中考英语书面表达六步法.ppt

1、English Writing 英语书面表达训练 六步法,主要特点,记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明,二、对策 1背诵是个好方法 2. 基本句型的训练 (1)主语+谓语 (2)主语+系动词+表语（adj./n） (3)主+谓+宾 (4)主+谓+双宾语 (5)主+谓+宾+宾补 (6)There be,2适当使用过渡词 为了使所写短文通顺、连贯，句子与句子之间过渡自然，适当加上一些表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的过渡词是很有必要的。常见的过渡词有：,递进型：besides，whats more，let alone，to say nothing of，what was worse, moreover ev

2、en等； 解释型：that is（to say），in other words，or，in the same way，等； 转折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise, instead等； 列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally，first，at first，at last，next, 举例型：for example, such as, that is, like,等；,因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore，so，as a result，thanks to，thus，owing to，seeing that等； 让

3、步型：though，although，in spite of等； 时序型：firstnextand thenfinally，at the same time，meanwhile，firstthenafter thatfinally等； 并列型：and，or，also，as well as等；,时间型：now，just now，just then，afterwards，soon，five minutes later，before long，shortly after that，to this day，soon after supper等； 强调型：above all，indeed，surely，

4、certainly，of course，after all，at least，at most，first of all，等； 归纳总结型：in conclusion，in a word，in the end，at last，finally，to sum up, in short, in general, generally speaking, in all, in a word等； 转换话题型：by the way，Im afraid，in my opinion，to tell the truth，to be honest，after all，in fact等。,空间顺序,时间顺序,能力要求,

5、逻辑顺序,主要问题,要点不全,线索不清,原因：步骤不对,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,课堂练习,请用六步法写一篇短文,五个 “W”一个 “H”,第一步 审题,认真读题然后找出,把答案写在题

6、中相应的位置,NMET2000书面表达,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。 _About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,附图,1,2,3,4,At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman drivi

7、ng a car hit the man in the street.,第二步 抓要点,一幅图，一要点,时态直达 语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点，配动词,第三步 扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副词,第四步 连句成文,增加细节 呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,第五步 查错改错,主谓一致吗？,时态正确吗？,时态正确吗？,有“半截话”吗？,第六步 誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,作业选评,要改进吗？,为什么？,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east

8、on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,The car was so fast th

9、at the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elder hard.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yel

10、low car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to check out the old man.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,图1,图2,图3,图4,AC864,小结,审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写,作业,复习本课要

11、点 背诵精彩范文,Thank you！,请不吝赐教！,二、注意两个写作技巧 1用词造句要扬长避短 I spent two thousand yuan on the colour TV set I spent two thousand yuan in buying the colour TV set The colour TV set cost me two thousand yuan Two thousand yuan was spent on the colour TV set I paid two thousand yuan for the colour TV set I used two thousand yuan to buy the colour TV set,怎样做看图作文 一、写作技巧 1认真阅读文字说明、参考词语和画面，确定作文体裁。 2仔细观察画面，抓住题目中心。 3编写提纲。 1）描写的顺序；2）段落的安排。,二、写作实例 假若下面图画中的学生就是你，根据以下六幅图画，用英语写一篇故事。 生词：calling card名片 注意：1故事须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使故事连贯。2词数10