作文my-school-life.ppt

1、,Composition,My School Life,2016通辽二中初三中考专项作文训练,1. Read the Title (审题）,My School Life,Teachers,Classmates,School Activities,Study,Teachers,kind,Humorous,have a strong sense of responsibility,knowledgeable,help /encourage me to improve my study,Classmates,friendly,dicuss problems together,help / encou

2、rage / support each other,clever & hardworking,Activities,sports meetings,Art Festival,attend the club,take part in different competitions,Activities,fun &interesting,useful /meaningful: To improve our abilities,relax ourselves,enrich our knowledge,help /encourage /support each other,develop our int

3、erests,2. Structure（结构）,开头 中间 结尾,My School Life,（怎么样.,（ 具体.,( 情感：期待，热爱，收获,开头,（怎么样.,interesting /enjoyable colourful & meaningful busy but pleasant have a lot of fun .,My school life,结尾,My school life,( 情感：期待，热爱，收获,I believe / l hope + 从句 How /What +感叹句,spend on sth/(in) doing sth Although 尽管 so that

4、 如此 .以致。 in order to/so that 为了 How/What (感叹句） be proud of take (an active) part in (积极）参加 be keen on=be fond of =be interested 比较级 quicker ,more exciting not only but also when 从句,884,中考英语作文评分标准,内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整.,语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。其次是语法和拼写错误，每个扣0.5

5、，动词重要大错误扣1-2分，重复错误不计；标点错误每4个扣0.5.,组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/ 俗语的情况来加分。,1. 结构, ,三段式（开头，中间，结尾）,层次,Study,Classmates,Activities,Teachers,2 . Every sentence makes sense. (Topic) 每句话都有意义,开头： School life is busy but pleasant. busy? Pleasant ? We have classes from Monday to Friday,Saturday and Su

6、dnay rest. Our grade has five classrooms and we are in the forth.We have eight lessons every day.The first lesson starts at 7:40 and we leave school at 4:15., I can see many flowers and many butterflies fly around in the gardens. _of my school also make my school life _ . I am keen on playing comput

7、er games,so l wear glasses.,2 . Every sentence makes sense. (Topic) 每句话都有意义,The beautiful scenery,much more enjoyable,3. Logical ( 逻辑性) ；承上启下,递进顺序Firstly , .Secondly, .Finally / Last but no least, . “还有，而且/另外.Besides, Whats more , Morever , Furthermore , on the one hand. on the other hand 一方面.另一方面.

8、表转折 but ,however, while/nevertheless(然而), instead of（而不是）；or (否则）,1. Logical ( 逻辑性) ；承上启下,表并列： not only.but also. , as well as , both.and. , neither .nor., either . or. , 表因果 because +从句 ，because of sth =thanks to , since = now that 既然，由于 so+ adj. + that. , such +n.+ that. , 表条件 If +从句 ，unless (除非）

9、表目的 (为了)so that +从句 ，in order to do sth,1. Logical ( 逻辑性) ；承上启下,表时间 when , while, as ,not.until ,before ,after, as soon as (一.就. ) , 表让步（al)though, even if（即使） ，even though（虽然） 结尾: In a word , 简言之/总而言之To sum up,3. Logical ( 逻辑性) ；承上启下,study activities Before： We have eight lessons in a day. I take p

10、art in a footall activity once a week. After : _a lot for us to learn in school .Some subjects are interesting for me ,while others are a bit _.However, as students,we should learn as much knowledge as possible _giving up easily. As an old saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. ”_

11、were busy with study, we still _ school activities.,boring,instead of,Although,take an active part in,Theres,1. Logical ( 逻辑性) ；承上启下, study classmates (1) _ school work is busy and tiring, l never feel _ in the company of my classmates. (2) There are a lot of lessons for us to learn in school and we

12、 have to _ much time _ study. But l feel quite _ to be with my teachers and classmates.They re _ kind and friendly _they _ my school life much _ and happier.,Although,bored,so,that,make,easier,spend,on,lucky,2. 句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合, Teachers Before: We have many teachers. They are very friendly and kind.

13、After: My teachers are all very kind and friendly .They teach me _to be a good student in school _ _ a _ person in society. Besides , they are _ knowledgable _ they make my study less boring. our study is less boring thanks to them. we can always learn a lot from them.,not only,but also,responsible,

14、so,that,2. 句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合, Teachers They teach us the knowledge and tell us how to serve in the world. After: They _ _teach us knowledge _ _ tell us how to serve the world.,not only,but also,2. 句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合, Study .activities,competitions)Although being good at them is very hard. After: Although b

15、eing good at them is very hard, we can _ our abilities by _ the difficulties. We dare to _ because we know: No Pains,no gains!,improve,challenge,overcoming,2. 句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合, Classmates Before: We have many classmates.They are much more interesting .l always play with them. After: (1) My classmates

16、are so interesting that _ _ (2) I always have a good time with my classmates because they are not only _ but also very _.,l really enjoy every minute,when l study and play with them.,friendly,encouraging,2. 句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合, Classmates My classmates are very helpful and kind. After: The time l spend with my friends really relaxes me.We discuss problems together. If someone is in trouble,we will encourage each other. Somehow l think were more than friends,more like a fa