初中写作-看图作文.ppt

1、中考作文之看图作文,中考作文的类型,什么是看图作文？ 看图作文所提供的材料是一幅或几幅图，所写内容要求有日记、故事、简介等，有的还提供一定的参考词汇，因此有一定的发挥空间，但并不是允许考生随意发挥。,2020/7/7,日记的格式 英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。 英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunn，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy，Cloudy等。 日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可

2、以顶格写，也可以内缩3-5个字母的空间。,写作要点,“一审” “二写” “三连” “四改”,“一审”即审题。主要是看清楚题目要求，读懂画面内容和所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么，准备写作的人称和时态，如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。,2020/7/7,*审图注意分层次*,首先，要看懂图画本身所表示的具体内容，包括人物，时间，事件，过程变化和结果。审图要仔细。 其次，认真揣摩命题人的意图及思想倾向，即命题人想通过图画说明什么道理，表明什么态度，要达到什么目的。 读懂图画的关键是读出主题。,2020/7/7,“二写”即逐图列纲。主要是就每幅图的内容列个提纲，

3、考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。,“三连”即连句成文。主要是把第二步所写的句子，在规定的范围内稍加发挥，运用适当的连词把它们串联起来组成一篇短文。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用，不要“I”到底，逗号完文。,“四改”即修改润色全文。主要是看全文符不符合题目要求和图画含义，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。确定无误之后

4、，再抄写到考卷上。,小试牛刀,【参考范文】 One day my uncle was reading a newspaper and learned that birds were our friends. We should get alone well with them. He looked at his nice bird in the cage, and decided to let it fly back home-nature. He took the cage with the bird in it and went to a little hill near his hous

5、e by bike. He went home with the empty cage. When he got back, he sat in a chair and had a rest. A moment later, to his surprise, he found the bird back in the cage.,2020/7/7,请仔细观察下图， 写一篇100词左右的短文， 要求故事完整， 句子通顺， 可根据需要适当增加细节， 但内容要与图片相符。参考词汇：bare (光秃的),destroy(毁坏),2020/7/7,2020/7/7,【参考范文】 Once there w

6、as a village at the foot of the hill. There were many green trees on the hill. The villagers were very poor. One day, a villager had an idea. He cut the tall trees on the hill and sold them. With the money he had built a new house. He seemed to have become rich. So many other villagers followed him

7、and began to cut down more trees. Some time later, no trees were left and the hill was bare. Unluckily the village became very hot in summer and there were heavy storms and floods. Many of the fields and even the houses were destroyed. The villagers became poor again and even poorer.,四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分 三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6 处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分 二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语