高中英语写作讲评.ppt

1、高中英语写作讲评,The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they dont care about their writing . There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. They cant remember the characters. The government has c

2、arried out a new policy. It will make people pay attention to Chinese. It will help students learn Chinese well. We dont have much time. Its high time that we took action. We can develop our country by improving our mother tongue first.,How do you grade it（定档）? And why?,homework show,Lets improve it

3、:,Lets improve it:,Lets improve it:,Lets improve it:,Summary:,paragraphs,topic sentence,details,to the point,advanced vocabulary,sentence patterns,linking words,structure,content,language,writing,few mistakes,目前，不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言。某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。,有的同学认为：幽默；时尚；好玩 有的同学认为：有错别字，不利于语

4、文学习；有时难以理解 你的看法： ,Nowadays, many teenagers like to use the web language in their writing. Some students think it is humorous and cool. They use the web language. They feel its fun. Some think it is difficult. They cannot understand. When they are chatting on line, they dont care about their writing.

5、 There have some wrongly-written characters. It is bad for Chinese learning. I think we can use the web language and we can express ourselves more freely.,Improve the composition. Focus on topic sentences, advanced vocabulary you can only help him find it within himself. - Galileo Galilei,Homework,F

6、urther improve the writing according to the assessment form. Make your final copy as neat as possible.,Lets divide it into parts:,Part.1,Part.2,Part.3,The computer remember the characters.,The government help students learn Chinese well.,Its high time that we by improving our mother tongue first.,Pa

7、rt 2: To deal with the situation, the government carry out a new policy.,Part 3: As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action.,Part 1: It is common that there are many wrongly-written characters in a students composition.,Come up with the topic sentences:,A topic sentence tells the re

8、ader what a certain part is about.,Topic sentence for Part 2,Topic sentence for Part 3,Topic sentence for Part 1,computer,homework,raise the awareness of,have a positive effect on,Which ending do you like best? Why?,In my opinion, the policy is beneficial to us. It makes sense in protecting our cult

9、ure. b) As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. Only by hard working can we achieve our goal., they dont care about their writing . There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many h

10、omework.,_. _, when young people chat online, they attach little importance to their writing. _, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. The new policy is intended to deal with the situation. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive

11、 effect on Chinese learning. _, its high time that we took action. _, we should refer to a dictionary for unknown characters. Second, collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal.,There are several reasons behind. B. As far as I am concerne

12、d C. For example D. Moreover. E. First of all,A,C,D,B,E,When they are chatting, they dont care their writing. Every day, they have much homework. They are too busy to remember the characters. It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well.,Can you im

13、prove them?,When they are chatting, they dont care their writing. When chatting, they dont care their writing.,(Ellipsis 省略句),Every day, they have much homework. They cant remember the characters. They have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters.,(sothat; fail to do),with,W

14、ith so much homework to do, they have trouble in remembering the characters.,It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue.,raise the awareness of,It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue.,It will help students learn Chinese well.,have a positive effect on,It will have a positive ef

15、fect on students Chinese learning.,It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.,_the awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning.,(non-verbal非谓语）,(not onlybut also),It will not only raise the awa

16、reness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.,Raising,It is common that there are many wrongly-written characters in a students composition. There are several reasons behind. For example, when chatting on line, teenagers attach little importance to their writing. Moreover, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. To deal with the situation, the government carry out a new policy. Raising the social awareness