全国1卷读后续写 课件+素材-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写写作：以2024新高考卷1为例七三四法则七个不“不”一不增加人物二不增加旁支情节三不用过多对话四不用负能量结局五不在文末设置悬念六不偏离原文主题七不违背逻辑常理三个原则原文一致原则正能量原则曲折性原则四个步骤通读全文，理清脉络抓住关键，构思框架增加细节，展开续写检查优化，整洁誊写

续写内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，保持时态一致、人物一致、事件一致及语言表达风格一致。讲故事基本都在用一般过去时，那续写也应使用一般过去时。当然，主题升华时可能会用一般现在时除外。三个原则1.原文一致原则principleofconsistency

凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏或矛盾冲突，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终都能解决，也就是负转正的情节轮廓。但也不能过于复杂或离奇，否则阅卷老师便不能快速读懂你想表达的内容。2.曲折性原则Principleoftortuosity3.正能量原则故事内容一定要传递正能量，围绕“真善美”的大主题去设计情节，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如：迷路了但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,最终一定成功了;吵架了，最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处;犯错了,最后一定会改过自新,重新做人;贼逃了,最后一定是被绳之以法。Principleofpositiveenergy给我四个支点，我能撬动半篇读后续写快速列出提纲第一段1.就地取材,文字接龙(支点句1)5.就地取材反向文字接龙(支点2)两步10句，搞定所有续写!第二段6.就地取材,文字接龙(支点3)10.点睛升华(支点4)Putonthefinishingpoint!四个支点句有了，框架基本敲定！半篇续写搞定！那，剩下的半篇怎么办？别急！别忘了，你是编剧+导演！！！第一段1.就地取材,文字接龙(支点句1)5.就地取材反向文字接龙(支点2)心理情感语言环境动作2.顶级演员,刻画情绪3.调配演员,接戏互动4.情节不够,特效来凑第二段6.就地取材,文字接龙(支点3)10.点睛升华(支点4)7.逆风翻盘前，再虐一把8.调配演员,积极互动9.交代结局Para1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.________________Para2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners._______2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroutethroughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.cross-countryrunsWhatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened."Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably,"Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide."Ibitbackmyfrustration.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;Para1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.______________________________________________________Para2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners__________________________________________________第一段：我们挨着坐了下来，但David不看我。①(第1支点，就地取材，文字接龙)②(调配演员，接戏互动)

David低着头，避免和我有眼神交流。我鼓励他去挑战，毕竟他从来没有缺席任何一次练习，而且他需要战胜的是自己，不用在意別人。③(顶级演员，刻画情感)

④(情节不够，特效来凑)⑤(第2支点，就地取材，反向文字接龙)

他抬起头来看着我，眼里既有感动还有一分坚定!比赛预备铃响起，是时候做决定要不要继续参赛了。他站起身，深吸一口气，走向比赛场地。我看着David和其他选手一起走向起跑线。⑥(第3支点，就地取材，文字接龙)⑦(逆风翻盘前，最后一虐)

David在起跑线就位，一声枪响所有选手立刻开跑。David虽然用尽全力在跑，但明显比其他同学慢。⑧(调配演员，接戏互动)⑨10(第4支点，交代结局，点睛升华)

教练和现场观众为David加油呐喊。虽然David耗时比较久但他坚持着跑完了全程，超越了自己之前所有的成绩。而我相信他这一次的经历足以带给他面对未来一切困难的力量。BrianstormTime什么是两步十句法？2024新高考卷1续写范文

Para1:

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

Iquietlysaid,"David,ifyoudon'twanttoruntoday,nooneisgoingtomakeyoudoit.Butifyou'renotrunningbecauseyou'reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that'snotagoodenoughreason.Therewillalwaysbesomeonewhowilllaughatothersandsaymeanwords.Therearepeoplelikethat,andsuchisoftenthecase.Therealquestioniswhetheryouaregoingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufromdoingsomethingyoureallywanttodo.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,thenyourun!"Iheldmybreath(屏住呼吸)asDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithfiercedetermination,"I'mgonnarun."Para2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Thestarter'sgunsounded,andDavidranforwardwiththeotherchildren.Buthehadonlygoneafewmetresbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundmeappearedtoo.Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.ThiswasDavid'srun.Hehadworkedforit,andhewouldn'tgiveup!Atlast,heraisedhisarmsintriumphashecrossedthefinishlinetowildcheersand