2025年初中英语书面表达专项训练（附答案）

2025年初中英语书面表达专项训练（附答案）考试时间：______分钟总分：______分姓名：______注意：请根据以下提示，写一篇100-120词的短文。假设你是李华，你的学校最近组织了一次“我的爱好”主题英语角活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，参加活动。在短文中，请包括以下几点：1.说明你的爱好是什么，为什么喜欢它。2.简述你通常如何进行这项爱好。3.谈谈这项爱好给你带来了什么（例如：快乐、知识、技能等）。写作内容：Dearfriends,I'mLiHua.I'mverygladtotakepartinthisEnglishcorneractivity.I'dliketotalkaboutmyhobby.Myhobbyisplayingthepiano.IstartedlearningitwhenIwasfiveyearsold.Ilovemusicverymuch,andplayingthepianomakesmefeelrelaxedandhappy.Usually,Ipracticethepianoforaboutonehoureverydayafterschool.Ialsoenjoylisteningtopianomusicandwatchingpianoconcertsontheinternet.Playingthepianohasbroughtmemanybenefits.Itnotonlyhelpsmerelaxbutalsoimprovesmyconcentration.Moreover,I'vemademanyfriendswholovemusicthroughthishobby.IwillcontinuetoplaythepianoandIbelieveitwillbringmemorejoyandhappinessinthefuture.请根据上面的写作内容，写一篇100-120词的短文，参加活动。试卷答案写作内容：Dearfriends,I'mLiHua.I'mverygladtotakepartinthisEnglishcorneractivity.I'dliketotalkaboutmyhobby.Myhobbyisplayingthepiano.IstartedlearningitwhenIwasfiveyearsold.Ilovemusicverymuch,andplayingthepianomakesmefeelrelaxedandhappy.Usually,Ipracticethepianoforaboutonehoureverydayafterschool.Ialsoenjoylisteningtopianomusicandwatchingpianoconcertsontheinternet.Playingthepianohasbroughtmemanybenefits.Itnotonlyhelpsmerelaxbutalsoimprovesmyconcentration.Moreover,I'vemademanyfriendswholovemusicthroughthishobby.IwillcontinuetoplaythepianoandIbelieveitwillbringmemorejoyandhappinessinthefuture.解析思路1.审题与构思：*解析：首先明确题目要求是写一篇关于个人爱好的短文，面向英语角活动。需要包含爱好是什么、为什么喜欢、如何进行、带来的好处四点。构思时，围绕“钢琴”这一中心，按照提示要点组织段落内容。第一段点明主题（我的爱好是弹钢琴），第二段解释原因和日常活动，第三段总结爱好带来的益处。字数控制在100-120词。2.写作过程：*解析：开头使用标准书信格式问候语"Dearfriends,"，并介绍自己"I'mLiHua."，表达参与活动的喜悦"I'mverygladtotakepartinthisEnglishcorneractivity."，点明写作意图"I'dliketotalkaboutmyhobby."。*解析：第二段具体说明爱好是"playingthepiano"。补充具体信息"IstartedlearningitwhenIwasfiveyearsold."，解释原因"Ilovemusicverymuch,andplayingthepianomakesmefeelrelaxedandhappy."。描述通常如何进行"Usually,Ipracticethepianoforaboutonehoureverydayafterschool."，并增加相关活动"Ialsoenjoylisteningtopianomusicandwatchingpianoconcertsontheinternet."，使内容更丰富。*解析：第三段阐述爱好带来的好处"Playingthepianohasbroughtmemanybenefits."。分点说明益处"Itnotonlyhelpsmerelaxbutalsoimprovesmyconcentration."，使用递进关系词"Moreover"转换话题，提到社交方面的收获"I'vemademanyfriendswholovemusicthroughthishobby."。结尾表达对未来的期望"IwillcontinuetoplaythepianoandIbelieveitwillbringmemorejoyandhappinessinthefuture."3.语言运用：*解析：使用了恰当的时态（一般现在时描述爱好和习惯，过去时描述开始时间，一般将来时描述未来计划）。运用了多种句型（简单句、并列句"and..."，状语从句"whenIwasfive"），词汇选择准确（hobby,music,relax,practice,concentration,benefit,en