四级写作分题型讲评2.ppt

1、大学英语四级考试写作,分题型讲评2,II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构,Paragraph1:(1)概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);(2)具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/事物的基本看法specific)。Paragraph2:(1)作者对该现象/问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;(2)支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);(3)本段总结(可以省略)。Paragraph3:(1)总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。,四级作文试题2000年1月,Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompos

2、itiononthetopicHowIFinancemyCollegeEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可以通过多多种途径解决。2.哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation,第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：,Nowadays/Atpresent/Currently/Thesedays/Today,tuitionsandfee

3、sforcollegestudentsaremuchhigherthaneverbefore.Howtofinancemycollegeeducationhasbecomeamatterofconcern.,第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母;2.银行贷款3.打工挣钱,第二段主题句：Therearemanywaystosupportmycollegeeducationfinancially./Waystosupportmyuniversitystudyfinanciallyvarygreatly/arevarious.第二段分写：Inthefirstplace,Icanget/gain/o

4、btainallthemoneyfrommyparents.Inthesecondplace,Icanapplyfor/askforabankloan,especiallysetup/establishedforcollegestudents/undergraduates.Whatsmore,Icanfindaparttimejobtoearnenoughmoney.,第三段：我所赞同的方法(阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法)。,Personally/AsfarasImconcerned/Inmyopinion/Frommypointofview/Tomywayofthinking/AsIseei

5、t,Ipreferthebankloanforthefollowingreasons.Foronething,myparentsarenotrichenoughtoaffordme.Foranother,Iwillnothaveenoughtimeandenergytostudyafterfinishingmypart-time/temporary/oddjobs.Inaddition,IbelieveIcanhuntarewarding/dreamjobaftergraduation,andthenIwillbeabletopayoff/payback/return/giveback.The

6、refore/So/Hence,.,使文章富有表现力的手段：,1、使用有难度的词汇;2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子;3、使用被动语态;4、使用倒装句;(notonly.butalso.;only.)5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。,绿化我们的城市,第一段：近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。,普通版,Recently,withthedevelopmentofbusinessesandindustries,moreandmoretreeshavedisappearedi

7、nbigcities.Wehavetriedourbesttopreventpeoplefromcuttingtrees.But,itisimportanttorealizetomakeourcitiesgreen.,润色版,Incontemporarysociety,whileourindustriesandbusinesseshaveexperienceda(n)rapid/fast/amazing/marked/fantasticdevelopment,thenumberoftreesinmanylargecitieshasdeclined/decreased/reducedsharpl

8、y/dramatically.Althoughremarkableeffortshavebeenexertedtopreventmoretreesfrombeingcut,therealizationofmakingcitiesgreenerisstillofgreatimportance.,第二段：,绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。,普通版,Therearemanyadv

9、antagesinmakingcitiesgreener.First,itmakesourairclean.Scientificresearchhasprovedthattreescanreduceagreatamountofcarbondioxideintheatmospherethroughabsorption.Second,itaddstothebeautyofourcities.Withtreesandflowerseverywhere,thereisapleasantfeelingthatweliveinabeautifulgardenandareclosertonature.Fin

10、ally,itwillbringusalotoftimber.Andthisisaneffectivewaytosolvetheproblemoflackofnaturalresources.,润色版,Whatbenefitscantheprogramofmakingcitiesgreenerbringtous?First,theairwillbecleaner.Scientificexperimentshavealreadyprovedthattreescanreduceairpollutionbyproducingalotofoxygen.Thiswillimprovethequality

11、oftheurbanenvironment.Second,ourcitieswilllookmorebeautiful.Justimaginethecitywhichisfulloftreesandflowers.Whatanattractivegardenitis!Whatsmore,bymakingcitiesgreener,wecanprovideourindustrywithtimberthepreciousnaturalresources.,第三段：,绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。

12、,普通版,Makingcitiesgreenerrequirespeopleseffortsalloverthecountry.Andpeopleshouldnotonlyrealizethatitisimportanttomakecitiesgreenerforitscontributiontourbanenvironment,butalsoplanttreesandprotectthemfrombeingusedinbusiness.,润色版,Makingcitiesgreenerrequiresmorethanwidespreadawareness;itcallsforanimmedia

13、tecommitmenttoplantingmoretreesandgrowingmoreflowers.(Makingcitiesgreenerrequiresthewholenationsefforts.Andnotonlyshouldmostpeoplegaintheawarenessofthesignificantcontributionofmakingcitiesgreenertourbanenvironment,butalsomakeacommitmenttotheprotectionofmoretreesagainstbusiness.),句型变化,A.(1)Wecanimagi

14、nethebeautifulsurroundings.(2)Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.(3)Thereisacleanriverinthecity.(4)Therearemanyfishesintheriver.(5)Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.(6)Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.(7)Therearemanyflowersonthem.B.(1)Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwehavemadeourcitiesgr

15、eener.(2)Greentreeslinethestreets.(3)Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichalotoffishesabound.(4)Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees.(5)Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.,1.Therebe.,1)a.Therearefewerandfewercitizenswholiketoseefilms.b.Filmsarenowlosingtheirappe

16、alformanycitizens.2)a.Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofseverehousingshortages.b.Housingshortagesbecomethesourceofgreatcomplaint.,2.If,1)a.Ifyoucomparethetwomethodscarefully,youwillfindthedifference.b.Carefulcomparisonofthetwomethodswillshowyouthedifference.2)a.Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgo

17、odresult.b.Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewillnotbringyougoodresult.3)a.Ifthereisnopollution,mancancertainlysurvive.b.Mancancertainlysurviveintheworldwherethereisnopollution.,3.Inorderto,1)a.Inordertopreventtheproblembecomingtooserioustosolve,wemusttakeanimmediatestep.b.Animmediatestepmustbetaken

18、beforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.2)a.Inordertobuildastableandprosperousnation,peopleshouldmakenewefforts.b.Neweffortsshouldbetakenbeforeastableandprosperousnationisbuilt.,4.Moreandmore,1)a.MoreandmorepeoplenowprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.b.Peopleineverincreasingnumbersprefertostayathomeandwa

19、tchTV.2)a.Moreandmorepeoplewhobecomemoreandmorerichcanaffordamotorcycle.b.Agrowingnumberofpeoplewhobecomeincreasinglyrichcannowaffordamotorcycle.,3)a.Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.b.Teenagesmokingisontherise/increase/decrease/declineinrecentyears.4)a.Moreandmoreteachersareneededwi

20、ththedevelopmentofeconomy.b.Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentofeconomy.5)a.Moreandmoretreeshavedisappearedinthecity.b.Thereisasharpdeclineinthenumberoftreesinthecity.,写作练习：JobsforGraduates,1)大学生难找工作2)原因很多3)解决的办法,范文,第一段提出讨论话题Nowadays,collegegraduatescometorealizethatitisnoteasytogetarewardingjob.Most/Manyofthemcannotgetajobrightaftergraduation.Thejobmarketforcollegestudents/graduatesisgettingtighterandtighter.Accordingtoasurvey,only80%ofcollegegraduatesoftheclassof2002foundjobstheyeartheygraduated,c