初三书面表达专项复习.ppt

1、记 叙 文,写人,写作模板 1.对人物的肖像、言行、等进行描写，可以用以下句子开头，开门见山介绍主人公：this is I like. My friend( classmate) XXX 等 2. 选择一个角度，通过对某些事情的叙述来描写人物。 3.总结对人物的评价及感情，可用以下句子结尾： I like very much; she /he is my best friend; I love ,范文参考,我的同学 My classmate li QI is a lovely boy. He is friendly and helpful. He always offers help to o

2、thers. He is polite to everybody. He works very hard all day. He is very clever and he can solve math problems in different ways. In his spare time he often helps his parents do housework,and he loves doing sports. This is my classmate, Dont you love him?,My mother My mother is a teacher. She has be

3、en teaching for more than 20 years. She is a famous teacher. She is a kind and warm-hearted woman. She often helps her students with both their studies and their lives. She is very strict with her students. If anyone doesnt finish homework,she will get angry and asks him or her do it again and until

4、 she feels satisfied.(满意) though she is so serious sometimes,her students love her very much,and they consider her as the best teacher in the school. My mother is really a good teacher,she not only takes good care of my life,but tells me how to be an honest person and a useful man. Her students love

5、 her,so do I .,写人常用手法 外貌描写 性格描写 常用词语 Be busy doing He always does as he says 他说到做到 Help with 课本 BOOK7 A P79、 BOOK 8 B P57 人物简介,记事,写作模板 1 交代事件地点人物。为了生动，首句可用过去进行时描写情景，如：one day, Jim was walking along a road; It was raining last Sunday 2. 详述事情发生经过结果 3.发表感受。常用以下句子结尾：I will never forget the day ; I enjoy

6、 doing.; though I .I felt happy. If. I will. 等等。,范文参考,爱 There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my friends on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, some of my classmates came to se

7、e me and helped me with my lessons. So I could pass all the exams later. I was so grateful. Love is giving. Thanks to my classmates, I will do my best to give all my love to others.,范文参考,An unlucky day It was on the morning of last Monday. When I woke up, it was 7:15! I washed my face in a hurry and

8、 rushed to the school without breakfast. When I got to the school gate, I remembered my math homework had been left at home. I was very worried and I had to go back home. On my way back to school, I met a big dog, I was so frightened that I began to run. The dog chased me. I fell down and hurt the l

9、eg. when I got to school, the class had already begun. I went to my seat,but I found I took the Chinese homework by mistake! what an unlucky day! Everything went wrong.,课本 BOOK8 AP49 游记 BOOK9 P78,事理说明文,一、写景 比如描写公园或校园的场景 One summer afternoon, I went to the park . I was happy to see many birds,beautif

10、ul flowers and green trees . Two women were sitting by the lake and talking excitedly. A boy was flying a kite. Near the bridge, there were some people taking photos. It was really good to see everyone enjoying the sunshine on the beach.,二、状物 描写房间、自己喜欢的动物、玩具、礼品等等。 通过状物来表达感受。 例如：my bedroom I have a b

11、edroom. It is beautiful. Opening the door, you can see a big bed. There is a toy bear on it. I called it “Benben”. Its lovely. On the wall there are two lights. They look like mushrooms. On the left side of the bed there are a small desk. Some books are on it. This is my bedroom. It is a small world

12、 of me.,My dog If you come to my house , you will see a beautiful fat dog on my bed. Oh, dont be afraid of it. It is only a toy. It is a present for my birthday of 14. The dog is white and black. Its ears are long and wide. It is always sitting there and waiting for me. Dont you think it lovely? Wel

13、come to my house to see my toy dog. I am sure you will like it when you see it.,三、说明 1.介绍某个名胜(BOOK8上 UNIT9)、城市、学校、节日风俗礼节（BOOK9 UNIT 12)，行车路线(B7下P11)等 如：春节 The most important Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. People are very happy in the Spring Festival. They often have dinners and watch speci

14、al programs on TV with family on Lunar New Years Eve. On that day, people visit relatives and friends. Children are very happy, too. They are in new clothes, and usually get some money from elder people, which is in read paper envelope. In the Spring Festival, you can see a lot of traditional programs too, such as the lion dance or t