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1、A letter of suggestions,A letter of suggestions,假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim对于汉语产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。请给Jim写封回信，内容包括： 内容涵盖：1. 学习汉语的好处 2. 提出学习汉语的建议 3. 预祝学习成功，并邀请来北京玩,. Criteria of the composition,内容的完整性 结构的清晰性 语言的准确性 交际的得体性,Dear Jim, Para1: Para2: Para3: Para4: Yours, Li Hua,根据要求 适度开放,美好祝愿 诚挚邀请,开门见山 交代事由,Structur

2、e,. 1.内容的完整性：,2.交际的得体性：,Learning Chinese can help you,You can/ should /had better do,Having known that you are, I,I hope that you can,greeting and writing purpose,benefits (3-5 /30-40w),suggestions (5-8 /50-80w),best wishes and invitation,1 .Writing purpose (Which one is better? why?) . Having known

3、 that you are learning Chinese now, I am writing to give you some advice on Chinese learning, which hopefully could be helpful for you. .Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it.,2. Benefits _ What benefi

4、ts can you think of? _,3. Suggestions _ 1)What suggestions can you give? _ _,Discuss in your group,writing purpose Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you.,题目信息：你的美国朋友Jim对于汉语产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。,bac

5、kground information,writing purpose,.语言的准确性及结构的清晰性：,Are they benefits? Chinese is one of the most important language in the world . Chinese is spoken by most of the people in the world.,2. Benefits _ What benefits can you think of? _,Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you,1. take Chines

6、e courses 2. listen to Chinese songs& watch Chinese movies 3. make Chinese friends 4. read Chinese books 5. make a study plan and keep to it 6. practise every day,3. Suggestions _ 1)What suggestions can you give? _ _,How to give suggestions in complete sentences? You can/ should /had better do doing

7、 sth can help you It is also necessary/ important for you to do It will be helpful if you can It also works if It will be a good idea if What is most important is that,Make sentences by using the key words and the structure,1.What is most important is to chat with your Chinese friends. 徐新蕾 2. It als

8、o works if you try to make more Chinese friends, with whom you can practise your spoken Chinese. 李宇轩,Which one is better?,1. Besides, it is necessary for you to make a study plan and follow it. Whats more 李清泉 2. To attain a high level of fluency and accuracy in a foreign language, you should make a

9、study plan and keep to it. 赵满怡,Which one is better?,What is the problem?,First, youd better set achievable targets. Second, it is also necessary for you to create a rich language environment. Whats more, it is important that you must know why you are learning Chinese. 赵岩,1. You had better take some

10、Chinese classes. The teachers can create a rich language environment in the classroom. 6郑联 2. First of all, it is very important for you to attend Chinese class because the teachers in the class can give you an adequate amount of input conveyed to you through various mediums. 7贾易宁,Appreciation,How m

11、any suggestions should you give? How to link the suggestions together? Linkings: To start with Besides In addition Whats more Most importantly,高考应用文阅卷评分标准,Possible version,Dear Jim, Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you

12、something about it. As we all know, Chinese has become one of the most important languages in the world with the rapid development of China. Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you stand out and get ahead both in your college and future career. Here I would like to give you some suggesti

13、ons on learning Chinese. To start with, it will be of great help if you can take some Chinese courses , which can ensure you an adequate amount of input in Chinese. Besides, you can make some Chinese,friends. Being able to communicate with native Chinese frequently is how you improve your spoken Chi

14、nese. Whats more, you can set achievable targets, such as listening to Chinese songs and reading Chinese newspapers or magazines to get greater comprehension. I wish you success in Chinese learning and hope you can come to Beijing soon. I am willing to be your guide. Yours, Li Hua,Dear Jim, Having k

15、nown that you have a strong interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you. Since Chinese is recognized as one of the oldest languages worldwide which carries the thousand-year history of China, there is no escaping the fact that th

16、e learning process will turn out to be rewarding and fruitful. Each character has its own unique story so that what you learn is not only the polished shape and diverse combination of the words but also the hidden culture behind the graceful sentences.,In order to start off quite smoothly, you may n

17、eed to make a learning plan elaborately. By breaking every part into pieces, you can ease the task and grasp more information efficiently. In addition, certain quantity and quality of input ensures the better output, which means that youd better seize your learning material in various forms and do more exercise in your spare time. Whats more, it is significant to keep practicing, which is the fundamental princi