英语书面表达之建议信课件

Welcometoourclass!.1.2.3Lookatthepictures.DoyouthinkherEnglishisgood?Ifwewritealettertohelpher,whatkindoflettershouldwewrite?AletterofthanksBletterofgivingadviceCletterofapplication.Dletterofinvitation.4书面表达----Aletterofadvice

.5Introduction：What’saletterofgivingadvice?.6建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。（Heading）Purposeoftheletter2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。（Body）Givingadvice3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复

(Ending)SummingupadviceWhat’saletterofgivingadvice?.7asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavetroubleindoingsth.makeuseoftakesth.intoconsiderationmakeaplanfind…helpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvicegetimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/viewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…

Iwouldliketosuggestthat…..8常用套语Para1.（Heading）

Purposeoftheletter1．Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarenotgoodat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou..9Para2.（Body）

Givingadvice1.First，Firstly，Secondly…．then，afterthat，notonly...butalso...；not...but...；besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...;finally….2.You’dbetterdosth.3.Itisuseful/necessary/importantforyoutodosth.4.Itshouldbeagoodideaforyoutodo…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterifyou…6.IfIwereyou,Iwould….102026/5/2211Para3.(Ending)Summingupadvice1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful..12点睛之笔：1.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!有志者事竟成.2.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧3.Nevergiveup/loseheart.永不放弃！4.Ifyouhaveanytrouble,pleaseturntomeforhelp.如果有任何问题，可以找我帮忙。5.Onlyinthisway,canyoulearnEnglishwell.只有这样才可以学好英语。Thesesentencescanyourcompositionmoreexcellent!.13建议信优秀习作欣赏分析：.14DearPeter,①I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.②Hereareafewsuggestions.③First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.④Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.⑤Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.⑥YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends,whowilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.⑦TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.⑧Bestwishes.句①为写信的_____________(想得到如何学好中文的建议)句②总起有以下几点_____________。句③--句⑥则根据题目中所给的_______,分别写

,并适当添加

____________,以使文章更丰满。句⑦⑧写

。目的或原因建议要点四个建议细节(建议的理由)寄望与祝愿.15Whilewriting:Discussingingroups:SupposingthewriterasksyoutogivehersomeadviceonhowtoimproveherEnglish,pleasediscussingroupsofsixandgiveheratleastthreepiecesofadvice:Advice1.__________________________________Advice2___________________________________Advice3___________________________________Advice4___________________________________.16WritingNowthewriterasksyoutogivehersomeadviceonhowtoimproveherEnglish.PleaseWritealetterin5minutesingroupsof6accordingtothemodel:DearZhangMing,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon________________,andhereIwilltryto_____________________________.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Firstly,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Ihope______________________________________andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Yours,LiHua.17Afterwriting:假如你是李华，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：焦虑症状如头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等，并对这些症状