IELTS-大作文精解5-2012.pptx

1、雅思写作,第十一讲,Tasks for today,作业改错 模考分析 Task 2 思路整理,模考分析,5A Task 1：完成良好 Task 2：个别跑题（审题不仔细） Reasons Problems caused in society 9A Task 1：个别跑题（审题不仔细） Task 2：少数跑题（题目没读懂）,模考分析,1. 开头非常重要。一定要做到通顺准确，避免重大的语法用词错误！,In the present age, people do not show enough respect to the older people in many countries（转述题目）.

2、I would like to analyze the factors that contribute to this phenomenon and the problems it might cause in society in this essay.,注意事项：,Insomecountries,theparentsexpectchildrentospendlongtimestudyingboth inandafterschoolandhavelessfreetime. Doyouthinkithaspositiveornegative effectsonchildrenandthe so

3、ciety they live in?,Task 2: It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school? To what extent do you agree or disagree?,练习：开头两段主体段的主题句结论,Task 1：注意如果图表是两或三个不同的年份（主要是柱形图和饼图），第一段时间状语不要写“fromto”，要写成“in and ”。（剑三3

4、, 剑七4, 剑八2）,An eye-catching introductory paragraph is too difficult and time-consuming for most students!,模考分析,Task 2 思路整理,解释类 看清楚每一个问题，逐一回答。,Task 2 思路整理,辩论类1：Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 先讨论双方观点，再给出自己的看法。,Task 2 思路整理,其余三类 To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you think it is

5、a positive or negative development? (Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and society they live in?) Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?,这三种辩论类题型的共性：,To what extent do you agree or disagree? Overall, I agree/disagree with the opinion that （从句，转述题目）. I woul

6、d like to explain why I hold this opinion in the following essay (可有可无） . Is it a positive or negative development? Overall, I think it is a positive/negative development to （不定式短语，转述题目）. I would like to explain why I hold this opinion in the following essay（可有可无）. Do you think the advantages outwei

7、gh the disadvantages? Overall, I think there are more advantages of （名词短语，转述题目） than disadvantages. I would like to explain why I hold this opinion in the following essay（可有可无）.,I. 在第一段就要提出自己明确的观点。,II. 主体段落分三段论证：两正一反或两反一正，或按照内容分段。,III. 结论段重申自己的观点。,Agree/disagree（题目本身只有一部分内容）,It is important to ensur

8、e that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school? To what extent do you agree or disagree?,例1,太具体，适合放到主体段落里,Agree/disagree（题目本身只有一部分内容）,Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent d

9、o you agree or disagree?,例2,Overall, I disagree with the opinion that the media should not report details of crimes to the public. I would like to explain why I hold this view in the following essay. First of all, the primary responsibility of the media is to report the sheer truth to the public, in

10、stead of something that blurs the fact. Unless the media is allowed to report the details of a crime, the public will not be able to know the truth of the whole process, and thus they may well feel that they are cheated of some important things. Moreover, the details of a crime will help people get

11、the necessary knowledge about what the criminals might do in similar cases. This is of great importance to the public, as they can learn in advance what they should do and what they should not do when they have to protect themselves against the brutal criminals in some dangerous circumstances. Of co

12、urse, there are some people who worry that the detailed description of a crime might teach those with an evil intention the possible techniques of committing a crime and thus help them carry out their criminal acts. However, if the criminal report were a text book, the public might benefit more from

13、 it. In addition, there are many other ways for the potential criminals to learn the methods, such as from those popular detective stories. Therefore, the media should not be solely blamed for that matter. In conclusion, even if there might be some negative effects of reporting the details of a crim

14、e over the media, they should not be blocked out from the public. The essential duty of the press is to tell the truth, anyway. (284 words),范文,反证,延伸,反驳举例,Is it a positive or negative development?,Now more and more workplaces like to employ an equal number of male and female workers. Do you think it

15、is a positive or negative development?,例,Overall, I think it is a positive development to employ an equal number of males and females in the workplace. I will explain why I hold this opinion in the following essay. First of all, it indicates that our society is making progress in gender equality. Un

16、like in the past, when people generally thought that the most suitable positions for women were housewives and mothers, now we can see more and more women taking various important positions in virtually all walks of life. With the increase in the job opportunities for women, they are no longer discr

17、iminated against by their male counterparts. Moreover, the workplace will also benefit from doing so, because, as is generally accepted, the efficiency rises when different genders work together. Due to psychological factors, men tend to perform better in the presence of their female partners, and v

18、ice versa. For the same reason, they will also be more willing to go to work and be more devoted to their job than if the company comprises only one gender of employees. Of course, there are some jobs which are not suitable for most women to do, such as some heavy physical work. Likewise, women may

19、be particularly interested in some kinds of jobs, like teaching or nursing, and show less enthusiasm for some others. In this case, it is not advisable for the workplace to insist on taking equal numbers of men and women, regardless of the candidates real strength and interest. However, in the field

20、s where women are both physically and mentally competent, they should not be deprived of equal opportunities. In conclusion, I believe there are more benefits than harms if the equivalence of different genders is taken into consideration in recruiting new members to a workplace, and meanwhile, other

21、 factors, like the job applicants physical condition, interest, and competence, cannot be ignored, either.,范文,对比,引用理论,举例,反驳,Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?,Some people think the advantages of international tourism outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or dis

22、agree?,Overall, I agree that there are more advantages of international tourism than disadvantages. I will explain why I hold this opinion in the following essay. The main benefit of international tourism is quite obvious. When one travels abroad, he will meet people from probably every part of the

23、world. By talking with them, he gets to know their cultures and lifestyles, which may be totally different from his own. At the same time, he will also see countless numbers of new things that he has never seen before. All this helps to enrich his experience and broaden his horizon. Moreover, in a f

24、oreign country, the traveler will be so absorbed in the exotic sceneries that he may forget about all his worries and anxieties, though only temporarily. Therefore, international travelling is regarded by many people as one of the most effective ways to ease ones mind from the tedious life and work

25、at home. Of course, there are also some problems that people have to face. The most important one is the cultural differences in international tourism. For instance, when one travels to an alien country, he may know little about the local customs and taboos. In this case, he is likely to do somethin

26、g unacceptable in local peoples eye and then the journey may become a nightmare. In conclusion, international tourism is just like a double-edged weapon. When people enjoy the positive side, they also have to face the negative. But I still believe that the pros far outweigh the cons, and that if we

27、put in enough effort, we are able to eliminate the drawbacks as far as possible. (277 words),范文,Nowadays, more university students choose to study some practical subjects (such as marketing, computer programming, etc.) instead of theoretical subjects (such as economy, math, chemistry, etc.). Some pe

28、ople suggest that universities should focus on practical subjects, but not on theoretical subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,比较,文章结构,第一段：表明立场 第二段：分析更多大学生选择实用课程的原因 第三段：为什么大学的课程不能以实用课程为核心。（分析大学教育的作用） 第四段：结论,第三段 However, it never occurs to me that universities should lay more stress on

29、practical subjects than theoretical subjects only because they are what the students needs. The real function of a university, as is generally acknowledged, is to equip the students with the ability to deal with various kinds of problems. This goal, according to educationalists, can be achieved effe

30、ctively by cultivating the students capacity for their understanding of abstract theories in every specialized field, such as economics and mathematics， 结论段 In conclusion, both practical subjects and theoretical subjects are of great significance to higher education. Therefore, it is not advisable f

31、or universities to attach more importance to one than the other. What they should do is to strike a good balance between these two kinds of subjects and provide the students with a comprehensive range of education,练习,开头主体段落主题句结尾,Some people argue that the government should spend money on public serv

32、ices and facilities, but not on the arts? Do you agree or disagree? Many people may work at home with modern technology. Some people claim that it benefits only workers, but not employers. Do you agree or disagree? Some people argue that advertising is discouraging people from being different indivi

33、duals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree？ Today people are getting greedy and selfish. Some people argue that we should go back to the old days, and show respect for the family and community, so that we can make the world a better place to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to cooperate with others. Whats your opinion?,绝非预测,It is more imp