状语从句在写作中的应用!精品干货!.ppt

1、If the dream is big enough, the facts dont count.,如果梦想远大，就一定可以克服艰难险阻。,Welcome to Judiths class,Dear John， Its a pity that I have to say sorry to you ! It was not _ I read your letter that I knew you loved me so much and wanted to marry me , for we havent seen each other _ we parted . _ we are all bu

2、sy, I just have to drop a few lines to you. The fact that youre not good at English disappoints me , although you love me. To tell you the truth , I cant stand anyone who cannot speak English well. So _happens, Im glad to have met you, and in fact, _ time goes by, youll gradually forget me . Best wi

3、shes Alice,until,since,Now that,whatever,as,a dear John letter,Adverbial Clause,（绝交信）,1.It is not until I read your letter that I know you love me so much and want to marry me. 2. we havent seen each other since we parted . 3. Now that we are all busy, I just have to drop a few lines to you. 4.Whate

4、ver happens, Im glad to have met you. 5. As time goes by, youll gradually forget me .,I will never marry you.,高考:Never will I marry you. 四级:You are the last man I am willing to marry. 六级:Under no circumstances will I marry you. GRE: If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain si

5、ngle.,vivid,simple,写作技能提升：句子润色How to beautify the Adverbial Clause in Writing,While writing ,try to use different forms of verbs and clauses(从句) to make your essay simple, clear, vivid and full of varieties.,简明 清楚 生动 多变,2012广东高考基础写作 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。 【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物 姓 名：Allan Stewart

6、 国 籍：澳大利亚 出生日期：1915年3月7日 世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。 第一个学位：1936年获得 第二个学位：医学博士 第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。 第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。,Because he was good at arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher,学会使用复合句,参考词汇： 错别字: wrongly-written characters,要求：1. 用状语从句表达表格

7、的原因 2. 语句间要有连贯性,现象：There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions. ,2. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.,1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,3. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize

8、the new characters.,1. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,第三步：合并句子, They fail to memorize the new characters.,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,Highlights of Adverbial Clause while writing,1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换 2.高考状语从句中的倒装 3.高考状语从句中的省略 4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换 5.Some p

9、roverbs :,When I think of the trip to Shanghai , Im impressed most with Mr. Rui. He is my oral English teacher. （2012广东高考读写任务:老师影响学生的话题 ),1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换 请试试改写下面的句子吧！,(改后) Thinking of the trip to Shanghai , Im impressed most with Mr. Rui, my oral English teacher.,1.After I realized the importance o

10、f learning, I studied even harder.,Realizing the importance of learning, I studied even harder.,2.状语从句与倒装inversion,1）. I was addicted to online games. And I was even absent from school. I was _addicted to online games_ I was even absent from school.,so,that,So addicted to online games was I that I w

11、as even absent from school.,2）. She is a child. She knows a lot,Although she is a child, she knows a lot.,Child as she is, she knows a lot.,当so+adj./adv.+that句型中的so+adj./adv.放在句首时，主句谓语用部分倒装。,当as（尽管）引导让步状语，该从句的表语、状语或动词原形等习惯上要放到从句最前面。,2009年广东卷 英语作文 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况： 时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doct

12、or)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容： 1采访的时间、对象和主题； 2中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3专家解读。,原因很复杂，以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。,He also pointed that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated t

13、hat no medicine can cure short-sightedness.,He also pointed that so complicated are the causes for short-sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.,1. Dont speak until you are spoken to . 2. He was a swimmer when he was a child. 3.She stood at the gate as if she was waiting for someone

14、. 4. Ill buy a TV set if it is necessary. 5. Though it is cold, he wore a shirt.,（ ）,（ ）,（ ）,（ ）,（ ）,3.点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis,:什么时候可以省略?怎么省略? 在含有状语从句的复合句中若从句的主句是it或与主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有be时，常省略从句的主语和be。,1._ (在北京的时候), I paid a visit to the Summer Palace. 2._(除非修理), the machine is of no use. 3. _(如果有必要的话), yo

15、u can help us to do something. 4. A girl stood at the gate of the school as if _ _(跟老师讲话).,When/While in Beijing,Unless repaired,talking with a teacher,If necessary,4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换,1).I wont believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句） 2).When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe mor

16、e),No matter what he says, I wont believe.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,1. 有志者事竟成。 Wheretheresawill,theresaway. 2. 读万卷书不如行万里路 A million miles is better than a million books 3. 入乡随俗. WheninRomedoastheRomansdo. 4. 万事开头难 All things are difficult before they are easy.,5. 只要不灰心，就一定能成功. As

17、 long as you dont lose heart, youll succeed.,5.Useful proverbs:,Try to make your sentence,simple,clear,vivid,After class try to search for such beautiful and vivid sentences in your books, OK?,写作中运用状语从句时的常见错误 1.I didnt give up. Because my mother often told me, where there is a will, there is a way.”

18、 2. She worked so hard that could catch up with others. 3.Only we keep optimistic can we succeed. 4.When he hesitating, a man came up to him.,写作中状语从句的几个常见错误: 1.I didnt give up. Because my mother often told me, where there is a will, there is a way.” 2. She worked so hard that could catch up with oth

19、ers. 3.Only we keep optimistic can we succeed. 4.When he hesitating, a man came up to him.,because,she,when,was,1.只有从句，没有主句,2.从句中缺少主语,3.缺少从句的连接词,4.从句中的谓语不完整,summary： 1.先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，弄懂句子意思. 2.写作中用状语从句优化句子 3.避免使用状语从句时出现的错误. 4.研读范文中从句的使用 5.适当使用含状从的名言警句 6.Practice makes perfect!,以下是网上走红的“低碳哥”的基本情况,时间

20、：2011年 人物介绍： “低碳哥(Low-carbon Brother)”，用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人 主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。 2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低（minimum）。 3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。,【写作内容】根据以上“低碳哥”的基本情况，写一篇介绍，内容包括： 1. “低碳哥”的简要介绍及走红的时间； 2.他的主要做法及你的看法。 【写作要求】 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整， 篇章结构连贯。,Homework,To complete the exercises on the printed material.

21、To complete the composition.,2012年高考基础写作评分说明： 基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。 本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用5个句子表达写作内容所提供的全部内容。 命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够： 正确使用动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等来整合信息。 正确使用复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。,Possible version： A young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011，who sug

22、gests living a low-carbon life with actions. He always picks up some waste paper on the street ， using the blank side to write something and goes to work by bike instead of driving. Besides, while he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Some peo

23、ple think what he is doing is just a show because no one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us，but as far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy li

24、fe.,08年基础写作,背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目 1904：中断 1928：中断 1932：重回奥运会 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。,After shooting was canceled in 1904 and 1928, it returned to the Olympics in 1932.,Although shooting develops steadily now, it only includes 3 events in 1896, wh

25、ile 17 recently.,07 “谁是你的偶像”调查报告,根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容： 1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同； 5你的偶像及理由。,你的偶像及理由。,Basic writing,because,5你的偶像及理由。,As for myself, Liu Wei, an armless Pianist, is my idol because he never gives up his dreams and always insists on what he enjoys.,Liu Wei is one of the men for the