Unit 1Period 5　 Reading for Writing (Ⅱ)写作培优课-人教A版高一上学期英语必修一课件

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ReadingforWriting(Ⅱ)写作培优课建议信【写作指导】话题阐释本单元的写作任务是写建议信,建议信是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可以写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。文体概述建议信除了要遵循书信的格式之外,内容要简明扼要,目的明确,理由充足,有说服力。1.首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由;2.主体:提出建议并阐述理由;3.结尾:礼貌地表达希望采纳建议。框架建构Dear

,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto__________

(引出对方需要建议的主题).

Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建议).First,itisimportantto

.Then,italsohelpsto

.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato

.Youcanalso

.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)Asto

,Isuggest

(需要具体到某一方面).Inaddition,

(其他的建议).I’msure

__________________(预测可能的结果,给对方以行为的信心和决心).Ihope

(表达愿望).Yourssincerely,LiHua【典题示例】

为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑杰米(Jamie),收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封80词左右的回信。内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议并说明理由。参考词汇:tempern.脾气,情绪Step

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谋篇立意体裁:_______Tips开头:Trytounderstandandcomforthim主体:Givehimsomepracticalsuggestionsandrelatedreasons结尾:Hopehewillbebetter时态:___________人称:_____________应用文一般现在时第二人称为主Step

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语言支架1.知道你现在过得很糟糕,我很抱歉。①_______________

过得很糟糕

②_____________

目前,现在

③运用宾语从句连词成句____________________________________________________________haveabadtimeatthemomentI’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.2.事实上,每个人都会有一段凡事都看起来不对劲的时期,所以你不用太担心。①_______

时期,阶段②__________

看起来,似乎

③用适当的从句连词成句________________________________________________________________________________________________________periodseemtodoThetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.3.重要的是学会控制你的脾气,为的是你不会做任何你会后悔的事或说任何你会后悔的话。①controlone’stemper _________②__________________

为的是

③regret __________④连词成句(使用不定式作表语和sothat引导的目的状语从句)______________________________________________________________________________________________控制脾气sothat/inorderthat后悔,遗憾Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.4.到户外和你的朋友一起玩团队游戏,因为体育锻炼是消除愤怒的有效方法。①___________

到户外

②teamgames

_________③__________________________

因为

④_________

消除,去除

⑤连词成句________________________________________________________________________________________________gooutdoors团队游戏since/nowthat/as/because/forgetridofGooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Step

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润色成篇____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HiWorried,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytoge