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一个人最幸福的时光是童年，那是一段最无忧无虑的岁月。随着时光的飞逝，我们每个人都要渐渐长大。成长中有烦恼，也有欢乐；有收获，也有失落。请以“成长的烦恼”为主题叙述自己童年的一件事。征文要求：1、原创作品；2、题目自拟;3、至少80词。

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一个人最幸福的时光是童年，那是一段最无忧无虑的岁月。随着时光的飞逝，我们每个人都要渐渐长大。成长中有烦恼，也有欢乐；有收获，也有失落。请以“成长的烦恼”为主题叙述自己童年的一件事。征文要求：1、原创作品；2、题目自拟；3、至少80词。

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My“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.Deareditor,pleasesayyes,yes,yes…ZhengChenyuWhat’sthetitleofhisarticle?anattractivetitle

有吸引力的标题My“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.What’sthemainideaofhisarticle?A.Hefoundhislifemoredifficultwithouthisparents.B.Hefoundhislifemucheasierwithouthisparents.get√

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My“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.12345

beforetheholiday

aftertheholiday

duringtheholidayLet’sdivide

beforeduringafterMy“perfectholiday”

Tip1:atimeorder(时间顺序)a)

Excitedaboutthelifewithouthisparentsb)Lonelyaboutthelifealonec)Unhappyaboutthelifewithparentseverydayd)

Tiredofthehomealonelifee)HappytobewithparentsagainPara1Para2Para3Para4Para5Let’sread

andmatchMy“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.12345UnhappyaboutthelifewithparentseverydayExcitedaboutthelifewithouthisparentsTiredofthehomealonelifeLonelyaboutthelifealoneHappytobewithparentsagainbeforeduringafterMy“perfectholiday”

unhappy

excitedtiredlonelyhappy

Whatchangedhim?

Hishomealonestory.

beforeduringafterMy“perfectholiday”

unhappy

excitedtiredlonelyhappy

Experienceisthebestteacher.

Beinghomealone

wasnot

alwaysperfect.Beinghomealone

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perfect.refusedparents’loveenjoyedparents’loveTip2:thechangesofthefeelings(情感变化)Ifparentsandchildrenwanttogetonwell,theyshould_______eachother.loveunderstand…Let’stalkMy“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascoits!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.Deareditor,whatdoyouthinkofmyarticle?Itiswellorganized(有条理)andkeepstothepoint(切题).

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精炼coherent连贯various多样vivid生动languageMy“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.Tip3:

concisestructures(语言精炼)A.B.

BecauseIdidn’thavebreakfast,Iwasveryhungry.Iwasn’tabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates.get√

My“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.Tip4:suitableconjunctionsandtransitionalsentences

(恰当的连接词和过渡句)My“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumcookedsuchdeliciousfood,andmadesureIneverforgotmyhomework.Dadalwayshelpedmewithanydifficultquestions,andtoldfunnyjokeswhenIwasunhappy.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Itoldthemmyhomealonestory,andwealllaughed.Skill5:variouswordsandsentencestructures(多样化的词句)

倒装句结果状语从句、宾语从句时间状语从句宾语从句、动名词作主语让步状语从句

简单句My“perfectholiday”Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.Althoughtheylovedme,Ifeltabitunhappywiththem.“ZhengChenyu,doyourhomework!”“Practicethepiano!”“TurnofftheTV!”IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.Well,mywishcametrue!Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.Nowwasmychance!Icouldhavesomefunatlast!AssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenIenjoyedanexcitingfilmonTV,andafterthatIplayedcomputergames.IlikedthegamessomuchthatIplayeduntilmidnight.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Theteacheraskedmeformyhomework,butIcouldnothanditin.Withanemptystomach,Iwasunabletoplaybasketballwithmyclassmates!Ifelttiredandsleepyatschoolalldaylong.WhenIgothome,Itriedtocooksomerice,butIburntit.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingtasks.Istartedtofeellonely.IwantedMumandDadtocomehomesoon.Mumco