高中英语书信体应用文讲评.pptx

1、2016年高考作文（全国I卷）,假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和简历（resume).给外教Ms Jekins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format). 注意： 词数100左右 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,2017年高考作文（全国I卷）,第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,80%的英语考试作文都是书信作文，按考纲

2、要求，必须是学生熟悉的内容话题，那样才有话可写。知己知彼，百战不殆。 想得高分有两条捷径。 1.书写工整。 给人以清新感觉。 2.善于用经典句型。 给人以道高，且老练之感，不敢给你低分，恐有埋没人才之嫌。,应用文写作 书信类 （建议、倡议类）,各档次的给分范围和要求:,第五档（2125分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 覆盖所有内容要点。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（1620分） 完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 虽

3、漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5. 达到了预期的写作目的。,第三档（1115分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 5. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,第二档（610分） 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 1. 漏掉或

4、未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 5. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,第一档（15分） 未完成试题规定的任务。 1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 5. 信息未能传达给读者。,What makes a good essay?,The essay,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直

5、观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. 3.Youd better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.,Suggestions:,本次周考作文,假如你是李华，一名16岁的女生，目前在南阳一中就读。你发现很多学生压力巨大

6、，因此向某报纸编辑Peter写信，分享你的适应高中生活的办法。内容包括： 1 确定新的学习目标，养成好的习惯； 2 学会独立生活，健康生活； 3 参加课外活动，减轻压力，拓展视野； 4 处理好人际关系 注意：内容要连贯完整，可适当增添内容； 词数120左右,1 我叫李华，今年16岁，现就读于南阳一中。 2 我发现很多学生学习压力大。 3 我想给你写封信 关于我是 怎样适应高中生活。 4 我们应该确立新的学习目标，养成好的习惯。 5 我们应该学会独立生活，健康生活。 6 我们要参加活动， 减轻压力，拓展视野 7 我们 需要处理好人际关系（与同学，老师等） 8 期待您的回信！,Dear Peter

7、, I am Li Hua, a girl aged 16,presently attending Nanyang No.1 Middle School. Recently I have noticed that most of the students are under great stress. Facing such serious situations, Id like to share my advice on how to adopt to the senior high school life.,First of all, we should set goals in stud

8、y and develop good learning habits such as previewing and reviewing regularly. Besides, as we are away from parents, we are supposed to live on our own such as doing some washing and cleaning by ourselves; Furthermore, we should keep away from junk food and never get addicted to the Net. Whats more,

9、 we had better take part in after-class activities in our spare time,which will help us reduce stress and broaden our horizons. Last but not least, we need to get along well with teachers and classmates, with whom we can share whatever we have in common. I have confidence that we can get used to the

10、 senior high school life by doing so. Looking forward to your early reply as soon as possibly. Yours truly, Li Hua,1 under great stress 9 reduce stress 2 adopt to 10 get along well with 3 senior high school life. 4 set goals in 11 in common 5 be away from 12 get used to 6 get addicted to 13 Look for

11、ward to 7 take part in 14 as soon as possibly 8 spare time 15 on ones own,正确使用有关连接词,时间先后：,first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while,转折关系：,but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless ut, however, on the contrary, nevertheless,因果关系：,because, since, as, thanks to, owing to,

12、as a result of, for the reason that,让步关系：,though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that,递进关系：,whats more, in addition, furthermore besides,条件关系：,if, unless, as long as.,表 列 举：,for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows,表 总 结：,in short, in br

13、ief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated,Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and spe

14、cial. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children i

15、n rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,The paragraph,What

16、makes a good paragraph?,A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。,e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !,感叹句,强调句,e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.,e.g. Only in this way ca

17、n you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.,e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.,倒装句,省略句,with短语,e.g. In my o

18、pinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.,定语从句,e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.,各种名词性从句,e.g. Time passed quickly before

19、we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.,各种状语从句,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用what引导 2. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What surprises him is th

20、at the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,3. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用follow过去分词) 4. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 5.I wont believe what he says. （no

21、 matter what状语从句）,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,6.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of) 7.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out) 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more

22、 excited. (the morethe more),We all think highly of him .,The plan turned out to be a failure.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,高三书面表达专项训练之一 一、应用文-书信 致歉信；致谢信；笔友信；慰问信；投诉信； 邀请信；介绍信；建议信；求职信；求助信； 读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信,（一）开头段： 1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你） Dear Sir/ Mr. Smith, I was a student at your colle

23、ge, enrolled in Philosophy Department. I am a high school student from Ningbo. My name is, I am,2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友） Dear Tom, How time flies! How are you doing these days? / I hope everything is fine. / How are you getting along with.?,3. 解释写信的原因 （1）致谢： a. Thank you very much for your letter of May

24、20th b. Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks. c. l have received your kind letter of May 20th. d. It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind letter of May 20th. e. Words failed me when I tried to express my heartfelt gratitude to you yesterday.,（2）询问： I would like to obtain /re

25、quest/seek/inquire some information about I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor. I would like some detailed information on/about.,（二）结尾段： 1、发出请求（1）Please give this matter your immediate attention. （2）I would very much appreciate it ifas soon as possible.,2、提供帮助（1）I hope thesewill be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information. （2）If you should encounter any inconveniences in your life or work, do not hesitate to let me know and Ill be very glad to help you out.,3、期盼回信： （1）Im looking forward to your prompt response. （2） We look forward to your reply a