compositionletter.ppt

1、9分,6分,24分,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,不推荐字体,优秀作文范例1,优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。,优秀作文范例2,优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。,优秀作文范例3,优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。,优秀作文范例4,优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。,How to

2、 write a composition?,高考作文指导,2011年江苏卷书面表达考试说明,1、要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等；提供的情景形式如图画、图表、提纲、信函等。 2、考生应能：根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用适当的词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。,3、看图作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也可包括其他图画、照片、图表等情景材料。考生可根据情景图示的寓意内容或情节线索，自己组织文字、进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观点。 4、作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示

3、文字做简单翻译。,、读题,、解意,、谋篇,审 题,思 路,Step1 仔细审题,1.审体裁 2.审格式 3.审内容 4.审时态 5.审人称,记叙文、说明文、应用文 议论文,书信、日记、通知（口头或书面),便条 等的开头、称呼、主体、结尾、签名,内容全面和不跑题 什么改写，什么不该写那些该详写，那些该略写 主要内容，那些是次要内容,用错人称从总分中扣3分,根据以下提示写一封建议信。 你是一名叫王华的高一学生，你们学校最近将改建运动场，你想给校长写信提供一些建议，内容如下：增加乒乓球台的数量；篮球场最好不要建在体育场门口，以免篮球砸伤过往同学；希望建立室内游泳馆；建成后，希望周末也能使用。注意：1

4、.词数150左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.开头和结尾不计入词数。,Dear headmaster, Im a senior one student. I have known that the playground of our school will be rebuilt recently._. Sincerely, Wang Hua,A letter of giving advice,写作步骤 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，

5、而不是提建议。 结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。,建议信开头常用句式,(照应材料,表明写作意图) 1After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to 3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of - 5 I am writing to share some advi

6、ce with you,建议信结尾常用句式,1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。,Step2:理清要

7、点 Step3:简写词句(动词),1.增加乒乓球台的数量,add the number of / add more,2.篮球场最好不要建在体育场门口，以免,dont build near,should be built away from,3.建立室内游泳馆,set up/build indoor pool,4.希望周末也能使用,use/make good use of,do exercise on the playground,in case hurt,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3.

8、Form a passage and polish,Step2:理清要点 Step3:简写词句(动词),1.增加乒乓球台的数量,add the number of / add more,2.篮球场最好不要建在体育场门口，以免,dont build near,should be built away from,3.建立室内游泳馆,set up/build indoor pool,4.希望周末也能使用,use/make good use of,do exercise on the playground,in case hurt,1. According to what I have seen be

9、fore, many students like to play table tennis between class, but there are not enough such tables, so please add some more tables for us.,2. It will be better if the basketball court is built away from the gate, in case the basketball hurts the students who enter or go out of the playground.,3. I ho

10、pe that an indoor pool will be set up, for swimming is not only a good kind of exercise, but also a living skill.,4. We will be very happy if we can do exercise on the new playground on weekends as well.,Step4 巧用连接,井然有序 1.however, because/since, 2.first，firstly，secondlythen， after that，in the endfin

11、ally 3.not onlybut also,Step5连句成文 Dear headmaster, Im a senior one student. I have known that the playground of our school will be rebuilt recently.,I love sports so much, so I cant help writing to you on this matter.,Here are some suggestions for the new playground.,According to what I have seen be

12、fore, many students like to play table tennis between class, but there are not enough such tables, so please add some more tables for us.,Besides,I am looking forward to you reply.,it will be better if the basketball court is built away from the gate, in case the basketball hurts the students who en

13、ter or go out of the playground.,Whats more, I hope that an indoor pool will be set up, for swimming is not only a good kind of exercise, but also a living skill.,In the end, we will be very happy if we can do exercise on the new playground on weekends as well.,Sincerely, Wang Hua,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体

14、三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,适当运用模板,假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：,参考词汇: 穿行 thread ones way 天桥 overpass,Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, i

15、t also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). Im looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua,表格作文,、读图,、解意,、谋篇,审 题,思 路,step1. introduction,step2. description + analy

16、sis,step3. solutions/conclusion/suggestions,谋篇,假如你是一名大学生，名叫李华。你所在的班级最近就“大学生是否应经济独立”的话题展开讨论，同学们发表了不同的看法。请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给某英语报社，反映讨论情况。,注意：1文章的起始句已经给出； 2词数150左右（不包括起始句）； 参考词汇： 报答: repay 学费: tuition 经济独立: financially independent,Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about _. _university students dont have to be financially independent, because_. They also think that they can _. _, _ doing part-