定语从句与写作公开课.ppt

1、Attributive clause,Grammar and writing,Lead-in,Enjoy the song-the one you love,I know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you

2、werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love,I know you need a frie

3、ndSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who mad

4、e you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love,Someones gonna cry when they learn theyve lost youSomeones gonna thank the stars above,Practice of the Attributive clause,1

5、.A plane is a machine _can fly . 2.The car _my uncle bought last week was stolen. 3.The man_is walking on the playground is my old friend. 4.The woman _ you saw in the park is our English teacher .,which/that,(which/that),who/that,(who/that),5. I saw a woman _bag was stolen. 6. The reason _he was la

6、te was that he got up late. 7. I still remember the day _I first came to Beijing. 8. It is an important day _ I will never forget. 9. The park _ they paid a visit to is beautiful.,whose,why,when,Which/that,Which/that,定语从句在写作中的应用,Part1: 高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏： 2013年全国高考新课标 你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。 You know,

7、 my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting. 我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。 Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.,2. 2013 年广东高考 那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。 Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of th

8、e society. 正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。 As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.,Part 2: 写作中定语从句的主要作用 1. 增加词数 可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复和句式单一。 补充细节，以丰富文章内容。,Part 3: 如何写出定语从句 题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。 Solution: 1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。 2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外 一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用） For example: 我们班是

9、一个大家庭。 这个大家庭包括17个男生和7个女生。,Our class is a big family. The family consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.,Our class is a big family, which consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.,Practice: 把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句 1a. Seeing these changes, we cannot forget them. b. They gave us unselfish help when we were in trou

10、ble. _ _,答案：Seeing these changes, we cannot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.,2a. I feel greatly honored to host the contest. b. The contest is sponsored by the Students Union. _ _,答案：I feel greatly honored to host the contest, which is sponsored by the Students Union.

11、,3a. They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them. b. The elderly always feel lonely. _ _,答案：They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.,4a. The library is not far from here. b. The writer often does

12、 some reading there. _ _,答案：The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here.,5a. Ive always longed for the days. b. I will be able to be independent then. _ _,答案：Ive always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent.,Practice: 1. 我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。 2. 我不喜欢他的外

13、号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。 3. 他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。 4. 我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。,我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。,My best friend is Li Ming. His nickname is hippo.,My best friend is Li Ming, whose nickname is hippo.,I dont like his nickname. The reason is that it deeply hurts him.,The reason why I dont like his nickname is

14、 that it deeply hurts him.,我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。,她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。,He lives in Kai Feng. People can visit lots of scenic spots here.,He lives in Kai Feng, where people can visit lots of scenic spots.,(注意此处不再有here),我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。,We used to attend painting class together. I will neve

15、r forget the days .,I will never forget the days when we used to attend painting class together.,2. 题干中只有一个孤立的简单句 Solution: 找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。 For example: 开封是一个历史名城。 Kai Feng is a famous historic city.,Kai Feng is a famous historic city, which has a long history of more than 2700 years and lar

16、ge numbers of historic spots, such as the Iron Pagoda, Longting Park and so on.,有多久的历史？因何出名？,Practice: 即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。 李明是一个热心肠的人。,The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.,The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival, which is celebrated to honor

17、our national hero, Qu Yuan.,(节日的目的),李明是一个热心肠的人。 Li Ming is a warm-hearted man .,Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always lends a hand to others.,(具体化),直击高考（2013年高考山东卷） 描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）,（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）,I would like to do a part- time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working

18、experience.,Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizen.,I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a p

19、art- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,Translate the following English proverbs into Chinese and then pick out the attributive clauses. God help those who help themselves . 2. He who laughs last laughs best . 3. He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man . 4. He who is content (满足) i

20、s always happy.,Challenge yourself !,根据下列句子，完成短文。,众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了2008年奥运会。通过本届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一种国际语言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。本届奥运会上友好的志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。,注意：要使用定语从句.,play apart/ role in, seize the opportunity, make contributions to,As is known to us all, Beijing has successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. Through the Olympics, China perfectly showed itself to the whole world. English, whic