谚语评论性四级英语作文

1、2015.12,谚语评论类作文,引语评论作文的特点,全英文给题，无中文提示。 文章给出一句名人名言或是俗语谚语，并且进行评论。 文章主题与“人生哲理、优秀品质”相关，不再是以往的校园、学习或社会热点,困惑,学生拿到这个没有中文提纲的写作题目之后，无从下手一不知道文章的段落结构安排，而不知道文章的内容怎么去写。,评论类作文的发展及怎样审题,Step I 审题 （2011）,Part I Writing (30minutes) Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds

2、Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.” Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,用事例来例证strong will是成功的关键,审题（2012）,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are all

3、owed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” You should write at least 150 words but more than 200 words。,用林肯的名言中来论证full preparation 对成功

4、的重要性,The Way to Success,Persistence and the determination to success can overcome profound obstacles. Take the example of the first woman Supreme Court Justice of United States. She graduated from Stanford with the prestige of her degree dreamed to be lawyer but she was rejected from the entire law

5、circuit. Even so she never gave up. In the end, she was eventually nominated and appointed the first woman Supreme Court Justice in the United States.,The Way to Success,Lets take Lin Shuhao for example. He is a Chinese-American citizen. At the beginning, he was not very popular in NBA. When he firs

6、t appeared in the match, quite a few people hold the view that he could not survive in NBA, let alone become a famous basketball star. However, with hard work and profound diligence, he achieved success!,The Way to Success,Diligence, hard working and persistence can help us to transcend any handicap

7、s. The experience of Helen Keller set an example for us. She was an disabled people and she was deprived of hearing and vision when she was born, but she finally acquired many languages and become a famous writer and educator.,The Way to Success,Chance favors the prepared. Les Brown, an icon in Amer

8、ican broadcasting, could be one of the most convincing cases of how full preparation works in success. He was sent to the special education school for the learning disabled. After graduation, he became a garbage collector, so the future for him is slim. However, he never give up, because he had a dr

9、eam to become a DJ. He went to the local radio station and wanted to get a job there. (But the request was rejected by the manager for no work experience in broadcasting. Despite everyones discouragement and criticism, he was determined and went to the station everyday. Finally the manager gave in a

10、nd took him to do small task at no pay. During the time spent with the real DJs, )he learned by himself how to operate the panel, and accumulated the knowledge to broadcast. Owing to it, the chance arrived. One day afternoon, a DJ felt too sick to broadcast and no one could be found to take over him

11、. At this time, the manager assigned Les to have a try. Because of his full preparation, Lea succeeded. How could Les Brown have done without full preparation?,The Way to Success,Diligence Persistence Hard working Determination Well/full preparation,2015年12月第一套,Directions: For this part, your are al

12、lowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting in the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others opinions. You should write at 120 words but no more than 180 words.,自己举例或用理据论证倾听的重要性,2015年12月第二套,Directions: For th

13、is part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,用事例（活到老学到老）或理据论证终身学习的重要性,20

14、15年12月第三套,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life. You sh

15、ould write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,用事例（扶不扶老人、帮助贫困生或特殊儿童）或理据论 证主动成为参与人，贡献我们的才能，造福大众的重要性,How to organize?,1.直接引用引语 文章的第1和2句，引用题中给予的原话 There is a widespread saying that, “” （2.简化引语+表层评论 改写引语使之简洁易懂对引语的表层含义进行评论；就引语的“事”说“事” ） 3.提炼挖掘引语的深层含义 The saying/proverb/ sbs remark aims at info

16、rming us of the significance of A (提出A的重要性),Paragraph one:,How to organize?,事例法： 举自己的故事:(1. 父母怎样由criticize 到listening 的变化。由此 带来的与父母关系的改善，和自己学习成绩的提高。 2. 与好朋友之间的相处或关系的改善等) 例举身边发生的故事，故事能够体现倾听的重要性的,Paragraph Two,2015年12月 第一套试卷 Writing,How to organize?,例举论证法： 1. 正反面论述法： 正面论述倾听的重要性 反面论述如果没有倾听会有什么样的后果 2. 例

17、举罗列法： it can it can and it can ,Paragraph Two,正反论述,I firmly believe that listening is of greater significance than talking. For one thing, If you can not listen correctly, you can not talk properly. Just imagine a world where everyone keep talking but nobody listening, its useless to say anything th

18、en. For another, if you want to make achievement in social settings, relationships and business, one way to ensure your success is to be a great listener.,理据罗列,As we all know, listening is a good way in communication with others. Because it helps us to understand the ideas of others clearly, avoidin

19、g misunderstanding; it helps us widen our horizon; and it helps us build up a good relationship with others.,How to organize?,事例法： 例举自己身边的例子： 如你爷爷或奶奶学会用网上购物，微信视频 聊天，开微博当博主等 你周围的邻居40多岁了考上了大学等 名人事例： 86岁的著名经济学家于光远学会使用电脑，建微博。 海伦.凯特的励志故事,Paragraph Two,2015年12月 第二套试卷 Writing,How to organize?,例举论证法： 1. 正反面

20、论述法： 正面论述倾听的重要性 反面论述如果没有倾听会有什么样的后果 2. 例举罗列法： it can it can and it can ,Paragraph Two,正反论述,As we all know, the knowledge changes so quickly with the advance of modern society, those who dont use the mobile Internet technology will fall behind the times. For example, you cant use a mobile phone to boo

21、k a taxi, pay various fees, buy all kinds of goods etc. While those who maintain the habit of lifelong learning will benefit from the new technologies.,Therefore, in order to enhance our conversation skills, here are a few simple rules we can follow to help us become a better listener, such as stopp

22、ing talking endlessly, giving your full attention to the speaker and making an effort to shift the focus of the conversation to the other person. All in all, nothing can instead of listening!,Part II Translation,云南省的丽江古镇是中国著名的旅游目地之一。,古镇： 旅游目的地： 云南省的丽江古镇:,Lijiang, the ancient town in Yunnan Province,

23、 is one of the famous travel destination in China.,The ancient town of Lijiang in Yunan Province is one of the famous travel destination in China.,ancient town; old town,tourist/ travel destination,The ancient town in Yunnan Province,那里的生活节奏比大多数中国城市都要缓慢。,Wrong: The pace of life there is slower than most other cities in China. / most other Chinese cities.,Right: The pace of life there is slower than the pace of life in most other