英语段落--写作.ppt

1、StructuredparagraphWriting,BlendedStructureandStyle,GeneralInformation:,StudentsarefirstintroducedtoparagraphwritingIntroduceeachskillorstructurewithademonstrationverbalizingyourthinkingasyoumodel(dress-ups,sentenceopeners,decorations,sentencestyles)Doanexampletogetherwiththestudents,guidingasnecess

2、aryDoseveralmodelstogetherAskstudentstodooneontheirownStudentsnotreadytoworkindependentlycontinueworkingwiththeteacherwhodoesrepeatedexamples.,Assumptions:,AlwaysusetextthatisBELOWinstructionalreadinglevelAlwaysintroduceoneconceptatatimeStudentsarerequiredtouseeverylearnedtechniqueregularlyafterthey

3、havelearnedit,whenevertheydoawrittenassignment.Introduceseveraldressupswhileteachingparagraphwritingthenmoveontonarrativewriting.IntroducesentenceopenersanddecorationswhenstudentsarereadyAddsentencestyleswhenstudentsareready.,ProcessforNoteTakingandOutliningandsummarizing,Putparagraphuponoverhead.Re

4、adparagraphtogetherensurestudentsunderstandtopicsentence,details,andclosing.Demonstration:teachtheformatforoutliningandnotetakingTeachermodelsretellingtheparagraphmodelinggoodspeakingskills.Studentsretellparagraphfromtheiroutline.Studentswriteasummaryoftheparagraphintheirownwords.,BOOKS,IBooksarefun

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6、ethegrassonthemountainside.3Heclimbeduptherockstoreachanewmeadow.4Heslipped.5Hefellontoaledge.6Hegotupandclimbedbackupthemountainside.7Thegoatwashappyonthemountain.,TheMountainGoat,WhatareDress-ups?,becauseclauselyadverbStrongverbs(dual)Quality(dual)adjectivesWho/whichclauseWhen,while,where,since,as

7、,if,althoughclauses,TheCat,IThecatlivesinthebarn.1Thelittlecatsbedisapileofhay.2Thisanimalsleepscurledupinaball.3Onceawakethecathuntsforfood.4Plentyofmiceliveinabarn.5Birdsandratswhichdwellinthebarncanalsomakeagoodmeal.6Thecathastomovefasttocatchitsfood.7Afteramealthecatstretchesoutforanap.8Lifeinth

8、ebarnisgood.,Teach“dress-ups”individually,IThecatlivesinthebarnwhichisnestledinthecornerofthefarmyard.1Thiswildlittlecatsbedisapileofpricklyhaywhichissafeonahighledgeabovethecows.2Thisferalfelinesleepssnuglyandhappilycurledupinafuzzyball.3Onceawakethecathungrilysearchesforfood.4Plentyofplumpandjuicy

9、micealsoliveinthebarn.5Becausebirdsandratsalsodwellinthebarn,theycanmakeagoodmealwhenthemicearebusyinthefields.6Thecathidesandpouncesquicklytocatchitsfood.7Afteratastyandfillingmealthecatstretchesoutforanap.8Lifeinthebarnisgoodalthoughthemicemightnotthinkso.,Teach“SentenceOpeners”individually,Subjec

10、tStartswiththesubjectofthesentence.Prepositionalstartswithaprepositionsuchas:during,in,above,sincelyadverbstartsentencewithanadverbingverbstartsentencewithaningverbClausalstartsentencewithwhen,where,as,ifalthough,while,since,when,VSS(VeryShortSentence),Thealley,IThebackalleywasalivelyplace.1Thecatwa

11、sinthealley.2Dustblewdowntheroadway.3Garbagewentpast.4Thecatwentaftersomepaper.5Thepaperwentbyadog.6Thedogwentafterthecat.7Thecatsawthedog.8Hewentupatree.9Thealleywasfulloflife.,TheAlley,IThebleakanddustybackalleywasalivelyplace.1Inthedarkness,awildandhungrycatlurked.2Whirlingdustswoopedangrilydownt

12、heblackandstinkyroadway.3Inthechillywind,loosegarbageflewpast.Thestarvinganddesperatecatchasedsomepaperwhichhadrecentlybeenwrappedaroundsomeonesfishdinner.5Wildlythepaperswirledpastamangylookingdogwhichangrilychargedafterthecat.7Sharpeyesspiedthedog!8Upthetreesheflew!9Thelonelyalleyteemedwithhiddenl

13、ife.,Letsdecorate!,QuestionsConversationSimile/metaphor3sss(Triples)AlliterationDramaticopening/closing,Thecaterpillar,IThelifecycleofacaterpillarisinteresting.1Atinyeggliesonaplant.2Theegghatchesandalittlecaterpillarcrawlsoutoftheegg.3Thisworm-likecreatureeatsandeats.4Itgrowsquickly.5Thecaterpillar

14、buildsahousearounditself.6Thisiscalledacocoon.7Insidethecocoonthecaterpillarsleepsandchanges.8Whenthechangeisdone,abeautifulbutterflycomesoutofthecocoon.9Acaterpillarhasanunusuallifecycle.,Thecaterpillar,IDoyouknowabouttheunusuallifecycleofacommoncaterpillar?1Whiletheworldisunaware,atinyandinnocuous

15、eggappearsunexpectedlyonaplantsleaf.2Thestrangelittleegghatchesandatinycaterpillarcrawlsslowly,silently,smoothly-outoftheegglikeaminiaturechickenonamicroscopicleaf.3Thisravenousworm-likecreaturechompsandgobbleswhilegrowingquicklyintoafat,hairycaterpillar.4Asiteatsitswaythroughtheunwaryplant,theadult

16、caterpillarbuildsatightandcozycocoon.5SleepingandchangingInsidethecocoonthecaterpillarslowlytransformsitself.6Andsuddenly,magic!7Emergingfromthecocoon,thebutterflyspreadsitscolorfultransparentwingsand,likeafairy,fluttersaway.9Althoughveryshort,thecaterpillarhasanunusualandmagicallifecycle.,Forediting,EachstudentneedsathesaurusStudentsmustDOUBLESPACEallwriting.Thisleavesroomforediting.SetupaformatforTitle,Name,DateMustnotrepeatoriginalparagraphwordforwordTeachEDITINGcodesanduseconsistentlyTeachandreviewNS,indent,missingword,spelling,BANNEDwords,capital,punctuationduringdailyle