第60讲：高考四联图作文写作技巧（2）

1、【例五】假设你是红星中学高三（1）的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的信息，为校刊英语园地写一篇英文稿件，叙述上周六你参加学校组织的“career day”的活动过程及感受。注意：1文章的开头已为你写好。2词数不少于60。our school holds careerday once a year in march, offering us a chance to get familiar with different businesses and career optionslast saturday,【写作点拨】这四幅图都是场景，我们要写出一篇情感充沛、细节丰富的文章，务必要结文

2、章“职业发展教育”的主题，重点谈我们在每一个环节的收获。只有这样，才能将简略的场景中人物的心情描写得无比动人。_【范文赏析】our school holds career day once a year in march, offering us a chance to get familiar with different business and career options.last saturday, we arrived at the library punctually at 9am where the whole-day activities were to be held. g

3、athering at the gate , some of the students watched the arrangement on the poster hanging on the wall, trying to figure out the schedule of the day, the content seemed so attracting that we could hardly wait to step into the conference hall.coming first was a lecture given by a well-known professor

4、with the theme titled “career introduction”. impressed by not only the experienced analysis on the information of occupations of various kinds, but also, we got captured by the professors humorous tone. thus, none of us were absent-minded and took down useful tips on the note book.next came the cons

5、ulting meeting which offered us an awesome opportunity to work out our questions on job-choosing. seeking advice from the skillful consultant, we had a deeper knowledge of the vocations that we took great interests in.last but not the least, we were given a chance to experience the work under the co

6、nsultants guidance, which was really meaningful for it helped us have a better picture of our future as well as having a clearer goal.the time elapsed while we were enjoying the career day. needless to say, the life road ahead will be long, our climb will be step, but with the great passion and stro

7、ng determination, i felt sure that we will earn the valuable career through our industrious effort.【例六】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的班长李华，去年冬天你们班开展了“为西藏希望小学献爱心”的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文短文向某中学生英语报投稿，介绍你们本次献爱心活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。last winter, we carried out an activity themed “helping the children in the hope primaryscho

8、olintibet”._【范文赏析】last week, we carried out an activity themed “helping the children in the hope primary school in tibet”. in order to light the love in our heart, we held a class-meeting to share our hope. during the meeting, we watched a tv program posted by cctv news about the life in tibets hope

9、 primary school. seeing the hard life of those poor children, we all felt its our duty to change their lives. to make more people participate in this program, we wrote urging letters to call for helps. we put up the poster in the school exhibit board and handed out messages, telling everyone passing

10、 by about the unimaginable situation.after weeks of broad out works, we held a donating party in our school. its really beyond our imagination that nearly everyone in our school gave out part of their efforts. not only did we donate our pocket money, but also a lot of useful goods were donated, such

11、 as school bags and quilts.as soon as the donating party ended, we carried the goods and money, which embodied our sincerely love and hope for the poor children to the post office. when i was filling the post list, i felt so proud of my classmates and me. though the little donations from us wouldnt completely change the life of the