大学英语四级作文谚语名言类

1、题型分析之一-谚语警句型,Para.1(一般三句话） 1. 点明文章要阐述的谚语或名 2. 用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思 3. 论点句,表明自己对这一谚语的观点态度 Para.2 （一般六句话） A. 支持性的细节分论点 （至少两个论点；举例子证明，可以用正反两方面的逻辑） B. 从事实引出结论，再说明论点 Para.3 （一般二至三句） conclusion:阐明其现实或更深远意义,句型 1. An English proverb says, As the saying goes, One of the great men once remarked, Nearly every civ

2、ilization has its own equivalent to the proverb, An inspiring proverb echoing in my mind goes,One of the great men once remarked, “Health is above wealth”. (没有必要用一对引号） 改为：As the saying goes, health is above wealth.,第二句 It means that In other words, 第三句 It goes without saying that / It is obviously c

3、lear that / It is universally acknowledged that,例子 1. As the saying goes, health is above wealth. 1. One of the great men once remarked, life without health is lifeless. 1. Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb, life that lacks health lacks everything. 2. It means that heal

4、th is of the topmost importance/value in our life. 2. It indicates that making money at the cost of health is not worthwhile. 2. it means only people who are in good health are able to lead a meaningful life. 3. I cannot agree with it more. 3. Though the proverb convey some sense, I could not fully

5、agree with it.,第二段,论点 ： 1. Health is the foundation of a quality life. Without a good body, the accomplishments we made, the relationship we kept, the social status we try hard to build will be completely useless. 例子： Stevie Jobs, CEO of the Apple Company businessman who work so hard that he collaps

6、e eventually/a rich man with severe health problems My friends/my father/myself,例子： Stevie Jobs, CEO of the Apple Company (Let us) Take Stevie Job for example. Take Stevie Job as an example. Imagine how much more he could have done to the world if he had not died at such a young age? (虚拟语气/反问句式) Tak

7、e Stevie Job, former CEO of Apple Company who died at the age of 56.,论点 A good body is something through which we are able to experience the world. 例子 A rich patient (出不了门的/坐轮椅的confined in a wheelchair/confined to his room) Stevie wonder/Stephen Hawking My friends/myself,Take Stevie Hawking for exam

8、ple. An intellectual giant as he is, the great man undoubtedly misses opportunities to experience the physical world for his paralysis. What a pity!,说理 Without a good health, we can not travel or study, thus opening our mind and enriching our life.,论点3： If a personal is healthy, he tends to hold a m

9、ore optimistic and more confident view towards the world. 说理 论点4：health is among a few things that can not be bought with wealth. 说理,History / Our society abounds with the examples of Edison / Columbus / Einstein Such examples /instances might be given indefinitely, but this will be sufficient to sh

10、ow that On the other hand / On the contrary, if There is hardly a man who can achieve success without All evidence points to / justifies / lends support to the fact ,结论 For us college students, the saying / proverb has a profound and realistic significance; Just imagine how far can we make in our ac

11、ademic study, if we dont have a strong body? From what has been discussed/mentioned above, To sum up,范文1,(第一段）As the saying goes, life that lacks health lacks everything. It means that health is of the topmost value in our life. I cannot agree with it more. (3 句) (第二段） First of all, health is the fo

12、undation of a quality life. Without a good body, the accomplishments one made, the relationship one kept, the social status one tried hard to build would turn into nothingness eventually. Take Stevie Job as an example. He could no longer enjoy the fruit of the huge accomplishments he made after he d

13、ied untimely at 56. Furthermore, A good body is something through which one is able to experience the world. Without a good health, one can not travel or study, thus opening our mind and enriching our life. Moreover, much evidence points to the fact a healthy person tend to hold a more optimistic an

14、d more confident view, and can fit into the society better. (7 句) (第三段）To sum up, Health comes before everything. (1句),范文2,(第一段)Have you ever heard of the proverb, without health life is not life, life is lifeless? It means only people in good health condition can enjoy a meaningful life. Though it

15、conveys/carries some sense, I could not fully agree with it. (3句） 第二段 As far as I am concerned, important as health is, the meaning of life does not lie in health. 论点1：Many people of ill-health accomplish great things in life. Take Zhang Haidi for example. Despite her disability, she taught herself

16、and mastered quite a few foreign languages such as English, Japanese and German. She turned into a successful translator and a university graduate eventually. Can you say that her life is lifeless or meaningless? Definitely no. (论点2) Furthermore, poor health sometimes is a blessing in disguise. Step

17、hen Hawking once remarked, not until he was diagnosed with AIS, an incurable disease, did he begin to really focus his attention on his real interest-space cosmology. The realization that his days are numbered helped him think really serious about his research. 第三段 To sum up, I think the meaning of

18、life lies not in health but in many others.,具体评分标准,8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 8-11分：句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。但是简单句较多，最多出现一句较容易的定语从句或者强调句，且说理啰嗦，中心不够突出。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 11-14 句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。说理重点突出，紧凑清楚，能够灵活且正确运用多种句式。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。,亮点,其他类似的题型,题型分析,话题写作（Topic writing） 针对某一社会现象，分析原因并论述你的观点。 一般会给出中文提纲，要求按照提纲的顺序写作。 提纲的结构一般是： 现在存在某一现象（对现象本身进行描述） 分析造成这一现象原因或是现象会带来的影响 我的观点,社会现象/新事物 第一段如何写？ 1. 点明文章要讨论阐述的事物或现象 2 . 我对这个事物或现象的基本看法 3.赞成的理由因为其重要性(或反对