wcseeariseinthenumberofstudentswhofaceemotionalandpsychological

challenges.

【点睛】［高分句型IJI,mLiHua,presidentoftheStudents，Union（运用了名词词组作同位语）

［高分句型2］Second,let'screateapositiveenvironmentthatencouragesopenness,selfcare,andhealthy

coping.（运用了that引导限制性定语从句）

4.（2022上•江苏南通•高三统考期中）假定你是李华，上周四参加了学校举办的阅读经典名著——《红楼

梦》交流会，请你用英语写一篇报道，向校报英文栏目投稿。内容包括：

1参加人员：

2.交流内容；

3.你的感想。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；

3.参考词汇：《红楼梦》ADrcamofRedMansions

AnexchangemeetingonreadingaChineseclassic

【答案］AnexchangemeetingonreadingaChineseclassic

LastThursday,agroupofstudentsgatheredtotakepartintheexchangemeetingontheChineseclassic"A

DreamofRedMansions"organizedbyourschool.

TheparticipantsincludednotonlyChineseliteratureenthusiastsbutalsostudentswhoarefromvarious

culturalbackgrounds.Duringthemeeting,wediscussedtherelationshipsbetweenthecharactersandthevivid

descriptionsoftheancientChinesesocialstructure.

Itwasanimportantexperiencetoengageinthoughtfuldiscussionswithmypeersandtogainnewinsights

intothisclassicworkofliterature.Ibelievethatsuchexchangesarenotonlyhelpfulinenrichingour

understandingofChineseculturebutalsopromotecrossculturalunderstandingandappreciation.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，对上周四学校举办的阅读经典名著——《红

楼梦》交流会用英语写一篇报道，向校报英文栏目投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：takepartin—»participatein

各种各样的：various—>diversified

重要的：important—significant

有益的：behelpful-*bebeneficial

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：IbelievethatsuchexchangesarenotonlyhelpfulinenrichingourunderstandingofChineseculturebutalso

promotecrossculturalunderstandingandappreciation.

拓展句：Itisourbelief（hatsuchexchangesarcnotonlyhelpfulinenrichingourunderstandingofChineseculture

butalsopromotecrossculturalunderstandingandappreciation.

【点睛】[高分句型1]LastThursday,agroupofstudentsgatheredtolakepartintheexchangemeetingonthe

Chineseclassic"ADreamofRedMansions"organizedbyourschool.（使用了过去分词短语作后置定语）

【高分句型2]TheparticipantsincludednotonlyChineseliteratureenthusiastsbutalsostudentswhoarefrom

variousculturalbackgrounds.（使用了以students为先行词、关系代词who为引导词的限制性定语从句）

5.（2023上•江苏徐州•高三统考期中）你校学生会号召全体学生为了身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品。请针

对学生会这项行动给校英文报写一篇投稿，内容包括：

I.指出问题：2.说明理由：3.提出建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Electronicproducts:friendlyorfrightening?

【答案】Electronicproducts:friendlyorfrightening?

Aimingtoprotectourhealth,theStudents'Unioncallsonustoputalltheelectronicproductsaway,onwhichI'd

liketomakeament.

There,snodenyingthatifwcdependonelectronicproductstoomuch,theywilldoharmtous.Butthatdoesn't

meanwehavetoputallofthemaway,assomeofthemcanreallybringusmuchconvenience.Forinstance,an

ebookisabletostoresomanybooksthatwecantakethemeverywhereandreadthemanytimewewant.

Therefore,itisadvisedthatweuseelectronicproductstoouradvantageandavoidrelyingonthemalthetime.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇投稿，报道你校学生会号召全体学生为了

身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品这项活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

评论：ment一remark

依赖：dependon—>relyon

对...有害：doharmto—>bcharmfulto

例如：Forinstance—*Forexample

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：There'snodenyingthatifwedependonelectronicproductstoomuch,theywilldoharmtous.

拓展句：Thereisnodenyingthatifwerelytoomuchonelectronicproducts,theywillbeharmfultous.

【点睛】[高分句型1JAimingtoprotectourhealth,theStudents'Unioncallsonustoputalltheelectronic

productsaway,onwhichI'dliketomakeament.（运用了介词on+which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【百分句型2]There,snodenyingthatifwedependonelectronicproductstoomuch,（heywilldoharmtous.（运

用了ihat引导的同位语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）

6.（2023上•江苏镇江•高三统考期中）假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国

货兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。

L国货兴起的原因；

2.国货面临的挑战；

3.你的建议和期望。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

RecentyearshavewitnessedaremarkableboominthepopularityofChineseproducts,whichcanbe

attributedtothefollowingfactors.

【答案】范文

RecentyearshavewitnessedaremarkableboominthepopularityofChineseproducts,whichcanbe

attributedtothefollowingfactors.First,Chinesepanieshavebeeninvestingininnovationandquality,makingour

productsgloballypetitive.Second,supportinghomegrownproductsisawayofexpressingourloveforthe

country,aswetakeprideinwhatthenationhasachieved.

However,challengeslieahead.OnemajorconcernistheneedforChineseproductstomaintain[heirquality

standardsandinnovatecontinually.Moreover,howChinesebrandssurviveinthefierceglobalmarketisanother

one.

Frommyperspective,homegrownproductsareareHectionofcurnation.Ifthesepaniescontinuelo

prioritizequalityandethics,Ibelieveitwillmakeusproudandconfidentaboutourculture.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国货

兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。

【详解】1.词汇积累

繁荣：boom—►prosperity

方式：way—>methods

表达：express—>convcy

不断地：continually—>inarow

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First,Chinesepanieshavebeeninvestingininnovationandquality,makingourproductsgloballypetitive.

拓展句：First,Chinesepanieshavebeeninvestingininnovationandquality,whichmakesourproductsglobally

petitive.

【点睛]|.高分句型1]Ifthesepanicscontinuetoprioritizequalityandethics,Ibelieveitwillmakeusproudand

confidentaboutourculture.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

[高分句型2]Second,supportinghomegrownproductsisawayofexpressingourloveforthecountry,aswetake

prideinwhatthenationhasachieved.（运用了as引导原因状语从句）

7.（2023上•江苏南京•高三南京市中华中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Mike即将到你

的家乡旅游，请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆（FolkCultureMuseum）。邮件内容包括：

1.阐明写信事由；

2.介绍文化馆特色；

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearMike,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearMike,

Knowingthatyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,IamwritingtoremendthelocalFolkCulture

Museum.

Thereisalottodointhemuseum.First,whatwillimpressyoumostisthatavarietyofculturalhandicrafts

suchasmusicalinstruments,fanningtoolsandsoonarcexhibitedindifferenthalls.Here,youcanbeinvolvedin

makingcraftslikepaperumbrellasandChineseknots.What'smore,withthehelpoftheguideswhois

professional,youwillhaveabetterunderstandingofthehistoryanddevelopmentofourfolkculture.

You'rewarmlyvveletovisitthemuseum.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用丈。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆

(FolkCultureMuseum)a

【详解】1.词汇积累

各种各样的：avarietyof—>allkindsof

此外：What^more—>Moreover

展示：exhibit—>show

涉及：beinvolvedin—*reiateto

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Knowingthatyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,IamwritingtoremendthelocalFolkCulture

Museum.

拓展句：BecauseIknowyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,IamwritingtoremendthelocalFolkCulture

Museum.

［点睛］【高分句型1］First,whatwillimpressyoumostisthatavarietyofculturalhandicraftssuchasmusical

instruments,fanningtoolsandsoonarcexhibitedindifferenthalls.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的

表语从句）

【高分句型2JWhat'smore,withthehelpoftheguideswhoisprofessional,youwillhaveabetterunderstanding

ofIhehistoryanddevelopmentofourfolkcullure.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

8.（2023・江苏・统考模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为

16分（满分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委Mr.Davis用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：

1.说明问题；

2.给出理由。

参考词汇：读后续写continuationwriting

DearMr.Davis,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

［答案】DearMr.Davis,

IamLihua,aparticipantinyoucontinuationwritingpetition.Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,

Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.

Formywriting,Ifeltittotallymeetstherequirementputforwardinthecontest.Tobeginwith,thestructureof

mypositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.Additionally,thewordsand

sentencesusedarecolorful,withoutrepeatedlyusingthesamewordagainandagain.Ievenwrotesomepound

sentencestoupdatemywriting,suchasattributiveclause,theemphaticpattern,invertedsentenceandsoon.

Finally,awellknownsayingisusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.

Inaword,withthemeritsmentionedabove,IwonderwhyIgotsuchalowscore.Ifitisconvenientforyou,

pleasegivemeanexplanation.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达为•篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给续写竞赛的评委老师写■•封邮件，陈述自己续

写得分为16分，觉得此分数偏低不太合理的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

陈述：state—>makcastatementof

而且：additionally—>what,sniorc/inaddition/furthcrmorc

完美的：perfect—►excellent/outstanding

2.句式拓展：

同义句转换

原白J：Tobeginwith,thestnictureofmypositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixity

alall.

拓展句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmypositionisdefinitelyclear,withtheplotdevelopingreasonably,no

prolixityatall.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.（运

用了现在分词作状语）

【高分句型2】

Finally,awellknownsayingwasusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.（运用

了which引导非限制性定语从句）

9.（2023上•江苏•高三校联考阶段练习）学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在暑假中参加的一个有意义的活

动，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：

I.简要描述；

2.体验和感受。

注意:1.词数80左右:

2.题目已为你写好。

AMeaningfulActivityintheSummerVacation

【答案】Onepossibleversion

AMeaningfulActivityintheSummerVacation

Duringthesummervacation,Ivolunteeredinthecounselingroaminmyinunity,providingcounselingand

children'spsychologyfbrvarioushouseholds.Iearnedthecertificationaftertrainingandthenparticipatedin

practicesessions.Itaughtparentsandtheirchildrenhowtoanalyze（heirproblemsandfindtheirownsolutions,

sinceeachfamilyhasadifferentbackground.

I'mverygladthatmanyparentshaveapplaudedthecounselingprojectbecausetheygetusefulsuggestionsto

resolveproblems.Ihavealsoaccumulatedlifeexperiencethroughthisactivity.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以分享自己在暑假中参加的一个有意义的活动为主题，写一

篇短文给学校英文报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：participatein—>takepartin

高兴：glad—>dclightcd

建议：suggestion—>advice

积累：accumulate—»gather

2.句式拓展

简单句变复:合句

原句：Ihavealsoaccumulatedlifeexperiencethroughthisactivity.

拓展句：Ihavealsoaccumulatedlifeexperiencethroughthisactivity,whichIthinkisofgreatbenefittomy

future.

【点睛X岛分句型IjDuringthesummervacation,Ivolunteeredinthecounselingroominmymunity,providing

counselingandchildren'spsychologyfbrvarioushouseholds.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）

[高分句型2]I（aughtparentsandtheirchildrenhowtoanalyzetheirproblemsandfindtheirownsolutions,

sinceeachfamilyhasadifferentbackground.（运用了“疑问词+todo”结构作宾语以及since引导的原因状语从

句）

10.（2023上•江苏常州•高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，校学生会主席，你校校园广播电台计划招募

一名英语广播员。请你写一张英文招聘海报，张贴在校园公告栏里。内容包括：

I.岗位介绍；2.招聘要求；3.报名方式。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

AnEnglishHostWanted

【答案】AnEnglishhostwanted

Ourschoolradiostartedfiveyearsago.NowweneedanEnglishprogrammehosttomakeourEnglish

programmescater（oourexchangestudents.

IfyouareinterestedinprogrammehostingandhavefluencyinEnglish,youshouldhavegreaterchanceof

gettingthejob.Ofcourse,you'llbehardworkingandbeenthusiasticaboutwork.Aboveall,youneedtohave

teamspirit.

YoucanctotheofficeoftheStudents'UniontosignupfbritbeforethisFridayafternoon.Hopeyouarc

acceptedasanEnglishhost.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的招聘书。要求考生写一张英文招聘海报，为校园广播电台招募

一名英语广播员。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对...感兴趣：beinterestedin—»showinterestin

机会：chance—>opportunity

热情的：beenthusiasticabout—>bekeenon

希望：hope—►wish

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：NowweneedanEnglishprogrammehosttomakeourEnglishprogrammescatertoourexchangestudents.

拓弼句：NowweneedanEnglishprogrammehostwhocanmakecurEnglishprogrammescatertoourexchange

students.

[点睛）[高分句型1]IfyouareinterestedinprogrammehostingandhavefluencyinEnglish,youshouldhave

greaterchanceofgettingthejob.（运用了if引导的状语从句）

【高分句型2]HopeyouarcacceptedasanEnglishhost.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）

II.（2023上•江苏苏州•高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，今怎你校开设了劳动实践课（labourcourse）,你

的英国朋友Paul来信询问该课的开展情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.课程目的；2.课程内容（参加校内劳动、公益活动等）；3.课后感悟。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearPaul,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearPaul,

Howiseverythinggoing?Learningthatyoushowaninterestinourschoofslabourcourse,I'mmorethan

delightedtosharewithyousomethingabouti（.

Inagesturetoformthestudents,correctviewoflabour,colorfullabourprogrammesareopeneveryweekin

ourschool.Wecaneitherhelpplantvegetablesorfeedchickensontheschoolrunfarm.Additionally,studentsare

alsoencouragedtogetinvolvedinmunityserviceandvoluntarywork.

Definitely,mostofusarefascinatedbythecoursebecauseitindeedenrichesourschoollife.Notonlyarewe

relaxedbutwchavegainedahighermoralvalueonlife.

Yours,

LiHua

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