（新高考 I 卷）作文

2020年高考英语真题试卷（新课标Ⅰ）八、书面表达（满分25分）（共1题；共25分）19.你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1）人物简介；2）尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1）词数100左右；2）短文题目和首句已为你写好。ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________19.【答案】参考范文：ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：提纲类作文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主，兼用一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分法要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）respectable；asforme；spare；accompany；patiently;overcome；bravely第三步：连词成句1.Wehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.2.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.3.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.4.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.5.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.6.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.7.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.8.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：WhatismoreBesides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：while,meanwhile,However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“who，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“respectable；asforme；spare；accompany；patiently;overcome；bravely”以及定语从句“Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.”、状语从句“WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。2021年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考I卷）写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．读报的经历：2．喜爱的栏目：3．期望和祝福。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右：2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文1.YouthandMeIthasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.参考范文2YouthandMeAsaregularreaderofYOUTH,lfellinlovewithitforreadingthehumorousstoriesandwordpuzzles.Graduallythepaper'svastcoveringandeditorialshaveattractedmyattention.Fromnewstodaytotipsforyoungpeople,frompoemstosciencefiction,younameit.YOUTHextendsmyhorizons,andatthesametimegivesmejoyandcomfort.lamfondofallitscolumns,butnarrativestoriessentbyourschoolmatesaremyfavourite.ltismysincerehopethatYOUTHwillkeepmovingon,achievingsuccess,gainingreaders'recognition.第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge（粥）.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jefftumedonthesecondstove（炉）burnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelid（盖子）startingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappintment,theirfatherappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文1Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn’texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.【答案】参考范文2Onepossibleversion:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindismay,theirfatherappearedinthedoorway.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheircrestfallenfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeoatporridge.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingacardtheyhadmade,andthencarriedthetrayupstairstotheirparents’bedroom.Thetwinswoketheirmotherupbyhuggingherandyelling'HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!’Motherhuggedthetwins.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.SheshookFatherwhowaspretendingtosnore.Hefeignedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandsaiditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather'seyeandtheywinkedateachothersecretly.【原文分析】本文以第三人称，描述了一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈做早餐，送上一份惊喜的故事。这也是新高考的第一次续写真题。整体难度不大，所描述事件贴近生活，是每个孩子都可能经历过的事情，故事情节的发展也一目了然。如何在平淡的情节上增加故事色彩，则是本篇文章写作的更高境界。明线：Asurprise暗线：lovebetweenfamilies根据续写部分第一段的首句，可以知道正在双胞胎失望之时，父亲的出现给他们带来了希望。可以从以下的几个方面入手去考虑问题：呈上：Howdidfatherfeelonseeingthemess?细节：Whatdidfatherdotohelp?启下：Whocookedthebreakfastatlast?在第一段的描写当中，同学们可以充分的利用原文中的信息，描写做饭的场景。以达到对原文呼应的目的。父亲帮忙后，怎样还让母亲感觉到惊喜呢？这是父亲和孩子们之间的一个小秘密。第二段则是向妈妈献上惊喜的时刻了。呈上：Whatdidtheysay?细节：Howdidmotherreactandfeel?点题:Whatasurprise!第二段可以运用到平时练习用过的表示惊喜、感动的情感描写。温馨提示：据说，答题卡是长成这样子的，行高8毫米，行宽≈19厘米（实际宽度18.7-18.8厘米）读后续写:共18行（段落开头占2行，可写作的空间8.5行*2段）所以，大家在写作的时候，特别是文采洋溢的同学们，一定要控制好字数。不要超出答题范围呀！【答案】参考范文Onepossibleversion:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindismay,theirfatherappearedinthedoorway.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheircrestfallenfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeoatporridge.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingacardtheyhadmade,andthencarriedthetrayupstairstotheirparents’bedroom.Thetwinswoketheirmotherupbyhuggingherandyelling'HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!’Motherhuggedthetwins.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.SheshookFatherwhowaspretendingtosnore.Hefeignedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandsaiditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather'seyeandtheywinkedateachothersecretly.【原文分析】本文以第三人称，描述了一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈做早餐，送上一份惊喜的故事。这也是新高考的第一次续写真题。整体难度不大，所描述事件贴近生活，是每个孩子都可能经历过的事情，故事情节的发展也一目了然。如何在平淡的情节上增加故事色彩，则是本篇文章写作的更高境界。明线：Asurprise暗线：lovebetweenfamilies根据续写部分第一段的首句，可以知道正在双胞胎失望之时，父亲的出现给他们带来了希望。可以从以下的几个方面入手去考虑问题：呈上：Howdidfatherfeelonseeingthemess?细节：Whatdidfatherdotohelp?启下：Whocookedthebreakfastatlast?在第一段的描写当中，同学们可以充分的利用原文中的信息，描写做饭的场景。以达到对原文呼应的目的。父亲帮忙后，怎样还让母亲感觉到惊喜呢？这是父亲和孩子们之间的一个小秘密。第二段则是向妈妈献上惊喜的时刻了。呈上：Whatdidtheysay?细节：Howdidmotherreactandfeel?点题:Whatasurprise!第二段可以运用到平时练习用过的表示惊喜、感动的情感描写。温馨提示：据说，答题卡是长成这样子的，行高8毫米，行宽≈19厘米（实际宽度18.7-18.8厘米）读后续写:共18行（段落开头占2行，可写作的空间8.5行*2段）所以，大家在写作的时候，特别是文采洋溢的同学们，一定要控制好字数。不要超出答题范围呀！2022年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考1卷）第四部分写作（共两节,满分40分）第一节（满分15分）假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1、节目介绍；2、访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 DearCaroline,,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiHua第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.AsaspecialeducationteacherattheDavidfacedandwasschool,Iwasfamiliarwiththechallengesthechallengesproudofhisstrongdetermination..注意:1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme..________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】应用文范文DearCaroline,IamLihua,astudentinchargeoftheprogram“talkandtalk”launchedinthebroadcastingstationofourschool.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoaninterviewinthisprogram.Asyouknow,“talkandtalk”,designedtoexposestudentstoauthenticEnglishenvironment,hasbeengainingtremendouscurrency,whereknowledgeconcerningEnglishandcultureisdisplayedthroughinterviewswithforeignteachers,lectures,andsoon.Inresponsetostudents’request,thisFridayafternoon,specificallyat3:00p.m.,youareinvitedtobeinterviewedduringtheshowtotalkaboutthedevelopmentofEnglishidioms.Iamconfidentthatyourinvolvementwilladdmuchspicetotheshow.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.YourssincerelyLihua读后续写范文Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Iquietlysaid,“Ifyou’renotrunningjustbecauseyou’reafraidyouwillbelaughedat,that’snotagoodreason.Therealquestioniswhetheryouaregoingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufromdoingsomethingyoureallywanttodo.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?”IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithadetermination,“I’mgoingtorun.”IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.HelookedbackatmeandIsignaledtohimwithathumbsup,feelingproudofhim.Hesmiled,tookadeepbreathandgotreadyfortherace.Whentherunningbegan,heranwithallhisstrength,inspiteofhisabnormalsteps.Eventually,hefinishedtherunning.Nearlyoutofbreath,hewalkedtomeandthengavemeahug.“Thankyou!”heuttered,“Withoutyou,Iwouldnevertastesuchsenseofachievementofchallengingmyself.”2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标Ⅰ卷）第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）46.假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua第二节（满分25分）47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（银匠）inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）【答案】DearRyan,

I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua第二节（满分25分）【47题答案】【答案】Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.2024年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标Ⅰ卷）第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）66.假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。【详解】1.词汇积累决定：decide→determine整个的：entire→whole提供：offer→provide总之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.【点睛】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.(as引导的时间状语从句)第二节（满分25分）67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文Para1IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I’llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan’taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrej