第53讲：高分作文抢眼表达法（2）

1、sqkc-25 高三一轮 第41讲 作文（3） 课后作业【例1】假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友john想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信：1、春节在中国人中的地位2、春节前，人们3、春节期间，人们参考词汇：对联couplet 爆竹firecracker【参考范文】dear john,how time flies! four moths have passed since we saw each other last time. i cannot helpbut miss you. you asked me about chinese spring festival. now i wo

2、uld like to tell yousomething about it.the spring festival is a chinese traditional festival. it is the most important and enjoyable one. a few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household. they are said to frighten away the ghosts. on that

3、 day, people are dressed up. firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival. people after a years hard work begin to relax and visit one another. presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives. families get together. they have j

4、iaozi and enjoy the new year tv show. customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.now, i hope you have some idea of chinese spring festival.best wishes,yours,li hua【例2】最近，你班同学开展了一场讨论，讨论的主题是：wealth and health请根据下表提供的信息写一篇100字左右的短文，介绍一下讨

5、论的情况。（文章的开头和结尾已给出。）一些人认为wealth另一些人认为health有钱就有了一切。想办法多多赚钱。健康更重要。要爱惜身体。个人观点：更看重健康。身体不好，再多的钱也无济于事。which is more important, wealth or health? different people have different opinions.【参考范文】wealth and healthwhich is more important, wealth or health? different people have different opinions.some people p

6、refer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing. in order to accumulate more money they can do anything. however, other people regard health as more important. once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.as far as i am concerned, i love wealt

7、h, but i value health more. everybody wants to live a happy life. so they try their best to earn money which they can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? without health money becomes meaningless. in my opi

8、nion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy. so, just do our best and keep fit.【例3】假定你是李华。david是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下： 感谢他的关注。 简要介绍相关情况。 谈谈你的感想。注意： 1词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。 2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇：环保购物袋 environment-friendly shopping bag；关注

9、 concern。 june 8dear david， yours， li hua【参考范文】june 8dear david， im glad that youve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. thank you for your concern. as too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly

10、shopping bags. these bags are made of a variety of materials that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. besides, they can be reused. more and more people in china have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them. i believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatl

11、y improve our environment. this is one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place. yours, li hua【例4】高中学习任务非常繁重，因此同学们对于参加学校活动有着不同的看法，请以taking part in school activities为题，根据下表提示，并结合自己的见闻，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。现象与看法观点与理由许多同学对参加学校活动很感兴趣1.从课本上学习并不是唯一的任务，应该争取每个机会来获得实践知识；2.长时间学习之后，

12、可以通过参加学校活动来放松自己。不少同学不愿参加学校活动1.应该充分利用时间来学习；2.学校活动与他们未来的发展没有关系。我 的 看 法 (至少两点)_参考答案：taking part in school activitiesmany students are very interested in school activities; they have their reasons. firstly, they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task. they believe that they should tak

13、e every chance to get some practical knowledge. secondly, they think that after long hours of study, they can relax themselves by taking part in school activities.however, a large group of students take little interest in them and spend most of their time on studies. first, they believe that they should make full use of time to study. second, they feel that school activities have little to do with their further development.in my opinion, i prefer th